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如今，很多人喜欢在互联网上点餐。老师要求你们在下周一的英语课上就互联网点餐这一现象，谈谈它的利与弊。请你根据写作要求，谈谈你的看法。
写作要求：(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3)词数70左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Ordering Food Online，Good or Bad?
Nowadays，many people like ordering food online. Is it good or bad?
Value statement：Food is life.
写作要求：(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3)词数70左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Ordering Food Online，Good or Bad?
Nowadays，many people like ordering food online. Is it good or bad?
Some people think it's good to order food online because it is convenient and fast. It can help save time. Also, the food is cheap and delicious. Besides, we have many kinds of food to choose from. However, other people have different ideas. They say eating takeaway too often is bad for health, because takeaway may not be fresh food. And the plastic bags of the food are bad for the environment. I think we can order food online sometimes, but not too often.
Value statement：Food is life.
答案
【参考范文】
Ordering Food Online, Good or Bad?
Nowadays, many people like ordering food
online. Is it good or bad?
Some people think it's good to order food
online because it is convenient and fast. It can
help save time. Also, the food is cheap and
delicious. Besides, we have many kinds of food to
choose from.
However, other people have different ideas.
They say eating takeaway too often is bad for
health, because takeaway may not be fresh food.
And the plastic bags of the food are bad for the
environment.
I think we can order food online sometimes,
but not too often.
Ordering Food Online, Good or Bad?
Nowadays, many people like ordering food
online. Is it good or bad?
Some people think it's good to order food
online because it is convenient and fast. It can
help save time. Also, the food is cheap and
delicious. Besides, we have many kinds of food to
choose from.
However, other people have different ideas.
They say eating takeaway too often is bad for
health, because takeaway may not be fresh food.
And the plastic bags of the food are bad for the
environment.
I think we can order food online sometimes,
but not too often.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确写作要求：围绕网上点餐的利弊展开，必须覆盖表格全部提示要点，总词数70左右，已给出的开头不计入词数，不能出现个人姓名和校名。接下来梳理行文逻辑：第一步先承接开头，阐述网上点餐的优点，把提示的方便快捷、品种多样、节省时间三个核心要点自然串联，适当补充合理细节让语句通顺；第二步用转折过渡引出弊端，把提示的塑料包装袋污染环境、常吃外卖不利健康两个要点完整表述，补充少量合理细节让理由更充分；第三步给出客观中立的个人看法，最后检查要点是否全覆盖、有没有违规信息、词数是否符合要求即可。
【解析】
按照三步法完成写作：
1. 承接开头引出正方观点：用"Some people think it's good to order food online"作为开头，依次点明网上点餐方便快捷、能节省时间、可选食物种类丰富的所有优点要点，语句简单通顺。
2. 用转折词"However"过渡引出反方观点：先说明频繁食用外卖对健康有害，补充外卖食材可能不够新鲜的逻辑让理由更合理，再点明外卖使用的塑料袋会对环境造成负面影响，覆盖全部缺点要点。
3. 收尾给出个人观点：明确表达可以偶尔点外卖但不要过于频繁的中立立场，整体内容连贯，词数符合要求，没有出现个人隐私信息。
【答案】
Ordering Food Online, Good or Bad?
Nowadays, many people like ordering food online. Is it good or bad?
Some people think it's good to order food online because it is convenient and fast. It can help save time. Also, the food is cheap and delicious. Besides, we have many kinds of food to choose from.
However, other people have different ideas. They say eating takeaway too often is bad for health, because takeaway may not be fresh food. And the plastic bags of the food are bad for the environment.
I think we can order food online sometimes, but not too often.
【知识点】
英语议论文写作，话题类作文表达，要点类写作规范
【点评】
本题是贴近日常的生活化热点写作，所有核心要点都已经给出，难度较低，学生只需要按照“优点阐述-缺点说明-个人观点”的常规议论文结构组织内容，保证所有提示要点都被覆盖，语句通顺、词数达标即可，注意不要遗漏表格给出的关键信息，避免出现个人姓名、校名这类违规内容。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先明确写作要求：围绕网上点餐的利弊展开，必须覆盖表格全部提示要点，总词数70左右，已给出的开头不计入词数，不能出现个人姓名和校名。接下来梳理行文逻辑：第一步先承接开头，阐述网上点餐的优点，把提示的方便快捷、品种多样、节省时间三个核心要点自然串联，适当补充合理细节让语句通顺；第二步用转折过渡引出弊端，把提示的塑料包装袋污染环境、常吃外卖不利健康两个要点完整表述，补充少量合理细节让理由更充分；第三步给出客观中立的个人看法，最后检查要点是否全覆盖、有没有违规信息、词数是否符合要求即可。
【解析】
按照三步法完成写作：
1. 承接开头引出正方观点：用"Some people think it's good to order food online"作为开头，依次点明网上点餐方便快捷、能节省时间、可选食物种类丰富的所有优点要点，语句简单通顺。
2. 用转折词"However"过渡引出反方观点：先说明频繁食用外卖对健康有害，补充外卖食材可能不够新鲜的逻辑让理由更合理，再点明外卖使用的塑料袋会对环境造成负面影响，覆盖全部缺点要点。
3. 收尾给出个人观点：明确表达可以偶尔点外卖但不要过于频繁的中立立场，整体内容连贯，词数符合要求，没有出现个人隐私信息。
【答案】
Ordering Food Online, Good or Bad?
Nowadays, many people like ordering food online. Is it good or bad?
Some people think it's good to order food online because it is convenient and fast. It can help save time. Also, the food is cheap and delicious. Besides, we have many kinds of food to choose from.
However, other people have different ideas. They say eating takeaway too often is bad for health, because takeaway may not be fresh food. And the plastic bags of the food are bad for the environment.
I think we can order food online sometimes, but not too often.
【知识点】
英语议论文写作，话题类作文表达，要点类写作规范
【点评】
本题是贴近日常的生活化热点写作，所有核心要点都已经给出，难度较低，学生只需要按照“优点阐述-缺点说明-个人观点”的常规议论文结构组织内容，保证所有提示要点都被覆盖，语句通顺、词数达标即可，注意不要遗漏表格给出的关键信息，避免出现个人姓名、校名这类违规内容。
【难度系数】
0.7
