十三 书面表达。(7分)
假如你是Amy,最近收到英国好友Jenny的电子邮件。Jenny随家人搬到新城市后进入一所新学校,但她感到不适应。她在邮件中向你表达她的难过和担忧,请你根据提示内容用英语写一封回信安慰她并给她提一些建议。邮件开头和结尾已给出。
要求:不少于5句话。包含以下提示要点,可适当发挥。
提示:1. smile at others 2. talk to your teachers and parents 3. take part in(参加) more group activities
Dear Jenny,
I am sorry to hear that you feel bad.
Yours,
Amy
假如你是Amy,最近收到英国好友Jenny的电子邮件。Jenny随家人搬到新城市后进入一所新学校,但她感到不适应。她在邮件中向你表达她的难过和担忧,请你根据提示内容用英语写一封回信安慰她并给她提一些建议。邮件开头和结尾已给出。
要求:不少于5句话。包含以下提示要点,可适当发挥。
提示:1. smile at others 2. talk to your teachers and parents 3. take part in(参加) more group activities
Dear Jenny,
I am sorry to hear that you feel bad.
Yours,
Amy
答案
参考范文:
Dear Jenny,
I am sorry to hear that you feel bad. Don't be worried. You can smile at others when you meet them. It makes you look friendly. You can also talk to your teachers and parents when you have trouble. They are always there to help you. What's more, you can take part in more group activities. You can meet new people and make new friends there. I hope you will feel better soon.
Yours,
Amy
Dear Jenny,
I am sorry to hear that you feel bad. Don't be worried. You can smile at others when you meet them. It makes you look friendly. You can also talk to your teachers and parents when you have trouble. They are always there to help you. What's more, you can take part in more group activities. You can meet new people and make new friends there. I hope you will feel better soon.
Yours,
Amy
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,需以Amy的身份给新学校不适应的好友Jenny写回信,核心是安慰对方并给出符合提示的建议。首先要承接开头的安慰语,接着依次落实三个提示要点:对他人微笑、与老师父母沟通、参加小组活动,每个要点可补充简单理由让内容更饱满,最后表达祝福,确保句子不少于5句,语言通顺符合书信格式。
【解析】
1. 承接开头的安慰,用“Don't be worried.”进一步安抚Jenny的情绪;
2. 落实第一个提示“smile at others”,补充说明微笑能让自己看起来友好;
3. 落实第二个提示“talk to your teachers and parents”,说明遇到困难时找他们帮忙;
4. 落实第三个提示“take part in more group activities”,补充能在活动中认识新朋友;
5. 最后用祝福句收尾,确保内容完整、符合要求。
【答案】
参考范文:
Dear Jenny,
I am sorry to hear that you feel bad. Don't be worried. You can smile at others when you meet them. It makes you look friendly. You can also talk to your teachers and parents when you have trouble. They are always there to help you. What's more, you can take part in more group activities. You can meet new people and make new friends there. I hope you will feel better soon.
Yours,
Amy
【知识点】
英语书信写作、英语建议表达
【点评】
本题考查学生运用英语进行日常交际(安慰与提建议)的书面表达能力,贴近学生生活场景,有明确的提示要点,要求清晰,难度适中,能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题,需以Amy的身份给新学校不适应的好友Jenny写回信,核心是安慰对方并给出符合提示的建议。首先要承接开头的安慰语,接着依次落实三个提示要点:对他人微笑、与老师父母沟通、参加小组活动,每个要点可补充简单理由让内容更饱满,最后表达祝福,确保句子不少于5句,语言通顺符合书信格式。
【解析】
1. 承接开头的安慰,用“Don't be worried.”进一步安抚Jenny的情绪;
2. 落实第一个提示“smile at others”,补充说明微笑能让自己看起来友好;
3. 落实第二个提示“talk to your teachers and parents”,说明遇到困难时找他们帮忙;
4. 落实第三个提示“take part in more group activities”,补充能在活动中认识新朋友;
5. 最后用祝福句收尾,确保内容完整、符合要求。
【答案】
参考范文:
Dear Jenny,
I am sorry to hear that you feel bad. Don't be worried. You can smile at others when you meet them. It makes you look friendly. You can also talk to your teachers and parents when you have trouble. They are always there to help you. What's more, you can take part in more group activities. You can meet new people and make new friends there. I hope you will feel better soon.
Yours,
Amy
【知识点】
英语书信写作、英语建议表达
【点评】
本题考查学生运用英语进行日常交际(安慰与提建议)的书面表达能力,贴近学生生活场景,有明确的提示要点,要求清晰,难度适中,能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
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