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三、书面表达。
在茫茫人海中，能够遇到好朋友也是一种缘分和幸运。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 David 想要了解你最好的朋
友。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封信，向他介绍你最好的朋友。可适当发挥，不少于 80 词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
写作要点：
1. Introduce your best friend.
2. Share a story that happened between you and your best friend.
3. Talk about your feelings about the friendship between you two.
Dear David,
I'm so happy to hear from you! I'd like to introduce my best friend to you.
Please write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
在茫茫人海中，能够遇到好朋友也是一种缘分和幸运。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 David 想要了解你最好的朋
友。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封信，向他介绍你最好的朋友。可适当发挥，不少于 80 词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
写作要点：
1. Introduce your best friend.
2. Share a story that happened between you and your best friend.
3. Talk about your feelings about the friendship between you two.
Dear David,
I'm so happy to hear from you! I'd like to introduce my best friend to you.
My best friend is Tara. She is of medium height with long straight black hair and a friendly smile. She is really kind and always ready to help others. In our free time, we both love reading books and doing sports.
Last term, I failed an important maths exam and was really down. Tara noticed my sadness. She spent the whole weekend helping me go over the difficult maths problems. With her help, I made great progress in the next exam.
She is like a light in the dark, bringing me warmth and hope. I feel so lucky to have such a wonderful friend. I believe our friendship will last forever.
Please write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
My best friend is Tara. She is of medium height with long straight black hair and a friendly smile. She is really kind and always ready to help others. In our free time, we both love reading books and doing sports.
Last term, I failed an important maths exam and was really down. Tara noticed my sadness. She spent the whole weekend helping me go over the difficult maths problems. With her help, I made great progress in the next exam.
She is like a light in the dark, bringing me warmth and hope. I feel so lucky to have such a wonderful friend. I believe our friendship will last forever.
Last term, I failed an important maths exam and was really down. Tara noticed my sadness. She spent the whole weekend helping me go over the difficult maths problems. With her help, I made great progress in the next exam.
She is like a light in the dark, bringing me warmth and hope. I feel so lucky to have such a wonderful friend. I believe our friendship will last forever.
解析
【分析】
首先审题，明确写作任务是给英国笔友David介绍自己最好的朋友，需覆盖三个核心要点：介绍朋友基本情况、分享与朋友的故事、表达对友谊的感受；其次确定书信结构，开头已给出，中间围绕三个要点展开，结尾固定；最后注意语言要符合书信的亲切语气，适当补充细节，确保字数达标。
【解析】
1. 介绍朋友：先点明朋友名字，描述外貌（中等身高、长直黑发、友好笑容），性格（善良、乐于助人），爱好（读书、运动）；2. 分享故事：选取具体事例（如数学考试失利，朋友周末帮忙复习，后续考试进步）；3. 表达感受：将朋友比作黑暗中的光，传递温暖与希望，表达对友谊的珍视和长久的期盼，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【答案】
My best friend is Tara. She is of medium height with long straight black hair and a friendly smile. She is really kind and always ready to help others. In our free time, we both love reading books and doing sports.
Last term, I failed an important maths exam and was really down. Tara noticed my sadness. She spent the whole weekend helping me go over the difficult maths problems. With her help, I made great progress in the next exam.
She is like a light in the dark, bringing me warmth and hope. I feel so lucky to have such a wonderful friend. I believe our friendship will last forever.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、人物介绍、英语叙事写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，内容充实且有具体事例支撑，情感表达真挚自然，语言准确流畅，符合初中英语书面表达的规范，是一篇优秀的范文，能为学生提供清晰的写作思路与范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先审题，明确写作任务是给英国笔友David介绍自己最好的朋友，需覆盖三个核心要点：介绍朋友基本情况、分享与朋友的故事、表达对友谊的感受；其次确定书信结构，开头已给出，中间围绕三个要点展开，结尾固定；最后注意语言要符合书信的亲切语气，适当补充细节，确保字数达标。
【解析】
1. 介绍朋友：先点明朋友名字，描述外貌（中等身高、长直黑发、友好笑容），性格（善良、乐于助人），爱好（读书、运动）；2. 分享故事：选取具体事例（如数学考试失利，朋友周末帮忙复习，后续考试进步）；3. 表达感受：将朋友比作黑暗中的光，传递温暖与希望，表达对友谊的珍视和长久的期盼，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【答案】
My best friend is Tara. She is of medium height with long straight black hair and a friendly smile. She is really kind and always ready to help others. In our free time, we both love reading books and doing sports.
Last term, I failed an important maths exam and was really down. Tara noticed my sadness. She spent the whole weekend helping me go over the difficult maths problems. With her help, I made great progress in the next exam.
She is like a light in the dark, bringing me warmth and hope. I feel so lucky to have such a wonderful friend. I believe our friendship will last forever.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、人物介绍、英语叙事写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，内容充实且有具体事例支撑，情感表达真挚自然，语言准确流畅，符合初中英语书面表达的规范，是一篇优秀的范文，能为学生提供清晰的写作思路与范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
