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五、书面表达。（共 20 分）
主题文化节的最后，是英语演讲比赛环节。学校邀请同学们分享自己心中最喜爱的季节。
请你根据以下问题提示和要求，以“My favourite season at school”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。
提示:1. What is your school like during that season? 2. What do you often do at your school during that season? 3. Why do you like that season the most at your school?
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥。3. 词数 90 左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My favourite season at school
My favourite season at school is
主题文化节的最后，是英语演讲比赛环节。学校邀请同学们分享自己心中最喜爱的季节。
请你根据以下问题提示和要求，以“My favourite season at school”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。
提示:1. What is your school like during that season? 2. What do you often do at your school during that season? 3. Why do you like that season the most at your school?
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥。3. 词数 90 左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My favourite season at school
My favourite season at school is
答案
One possible version:
My favourite season at school
My favourite season at school is spring.
In spring, our school comes alive. Trees grow new leaves, and flowers bloom everywhere. The air smells fresh, and the weather is perfectly warm.
We often have outdoor lessons under the blue sky, read books on the grass, or play football with friends. I also love watching birds build their nests in the old tree near our classroom.
I love spring the most because it feels like a new beginning. It brings energy, colours and smiles to our school. Everyone seems more active and happier. Spring turns our school into a cheerful and beautiful place to learn and grow.
My favourite season at school
My favourite season at school is spring.
In spring, our school comes alive. Trees grow new leaves, and flowers bloom everywhere. The air smells fresh, and the weather is perfectly warm.
We often have outdoor lessons under the blue sky, read books on the grass, or play football with friends. I also love watching birds build their nests in the old tree near our classroom.
I love spring the most because it feels like a new beginning. It brings energy, colours and smiles to our school. Everyone seems more active and happier. Spring turns our school into a cheerful and beautiful place to learn and grow.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先理清写作逻辑：第一步先选定一个容易展开描写的季节，比如春季，避免选择过于小众、没有足够素材支撑的季节；第二步对应题干给出的三个提示问题逐一搭建内容框架：首先描写该季节下校园的整体风貌景色，其次列举这个季节在校园里常开展的贴合学生身份的活动，最后说明自己最喜欢这个季节的核心理由；第三步把搭建好的内容用流畅自然的语句串联起来，注意演讲稿的口语化友好风格，控制总词数在90左右，补充少量细节让内容更生动，同时检查所有提示要点都被覆盖、语法没有错误。
【解析】
1. 开篇补全题干给出的开头，直接点明自己最喜欢的校园季节是春季，开门见山扣题；
2. 对应第一个提示问题，描写春季的校园景象：万物复苏，树木长出新叶，各处鲜花盛放，空气清新、气候温暖，把春日校园的鲜活氛围刻画出来；
3. 对应第二个提示问题，列举校园里的春日活动：在户外上课、在草坪上阅读、和好友踢足球，还加入观察窗边老树里的鸟儿筑巢的小细节，内容真实有代入感；
4. 对应第三个提示问题，点明喜爱春季的原因：春季象征新的开始，给校园带来活力、色彩和欢笑，所有人都更积极愉悦，春日的校园是适合学习成长的美好场所，自然收尾升华情感；
5. 最终通读全文，确认所有提示信息都完整覆盖，语法正确，上下文连贯，词数符合题干要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite season at school
My favourite season at school is spring.
In spring, our school comes alive. Trees grow new leaves, and flowers bloom everywhere. The air smells fresh, and the weather is perfectly warm.
We often have outdoor lessons under the blue sky, read books on the grass, or play football with friends. I also love watching birds build their nests in the old tree near our classroom.
I love spring the most because it feels like a new beginning. It brings energy, colours and smiles to our school. Everyone seems more active and happier. Spring turns our school into a cheerful and beautiful place to learn and grow.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作
要点类作文写作
校园话题表达
【点评】
本篇参考范文完全覆盖题干全部提示要点，内容贴合中学生校园真实生活，细节生动有画面感，语句流畅自然，语法使用准确，词数符合要求，整体风格亲切有感染力，适配英语演讲稿的场景。同学们写作时可以参考该结构，优先选择素材充足的季节切入，逐个对应要点填充内容，适当加入生活化的小细节，避免内容空洞生硬。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题首先理清写作逻辑：第一步先选定一个容易展开描写的季节，比如春季，避免选择过于小众、没有足够素材支撑的季节；第二步对应题干给出的三个提示问题逐一搭建内容框架：首先描写该季节下校园的整体风貌景色，其次列举这个季节在校园里常开展的贴合学生身份的活动，最后说明自己最喜欢这个季节的核心理由；第三步把搭建好的内容用流畅自然的语句串联起来，注意演讲稿的口语化友好风格，控制总词数在90左右，补充少量细节让内容更生动，同时检查所有提示要点都被覆盖、语法没有错误。
【解析】
1. 开篇补全题干给出的开头，直接点明自己最喜欢的校园季节是春季，开门见山扣题；
2. 对应第一个提示问题，描写春季的校园景象：万物复苏，树木长出新叶，各处鲜花盛放，空气清新、气候温暖，把春日校园的鲜活氛围刻画出来；
3. 对应第二个提示问题，列举校园里的春日活动：在户外上课、在草坪上阅读、和好友踢足球，还加入观察窗边老树里的鸟儿筑巢的小细节，内容真实有代入感；
4. 对应第三个提示问题，点明喜爱春季的原因：春季象征新的开始，给校园带来活力、色彩和欢笑，所有人都更积极愉悦，春日的校园是适合学习成长的美好场所，自然收尾升华情感；
5. 最终通读全文，确认所有提示信息都完整覆盖，语法正确，上下文连贯，词数符合题干要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite season at school
My favourite season at school is spring.
In spring, our school comes alive. Trees grow new leaves, and flowers bloom everywhere. The air smells fresh, and the weather is perfectly warm.
We often have outdoor lessons under the blue sky, read books on the grass, or play football with friends. I also love watching birds build their nests in the old tree near our classroom.
I love spring the most because it feels like a new beginning. It brings energy, colours and smiles to our school. Everyone seems more active and happier. Spring turns our school into a cheerful and beautiful place to learn and grow.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作
要点类作文写作
校园话题表达
【点评】
本篇参考范文完全覆盖题干全部提示要点，内容贴合中学生校园真实生活，细节生动有画面感，语句流畅自然，语法使用准确，词数符合要求，整体风格亲切有感染力，适配英语演讲稿的场景。同学们写作时可以参考该结构，优先选择素材充足的季节切入，逐个对应要点填充内容，适当加入生活化的小细节，避免内容空洞生硬。
【难度系数】
0.6
