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三、书面表达。
假如今天是你妈妈的生日，为表达对她的感谢，你准备给她做一碗西红柿鸡蛋面。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文。不少于 80 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
写作要点：
1. How will you make tomato and egg noodles?
2. What else will you do for your mum?
3. What will you say to your mum?
Today is my mum's birthday.
假如今天是你妈妈的生日，为表达对她的感谢，你准备给她做一碗西红柿鸡蛋面。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文。不少于 80 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
写作要点：
1. How will you make tomato and egg noodles?
2. What else will you do for your mum?
3. What will you say to your mum?
Today is my mum's birthday.
I will make a bowl of tomato and egg noodles for her.
First, I will boil the noodles until they turn soft.
Then, I will crack two eggs into a bowl, whisk them until smooth, and then fry them in a pan until golden brown.
Next, I will add tomato pieces to make a tasty sauce.
Finally, I will put the cooked noodles into the pan and mix everything.
To make her birthday special, I will not only tidy the house, but also write a card that reads, "Dearest Mum,
just like these long noodles, may your life be filled with endless joy. I love you!"
When I serve the noodles to her, I will tell her, "According to Chinese tradition, long noodles stand for a long life.
These noodles hold my best wishes for your lasting health and happiness!"
答案
I will make a bowl of tomato and egg noodles for her.
First, I will boil the noodles until they turn soft. Then, I will crack two eggs into a bowl, whisk them until smooth, and then fry them in a pan until golden brown. Next, I will add tomato pieces to make a tasty sauce. Finally, I will put the cooked noodles into the pan and mix everything.
To make her birthday special, I will not only tidy the house, but also write a card that reads, "Dearest Mum, just like these long noodles, may your life be filled with endless joy. I love you!"
When I serve the noodles to her, I will tell her, "According to Chinese tradition, long noodles stand for a long life. These noodles hold my best wishes for your lasting health and happiness!"
First, I will boil the noodles until they turn soft. Then, I will crack two eggs into a bowl, whisk them until smooth, and then fry them in a pan until golden brown. Next, I will add tomato pieces to make a tasty sauce. Finally, I will put the cooked noodles into the pan and mix everything.
To make her birthday special, I will not only tidy the house, but also write a card that reads, "Dearest Mum, just like these long noodles, may your life be filled with endless joy. I love you!"
When I serve the noodles to her, I will tell her, "According to Chinese tradition, long noodles stand for a long life. These noodles hold my best wishes for your lasting health and happiness!"
解析
【分析】
拿到这篇书面表达题，首先要明确主题是“妈妈生日，为表达感谢做西红柿鸡蛋面并准备其他事与祝福语”，紧扣三个写作要点展开：1. 制作西红柿鸡蛋面的步骤，用first、then、next、finally等顺序词梳理逻辑；2. 为妈妈做的其他事，比如整理房间、准备贺卡；3. 对妈妈说的话，结合中国传统中长面条代表长寿的寓意表达祝福。开头已给出，需衔接自然，确保字数不少于80词，语言通顺符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
首先衔接开头，点明要为妈妈做西红柿鸡蛋面；接着分步骤描述做面过程：先煮软面条，再打鸡蛋煎至金黄，然后加番茄制作酱汁，最后混合面条与酱汁；然后补充为妈妈准备的其他事：整理房子、写祝福贺卡；最后写给妈妈的祝福语，结合面条寓意传递爱与祝福，确保覆盖所有要点，语言流畅连贯。
【答案】
I will make a bowl of tomato and egg noodles for her.
First, I will boil the noodles until they turn soft. Then, I will crack two eggs into a bowl, whisk them until smooth, and then fry them in a pan until golden brown. Next, I will add tomato pieces to make a tasty sauce. Finally, I will put the cooked noodles into the pan and mix everything.
To make her birthday special, I will not only tidy the house, but also write a card that reads, "Dearest Mum, just like these long noodles, may your life be filled with endless joy. I love you!"
When I serve the noodles to her, I will tell her, "According to Chinese tradition, long noodles stand for a long life. These noodles hold my best wishes for your lasting health and happiness!"
【知识点】
英语书面表达、日常话题写作、顺序词运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有要求，涵盖制作西红柿鸡蛋面的步骤、为妈妈准备的其他事以及对妈妈的祝福语，逻辑清晰，语言流畅自然，融入中国传统文化元素（面条寓意长寿），情感真挚，符合字数要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
拿到这篇书面表达题，首先要明确主题是“妈妈生日，为表达感谢做西红柿鸡蛋面并准备其他事与祝福语”，紧扣三个写作要点展开：1. 制作西红柿鸡蛋面的步骤，用first、then、next、finally等顺序词梳理逻辑；2. 为妈妈做的其他事，比如整理房间、准备贺卡；3. 对妈妈说的话，结合中国传统中长面条代表长寿的寓意表达祝福。开头已给出，需衔接自然，确保字数不少于80词，语言通顺符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
首先衔接开头，点明要为妈妈做西红柿鸡蛋面；接着分步骤描述做面过程：先煮软面条，再打鸡蛋煎至金黄，然后加番茄制作酱汁，最后混合面条与酱汁；然后补充为妈妈准备的其他事：整理房子、写祝福贺卡；最后写给妈妈的祝福语，结合面条寓意传递爱与祝福，确保覆盖所有要点，语言流畅连贯。
【答案】
I will make a bowl of tomato and egg noodles for her.
First, I will boil the noodles until they turn soft. Then, I will crack two eggs into a bowl, whisk them until smooth, and then fry them in a pan until golden brown. Next, I will add tomato pieces to make a tasty sauce. Finally, I will put the cooked noodles into the pan and mix everything.
To make her birthday special, I will not only tidy the house, but also write a card that reads, "Dearest Mum, just like these long noodles, may your life be filled with endless joy. I love you!"
When I serve the noodles to her, I will tell her, "According to Chinese tradition, long noodles stand for a long life. These noodles hold my best wishes for your lasting health and happiness!"
【知识点】
英语书面表达、日常话题写作、顺序词运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有要求，涵盖制作西红柿鸡蛋面的步骤、为妈妈准备的其他事以及对妈妈的祝福语，逻辑清晰，语言流畅自然，融入中国传统文化元素（面条寓意长寿），情感真挚，符合字数要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
