写作方法提优
精研高分写作范式
掌握考场实战技法
D10
同学们，本单元我们围绕“如何庆祝节日”展开学习，掌握了in、on、at、before等时间表达，还学会了介绍不同节日的活动和食物。现在让我们来写一写自己最喜欢的节日吧。
写作思路

例题演练
右图是Linda最喜欢的节日。假如你是Linda，请根据图片提示，并发挥想象，介绍一下这个节日。要求不少于6句话，注意书写准确规范。

范文展示
My favourite festival is Children's Day. It's a special day just for kids.
Children's Day falls on June 1st every year. On this day, we hold parties at school and play fun games with friends. The best part? We don't have any homework! In the evening, we enjoy a big dinner with our parents, and we also get lots of lovely presents.
I really look forward to Children's Day. What about you? Do you like it too?
小试身手

My favourite festival is Children's Day. It is a special and happy day for every kid.
It is on June 1st every year. On this day, we have a lovely party at school. We play interesting games with our classmates and we all feel very happy. We don't have any homework on Children's Day. In the evening, my parents make a big delicious dinner for me. I can also get my favourite toy as a gift from them. I like Children's Day so much. What's your favourite festival?

【分析】本题要求以Linda的身份介绍自己最喜欢的节日，需结合单元所学的时间表达（in、on等）、节日活动与食物的相关表达，写作时应遵循“点明节日→说明时间→描述当日活动→表达情感”的思路：首先点明最喜欢的节日及意义，接着用正确的时间介词说明节日时间，再具体描述节日当天的活动安排（学校活动、家庭活动），最后表达对节日的喜爱并适当互动，确保语句通顺、不少于6句，书写规范。
【解析】写作时按照以下步骤组织内容：1. 开篇点明最喜欢的节日是儿童节，说明其是孩子的特殊快乐节日；2. 用时间介词on说明儿童节的时间（每年6月1日）；3. 描述当日活动：在学校举办可爱的派对，和同学玩有趣的游戏，当天没有作业；4. 介绍晚上的安排：父母做美味大餐，收到喜欢的玩具礼物；5. 结尾表达对儿童节的喜爱并提问互动，确保符合字数要求，语法准确。
【答案】My favourite festival is Children's Day. It is a special and happy day for every kid.
It is on June 1st every year. On this day, we have a lovely party at school. We play interesting games with our classmates and we all feel very happy. We don't have any homework on Children's Day. In the evening, my parents make a big delicious dinner for me. I can also get my favourite toy as a gift from them. I like Children's Day so much. What's your favourite festival?
【知识点】英语节日写作、时间介词运用
【点评】本题围绕单元核心话题“节日介绍”展开，考查学生对时间表达、节日活动描述的综合运用能力，结合范例引导学生完成写作，符合单元写作提优的目标，能帮助学生巩固相关知识点并提升考场写作的规范性。
【难度系数】0.6

魅力中国，代言有我。作为中华文化小使者，
请你以传统文化代言人的身份，在交流会上根据思
维导图介绍你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
要求:1. 不少于 40 词;2. 注意书写准确规范。

My Favourite Festival

My Favourite Festival
My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It usually comes in May or June. On this day, people have dragon boat races and eat zongzi. I like watching the exciting races with my family. We also make zongzi together. I feel very happy and proud of our traditional culture during this festival.

【分析】首先明确题目要求：以传统文化代言人身份，根据思维导图的四个问题（是什么、什么时候、做什么、感受如何）介绍最喜欢的中国传统节日，不少于40词。解题思路：1. 选择熟悉的中国传统节日（如端午节）；2. 对应思维导图的四个问题依次作答，将内容串联成通顺的短文；3. 确保书写准确，满足词数要求，体现对传统文化的介绍。
【解析】1. 开篇点明最喜欢的节日是端午节；2. 说明节日的时间；3. 介绍节日的活动，包括传统活动和自己的参与内容；4. 表达自己在节日中的感受，将这些内容连贯组织，形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】My Favourite Festival
My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It usually comes in May or June. On this day, people have dragon boat races and eat zongzi. I like watching the exciting races with my family. We also make zongzi together. I feel very happy and proud of our traditional culture during this festival.
【知识点】英语写作、节日表达、传统文化介绍
【点评】本题结合思维导图结构，考查学生用英语介绍中国传统节日的能力，既要求语言准确规范，又渗透了传统文化教育，符合主题要求，能锻炼学生的语言组织和文化表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5