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五、书面表达
今年5月16日，你校组织了一次去科技博物馆的实践活动。请你根据下图提示写一篇英语日记，记录当天的经历和感受。
注意：
1. 日记必须包括图中所有要点，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 80—100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Saturday, May 16th
Today I had a school trip.
今年5月16日，你校组织了一次去科技博物馆的实践活动。请你根据下图提示写一篇英语日记，记录当天的经历和感受。
注意：
1. 日记必须包括图中所有要点，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 80—100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Saturday, May 16th
Today I had a school trip.
I went to the Science Museum with my classmates. We took the subway to get there. When we got to the museum, we were excited. At the museum, I played chess with robots and unluckily, I lost. Then I watched a video about the history of books. It's so interesting to see how books became smaller and lighter. There were also a lot of interesting things. We learned a lot and were more interested in science. At last, we went home happily. All in all, it was an excellent trip.
答案
Today I had a school trip. I went to the Science Museum with my classmates. We took the subway to get there. When we got to the museum, we were excited. At the museum, I played chess with robots and unluckily, I lost. Then I watched a video about the history of books. It's so interesting to see how books became smaller and lighter. There were also a lot of interesting things. We learned a lot and were more interested in science. At last, we went home happily. All in all, it was an excellent trip.
解析
【分析】本题为英语日记写作题，需遵循日记格式，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 明确需涵盖思维导图的所有要点：人物（我和同学）、交通方式（地铁）、活动（和机器人下棋、看视频）、感受；2. 适当拓展活动细节（如补充视频内容），确保词数在80-100之间，不出现真实人名校名；3. 用通顺的英语语句串联内容，符合日记的语气。
【解析】承接开头，先说明和同学乘地铁去科技博物馆，接着描述活动：和机器人下棋（可提输了但有趣），再补充看关于书的历史的视频；最后表达感受，说明学到知识、是很棒的旅行，确保所有要点都包含，语句连贯。
【答案】Today I had a school trip. I went to the Science Museum with my classmates. We took the subway to get there. When we got to the museum, we were excited. At the museum, I played chess with robots and unluckily, I lost. Then I watched a video about the history of books. It's so interesting to see how books became smaller and lighter. There were also a lot of interesting things. We learned a lot and were more interested in science. At last, we went home happily. All in all, it was an excellent trip.
【知识点】英语日记写作；词汇运用；语句连贯
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查英语日记写作能力，要求学生整合给定信息并合理拓展，符合初中英语写作的考查方向，能锻炼学生的语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】承接开头，先说明和同学乘地铁去科技博物馆，接着描述活动：和机器人下棋（可提输了但有趣），再补充看关于书的历史的视频；最后表达感受，说明学到知识、是很棒的旅行，确保所有要点都包含，语句连贯。
【答案】Today I had a school trip. I went to the Science Museum with my classmates. We took the subway to get there. When we got to the museum, we were excited. At the museum, I played chess with robots and unluckily, I lost. Then I watched a video about the history of books. It's so interesting to see how books became smaller and lighter. There were also a lot of interesting things. We learned a lot and were more interested in science. At last, we went home happily. All in all, it was an excellent trip.
【知识点】英语日记写作；词汇运用；语句连贯
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查英语日记写作能力，要求学生整合给定信息并合理拓展，符合初中英语写作的考查方向，能锻炼学生的语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6
