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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D13
假如你是李华，你所在班级的英语课上组织了一场“最美家庭（The Most Beautiful Family）”的评选活动。请根据以下提示，向英语老师写一封推荐信，推荐你的家庭。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实的人名,注意人称；
2.必须包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥；
3.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整；
4.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for “The Most Beautiful Family” in our class.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你所在班级的英语课上组织了一场“最美家庭（The Most Beautiful Family）”的评选活动。请根据以下提示，向英语老师写一封推荐信，推荐你的家庭。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实的人名,注意人称；
2.必须包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥；
3.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整；
4.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for “The Most Beautiful Family” in our class.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes playing sports.
My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us.
I'm tall and outgoing. I am a student and I love to play sports.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
第5课时 主题写作专项
基础版范文
Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes playing sports. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I'm tall and outgoing. I am a student and I love to play sports.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class.
There are three people in my family. My father is a tall and strong man with short black hair. He is outgoing and talented in playing sports. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind. She loves cooking delicious meals for us when she is free. I'm a tall and outgoing boy. I am a student who loves sports. I often play sports with my classmates after school.
There are a lot of fun things we do together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
基础版范文
Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes playing sports. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I'm tall and outgoing. I am a student and I love to play sports.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class.
There are three people in my family. My father is a tall and strong man with short black hair. He is outgoing and talented in playing sports. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind. She loves cooking delicious meals for us when she is free. I'm a tall and outgoing boy. I am a student who loves sports. I often play sports with my classmates after school.
There are a lot of fun things we do together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题是英语推荐信写作题，要求推荐自己的家庭参加班级“最美家庭”评选。解题思路：首先明确写作结构，需包含三部分核心内容：一是家庭成员（爸爸、妈妈和自己）的外貌、性格、兴趣等基本信息；二是一家人经常一起做的活动；三是对家人的感情。结合已给出的开头结尾，补充中间内容时，用第一人称，避免真实人名，控制词数，确保语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇：已给出，点明写信目的是推荐家庭参加评选；
2. 介绍家庭成员：分别描述爸爸（高壮、外向、爱运动）、妈妈（长发、善良、爱做饭）、自己（高、外向、爱运动）的基本信息；
3. 列举共同活动：如周末去公园散步、一起看电影；
4. 表达感情：明确表达对家人和家庭的爱；
5. 结尾：已给出，署名Li Hua。
需注意词数约70，符合要求，内容完整涵盖提示信息。
【答案】
Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes playing sports. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I'm tall and outgoing. I am a student and I love to play sports.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、家庭成员话题表达、形容词运用
【点评】
本题结合校园主题活动，考查学生的英语写作能力，要求整合提示信息，内容贴近生活，结构清晰，是基础写作的典型题型，能锻炼学生的话题组织和语言表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题是英语推荐信写作题，要求推荐自己的家庭参加班级“最美家庭”评选。解题思路：首先明确写作结构，需包含三部分核心内容：一是家庭成员（爸爸、妈妈和自己）的外貌、性格、兴趣等基本信息；二是一家人经常一起做的活动；三是对家人的感情。结合已给出的开头结尾，补充中间内容时，用第一人称，避免真实人名，控制词数，确保语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇：已给出，点明写信目的是推荐家庭参加评选；
2. 介绍家庭成员：分别描述爸爸（高壮、外向、爱运动）、妈妈（长发、善良、爱做饭）、自己（高、外向、爱运动）的基本信息；
3. 列举共同活动：如周末去公园散步、一起看电影；
4. 表达感情：明确表达对家人和家庭的爱；
5. 结尾：已给出，署名Li Hua。
需注意词数约70，符合要求，内容完整涵盖提示信息。
【答案】
Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes playing sports. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I'm tall and outgoing. I am a student and I love to play sports.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、家庭成员话题表达、形容词运用
【点评】
本题结合校园主题活动，考查学生的英语写作能力，要求整合提示信息，内容贴近生活，结构清晰，是基础写作的典型题型，能锻炼学生的话题组织和语言表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.3
