三、教材佳句仿写·核心句式训练
1. 教材原句:Her artificial arm was just a simple hook, but it cost 80,000.
仿写:它就跟一本书一样大,却能保存上百本电子书。
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2. 教材原句:I must lend a hand to people like her.
仿写:很多人通过这个软件来帮助盲人。
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3. 教材原句:It was able to move with brain signals of the user.
仿写:它能够通过颤动提醒使用者注意周围的物体。
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1. It is just as big as a book, but it can save hundreds of e-books.
2. Plenty of people use this app to lend a hand to the blind.
3. It is able to warn the user about the nearby objects by shaking.

【分析】
本题为教材核心句式仿写题，需先明确每个小题对应原句的结构、核心短语及语义逻辑：第1题对应原句“just...but...”的转折结构，需将中文“跟一本书一样大”译为as big as a book，“保存上百本电子书”译为save hundreds of e-books；第2题对应原句核心短语“lend a hand to”（帮助），需将“很多人”译为plenty of people，“软件”译为app，“盲人”译为the blind；第3题对应原句“be able to do sth by...”的方式结构，需将“通过颤动”译为by shaking，“提醒使用者注意周围的物体”译为warn the user about the nearby objects，确保符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 对应原句“just...but...”转折结构，结合中文语义，正确仿写为：It is just as big as a book, but it can save hundreds of e-books.
2. 对应原句核心短语“lend a hand to”，结合中文语义，正确仿写为：Plenty of people use this app to lend a hand to the blind.
3. 对应原句“be able to do sth by...”的方式结构，结合中文语义，正确仿写为：It is able to warn the user about the nearby objects by shaking.
【答案】
1. It is just as big as a book, but it can save hundreds of e-books.
2. Plenty of people use this app to lend a hand to the blind.
3. It is able to warn the user about the nearby objects by shaking.
【知识点】
英语句式仿写、常用动词短语、方式状语表达
【点评】
本题聚焦教材核心句式的仿写训练，需准确匹配原句的结构、短语搭配及中文语义，难度适中，适合巩固基础句式运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6

四、典例剖析·主题写作行文指导
[2025西安市曲江第一中学五模改编]为践行科教兴国战略,培养创新型科技人才,在日常学习生活中激发学生的发明和创新精神,某国际中学将举行中学生科技创新大赛。假如你是李华,准备参加本次大赛,请你以“I want to invent ”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你想发明的物品。内容包括:时态:以一般将来时为主
语篇类型:说明文 人称:以第三人称为主

参考词汇:be used for, look like, convenient(方便的), make a difference to…
要求:
1.请先补全标题,再写正文内容;
2.正文必须包含思维导图中的要点信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯、语句通顺;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名等);
4.词数80左右,部分内容已给出,不计入总词数。
I want to invent
An invention competition will be held in our school. I can't wait to take part in it.

Step 1 谋篇布局指导
开头:点明物品,说明原因/目的
①I decide/want to invent… to…
②It troubles me a lot to … while learning a foreign language.
③The trouble of… leads me to the idea of inventing…
主体:介绍外观及用途
①The invention is made from/of…
②It looks (just) like…
③What’s worse, students sometimes do not understand…
④We can solve the problems by…
⑤It changes the way of…
⑥This invention allows people to…
结尾:表达感受与期待
①With the help of this invention, we are able to…
②I believe it will help/make…
③… will be more enjoyable.
Step 2 高阶表达应用
This pen looks like a normal pen. It will have a built-in dictionary and translation function.(用适当的连词/副词增强语气)

Step 3 佳作展示评析
I want to invent a special pen
An invention competition will be held in our school. I can't wait to take part in it. I want to invent a special pen to help students learn better.
This pen looks just like a normal pen, but it will have a built-in dictionary and translation function, allowing students to look up words and translate sentences①. Write a sentence in your native language, and then double tap the pen. It will retell your text in over 10 languages. For example, write “hello” in English, and it becomes “hola” in Spanish②!
I believe this pen will greatly improve students' learning experiences and make studying more enjoyable.
①副词just和连词but使逻辑关系清晰明了,增强了上下文的对比效果。
②以For example引出具体实例,使文章更有说服力。

Step 2 高阶表达应用
This pen looks just like a normal pen, but it will have a built-in dictionary and translation function.

【分析】本题考查英语写作中连接词与修饰副词的恰当运用，解题思路为：先明确两个分句的逻辑关系——前半句描述发明的外观特征，后半句介绍其特殊功能，二者存在转折对比关系；再选择合适的副词修饰外观描述，强化对比效果，最后用恰当的连词连接分句，使表达更具逻辑性。
【解析】首先，两个分句中，前半句说明发明“像普通笔”的外观，后半句说明其“内置词典和翻译功能”的特殊属性，二者为转折关系，需用转折连词but连接；其次，添加副词just修饰like，突出“看似普通”的效果，强化外观与功能的反差，最终组合成符合要求的句子。
【答案】This pen looks just like a normal pen, but it will have a built-in dictionary and translation function.
【知识点】英语写作、连词与副词的运用
【点评】本题聚焦英语写作的高阶表达技巧，通过添加副词和连词提升语篇的逻辑性与对比效果，帮助学生掌握更地道的英语写作方式，是提升写作水平的基础练习。
【难度系数】0.5