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七、书面表达
时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化吧。请以“I Have Changed a Lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化以及这个变化是如何发生的。
要求：
1. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息；
2. 词数100左右。
提示：
1. What did you use to be like?
2. What is the most important change?
3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it.
I Have Changed a Lot!
时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化吧。请以“I Have Changed a Lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化以及这个变化是如何发生的。
要求：
1. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息；
2. 词数100左右。
提示：
1. What did you use to be like?
2. What is the most important change?
3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it.
I Have Changed a Lot!
答案
One possible version：
I Have Changed a Lot!
Time goes by. Three years have passed and I have changed a lot. Let me show you my changes.
I used to be really short and thin, and I used to be shy and quiet. I was always silent in class. But now I have changed greatly. One of my most important changes is that I have become more outgoing. What made me change so much? I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school. I wanted to take part in it, but I was afraid of it. Our English teacher, Mr Wang encouraged me to take part in it. He offered me much advice, and I practiced a lot every day. Finally, I won first prize in the speech contest. I felt very proud and happy. Since then, I have become more outgoing.
I Have Changed a Lot!
Time goes by. Three years have passed and I have changed a lot. Let me show you my changes.
I used to be really short and thin, and I used to be shy and quiet. I was always silent in class. But now I have changed greatly. One of my most important changes is that I have become more outgoing. What made me change so much? I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school. I wanted to take part in it, but I was afraid of it. Our English teacher, Mr Wang encouraged me to take part in it. He offered me much advice, and I practiced a lot every day. Finally, I won first prize in the speech contest. I felt very proud and happy. Since then, I have become more outgoing.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“I Have Changed a Lot!”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文，需涵盖三个提示点：过去的性格、最重要的变化、变化发生的具体故事。解题思路：首先确定核心变化为从害羞内向变为外向开朗；其次选取八年级参加英语演讲比赛的具体事例，结合老师鼓励、自身练习获奖的经历说明变化的原因；最后按“点题→过去状态→变化及原因→总结”的结构组织内容，注意使用正确时态（过去时描述过去经历，现在时描述现状），避免真实人名、校名，控制词数。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头点明主题，说明初中三年变化大；2. 描述过去的自己：害羞、沉默，课堂上不发言；3. 阐述最重要的变化：变得外向；4. 讲述变化的故事：八年级学校举办英语演讲比赛，老师鼓励自己参加，经练习获奖后变得开朗；5. 结尾呼应变化，确保语言通顺、符合词数要求。
【答案】
I Have Changed a Lot!
Time goes by. Three years have passed and I have changed a lot. Let me show you my changes.
I used to be really short and thin, and I used to be shy and quiet. I was always silent in class. But now I have changed greatly. One of my most important changes is that I have become more outgoing. What made me change so much? I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school. I wanted to take part in it, but I was afraid of it. Our English teacher, Mr Wang encouraged me to take part in it. He offered me much advice, and I practiced a lot every day. Finally, I won first prize in the speech contest. I felt very proud and happy. Since then, I have become more outgoing.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、时态运用
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示内容，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，通过具体事例生动展现了自身的变化，语言符合初中英语水平，是一篇优秀的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求以“I Have Changed a Lot!”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文，需涵盖三个提示点：过去的性格、最重要的变化、变化发生的具体故事。解题思路：首先确定核心变化为从害羞内向变为外向开朗；其次选取八年级参加英语演讲比赛的具体事例，结合老师鼓励、自身练习获奖的经历说明变化的原因；最后按“点题→过去状态→变化及原因→总结”的结构组织内容，注意使用正确时态（过去时描述过去经历，现在时描述现状），避免真实人名、校名，控制词数。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头点明主题，说明初中三年变化大；2. 描述过去的自己：害羞、沉默，课堂上不发言；3. 阐述最重要的变化：变得外向；4. 讲述变化的故事：八年级学校举办英语演讲比赛，老师鼓励自己参加，经练习获奖后变得开朗；5. 结尾呼应变化，确保语言通顺、符合词数要求。
【答案】
I Have Changed a Lot!
Time goes by. Three years have passed and I have changed a lot. Let me show you my changes.
I used to be really short and thin, and I used to be shy and quiet. I was always silent in class. But now I have changed greatly. One of my most important changes is that I have become more outgoing. What made me change so much? I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school. I wanted to take part in it, but I was afraid of it. Our English teacher, Mr Wang encouraged me to take part in it. He offered me much advice, and I practiced a lot every day. Finally, I won first prize in the speech contest. I felt very proud and happy. Since then, I have become more outgoing.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、时态运用
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示内容，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，通过具体事例生动展现了自身的变化，语言符合初中英语水平，是一篇优秀的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
