第三阶 实战强化训练
[2026 江苏常州调研]假设你是吉姆(Jim),请你根据提示,给你小学时的好朋友罗阳(Luo Yang)写一封电子邮件,介绍你在新学校的好朋友丹尼尔(Daniel)。

要求:
(1)必须包括所有提示信息,可以适当发挥;
(2)条理清晰;
(3)书写工整;
(4)80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Luo Yang,
I make lots of friends at school.

Do you have any good friends in your new school? Please write to me soon.
All the best,
Jim

【参考范文】
Dear Luo Yang,
I make lots of friends at school. I'd like to tell you something about my good friend Daniel.
Daniel is my new classmate. He is 13 years old. He is from Nanjing. He has short hair with glasses. He is really tall and strong. He is also friendly and polite. When others ask him for help, he always does his best to help them. So he is helpful. He likes playing football. We always play football after school. He likes taking things apart and then repairing them. His dream is to be a scientist. I hope his dream will come true.
Do you have any good friends in your new school? Please write to me soon.
All the best,
Jim

【分析】首先明确写作任务：以吉姆的身份给小学好友罗阳写电子邮件，介绍新学校的好朋友丹尼尔，需包含人物基本信息、外貌、性格、爱好、梦想等内容，适当发挥，80词左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头句，引出要介绍的好友丹尼尔；2. 依次介绍丹尼尔的年龄、籍贯、外貌、性格特点；3. 说明他的爱好和梦想；4. 衔接结尾的提问，完成符合要求的邮件。
【解析】按照要求组织内容，先引出丹尼尔，再依次介绍其基本信息、外貌、性格、爱好、梦想，语言通顺，符合邮件格式，控制词数，具体内容如下：
Dear Luo Yang,
I make lots of friends at school. I'd like to tell you something about my good friend Daniel.
Daniel is my new classmate. He is 13 years old. He is from Nanjing. He has short hair with glasses. He is really tall and strong. He is also friendly and polite. When others ask him for help, he always does his best to help them. So he is helpful. He likes playing football. We always play football after school. He likes taking things apart and then repairing them. His dream is to be a scientist. I hope his dream will come true.
Do you have any good friends in your new school? Please write to me soon.
All the best,
Jim
【答案】Dear Luo Yang,
I make lots of friends at school. I'd like to tell you something about my good friend Daniel.
Daniel is my new classmate. He is 13 years old. He is from Nanjing. He has short hair with glasses. He is really tall and strong. He is also friendly and polite. When others ask him for help, he always does his best to help them. So he is helpful. He likes playing football. We always play football after school. He likes taking things apart and then repairing them. His dream is to be a scientist. I hope his dream will come true.
Do you have any good friends in your new school? Please write to me soon.
All the best,
Jim
【知识点】英语应用文写作、人物介绍
【点评】本题考查英语电子邮件写作能力，要求学生准确介绍人物特征，语言条理清晰，符合邮件格式，是初中英语常见的基础写作题型，注重对人物描述类表达的运用。
【难度系数】0.6