四、在活动最后的环节“悄悄话信箱”中,校长收到了许多同学的求助信件。假如你是校长Mr Wang,你收到学生Clark向你倾诉了他的烦恼的信件。请你以Mr Wang的名义用英语给他回一封信帮助他解决问题。
Dear Mr Wang,
I am a middle school student. I have many hobbies. I like playing football very much. I want to join the football team. But I can’t do it, because my parents don’t allow me to. So I often argue with my parents. Should I be allowed to make my own decisions? What should I do?
Yours,
Clark
要求:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
2. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Clark,
I have known your problem from your letter.
I’m sure you can do it well.
Yours,
Mr Wang
Dear Mr Wang,
I am a middle school student. I have many hobbies. I like playing football very much. I want to join the football team. But I can’t do it, because my parents don’t allow me to. So I often argue with my parents. Should I be allowed to make my own decisions? What should I do?
Yours,
Clark
要求:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
2. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Clark,
I have known your problem from your letter.
I’m sure you can do it well.
Yours,
Mr Wang
答案
Many teenagers have the same problem as you. I don't think arguing with your parents is helpful. Your parents might worry that playing football will influence your schoolwork. You'd better have a talk with them patiently. Tell them you will try your best to balance your study and football practice, and you won't spend too much time on it. If you can prove you are responsible enough, they will agree that you make your own decision.
解析
本题为八年级英语建议类应用文写作,写作要点如下:
1. 先共情Clark的处境,点明理解他热爱足球的心情,同时指出和父母争吵并不是解决问题的有效方式;
2. 给出贴合实际的合理建议:首先换位思考,理解父母是担心踢足球占用过多时间影响学业;其次主动和父母心平气和沟通,向他们保证会合理分配时间,兼顾好学习和足球训练,证明自己可以为自己的选择负责;
3. 行文使用符合八年级水平的句式,控制词数在80左右,不出现真实个人信息,逻辑通顺即可。
1. 先共情Clark的处境,点明理解他热爱足球的心情,同时指出和父母争吵并不是解决问题的有效方式;
2. 给出贴合实际的合理建议:首先换位思考,理解父母是担心踢足球占用过多时间影响学业;其次主动和父母心平气和沟通,向他们保证会合理分配时间,兼顾好学习和足球训练,证明自己可以为自己的选择负责;
3. 行文使用符合八年级水平的句式,控制词数在80左右,不出现真实个人信息,逻辑通顺即可。
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