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十七、书面表达。(4分)
根据下列信息,以"Happy life"为题,写一篇小短文。要求:书写工整,语句通顺,不少于60个单词。
Happy life
根据下列信息,以"Happy life"为题,写一篇小短文。要求:书写工整,语句通顺,不少于60个单词。
Happy life
To live a happy life, we should have good habits, have a healthy diet and follow the traffic rules. We should get up early and go to bed early. We should keep our things clean and tidy. We should drink much water and eat many vegetables every day. We shouldn't eat much sweet food. To cross a road safely, we should look for a zebra crossing. We should look at the traffic lights and wait for the green man. We should also first look left, then right and then left again.
答案
Happy life
To live a happy life, we should have good habits, have a healthy diet and follow the traffic rules. We should get up early and go to bed early. We should keep our things clean and tidy. We should drink much water and eat many vegetables every day. We shouldn't eat much sweet food. To cross a road safely, we should look for a zebra crossing. We should look at the traffic lights and wait for the green man. We should also first look left, then right and then left again.
To live a happy life, we should have good habits, have a healthy diet and follow the traffic rules. We should get up early and go to bed early. We should keep our things clean and tidy. We should drink much water and eat many vegetables every day. We shouldn't eat much sweet food. To cross a road safely, we should look for a zebra crossing. We should look at the traffic lights and wait for the green man. We should also first look left, then right and then left again.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先要明确核心要求：主题为Happy life，需要结合表格给出的三类提示信息完成写作。首先梳理清晰写作逻辑：开篇先总述幸福生活的前提是做好三个方面——养成良好生活习惯、保持健康饮食、遵守交通规则；之后分三个模块依次对应表格里的所有提示要点，先介绍早起早睡、保持物品整洁的好习惯，再介绍多喝水、多吃蔬菜、不多吃甜食的健康饮食要求，最后介绍过马路的相关交通安全规则，把所有内容用通顺的英语句子串联，保证总词数超过60，没有语法错误即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇总领全文：直接点明想要拥有幸福生活，我们需要做到三个维度的要求，引出下文的所有内容。
2. 介绍良好生活习惯：将表格Habits列的三个要点转化为完整的陈述句，清晰罗列早睡早起、保持物品整洁的好习惯。
3. 介绍健康饮食要求：对应Diets列的内容，写出日常健康饮食的正向要求和需要避免的不良饮食习惯。
4. 介绍交通安全规则：对应Traffic列的内容，围绕安全过马路的场景，依次呈现所有交通出行的注意事项。
5. 最后通读全文，确认所有表格给出的要点都没有遗漏，语句通顺，词数满足不少于60的要求，符合写作规范。
【答案】
Happy life
To live a happy life, we should have good habits, have a healthy diet and follow the traffic rules. We should get up early and go to bed early. We should keep our things clean and tidy. We should drink much water and eat many vegetables every day. We shouldn't eat much sweet food. To cross a road safely, we should look for a zebra crossing. We should look at the traffic lights and wait for the green man. We should also first look left, then right and then left again.
【知识点】
英语话题写作
健康生活表达
交规相关短语
【点评】
本题属于提示类基础书面表达，所有写作要点都已经在表格中明确给出，不需要学生做大量自主内容拓展，重点考察学生对已学短语的整合串联能力，只要按照总-分的逻辑把三类要点依次清晰呈现，保证语句通顺、无明显语法错误，就能拿到满分，非常适合小学高段的英语写作能力考察。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先要明确核心要求：主题为Happy life，需要结合表格给出的三类提示信息完成写作。首先梳理清晰写作逻辑：开篇先总述幸福生活的前提是做好三个方面——养成良好生活习惯、保持健康饮食、遵守交通规则；之后分三个模块依次对应表格里的所有提示要点，先介绍早起早睡、保持物品整洁的好习惯，再介绍多喝水、多吃蔬菜、不多吃甜食的健康饮食要求，最后介绍过马路的相关交通安全规则，把所有内容用通顺的英语句子串联，保证总词数超过60，没有语法错误即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇总领全文：直接点明想要拥有幸福生活，我们需要做到三个维度的要求，引出下文的所有内容。
2. 介绍良好生活习惯：将表格Habits列的三个要点转化为完整的陈述句，清晰罗列早睡早起、保持物品整洁的好习惯。
3. 介绍健康饮食要求：对应Diets列的内容，写出日常健康饮食的正向要求和需要避免的不良饮食习惯。
4. 介绍交通安全规则：对应Traffic列的内容，围绕安全过马路的场景，依次呈现所有交通出行的注意事项。
5. 最后通读全文，确认所有表格给出的要点都没有遗漏，语句通顺，词数满足不少于60的要求，符合写作规范。
【答案】
Happy life
To live a happy life, we should have good habits, have a healthy diet and follow the traffic rules. We should get up early and go to bed early. We should keep our things clean and tidy. We should drink much water and eat many vegetables every day. We shouldn't eat much sweet food. To cross a road safely, we should look for a zebra crossing. We should look at the traffic lights and wait for the green man. We should also first look left, then right and then left again.
【知识点】
英语话题写作
健康生活表达
交规相关短语
【点评】
本题属于提示类基础书面表达，所有写作要点都已经在表格中明确给出，不需要学生做大量自主内容拓展，重点考察学生对已学短语的整合串联能力，只要按照总-分的逻辑把三类要点依次清晰呈现，保证语句通顺、无明显语法错误，就能拿到满分，非常适合小学高段的英语写作能力考察。
【难度系数】
0.7
