十三、书面表达。(共8分)
在校园里,我们每天都和同学一起学习、一起游戏。做一个待人友善的好朋友,是一件重要的事。请你以“Being a nice friend”为题,根据提示写一篇小短文,不少于6句话。
写作提示:
1. 你对朋友很友好、有礼貌。
2. 你愿意帮助有困难的同学。
3. 你会和朋友分享学习用品和零食。
4. 朋友不开心时,你会认真倾听、安慰他。
Being a nice friend
在校园里,我们每天都和同学一起学习、一起游戏。做一个待人友善的好朋友,是一件重要的事。请你以“Being a nice friend”为题,根据提示写一篇小短文,不少于6句话。
写作提示:
1. 你对朋友很友好、有礼貌。
2. 你愿意帮助有困难的同学。
3. 你会和朋友分享学习用品和零食。
4. 朋友不开心时,你会认真倾听、安慰他。
Being a nice friend
答案
One possible version:
Being a nice friend
It is important to be a nice friend at school. I am kind and friendly to my classmates. I always help my friends when they are in need. I often share my pens, books and snacks with them. When my friend feels sad, I listen to him carefully. I say nice words and make him feel better. We play and study happily together. Being a nice friend makes me feel great.
Being a nice friend
It is important to be a nice friend at school. I am kind and friendly to my classmates. I always help my friends when they are in need. I often share my pens, books and snacks with them. When my friend feels sad, I listen to him carefully. I say nice words and make him feel better. We play and study happily together. Being a nice friend makes me feel great.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“Being a nice friend”为题写一篇不少于6句的英语短文,需覆盖四个写作提示。解题思路:1. 开篇点题,点明做友善朋友的重要性;2. 依次对应四个提示展开:说明自己对同学友好礼貌、主动帮助有困难的同学、分享学习用品和零食、倾听并安慰不开心的朋友;3. 结尾升华,表达做友善朋友的感受,确保语句通顺、使用一般现在时,符合校园生活语境。
【解析】
按照上述思路,结合写作提示完成写作,范文如下:
Being a nice friend
It is important to be a nice friend at school. I am kind and friendly to my classmates. I always help my friends when they are in need. I often share my pens, books and snacks with them. When my friend feels sad, I listen to him carefully. I say nice words and make him feel better. We play and study happily together. Being a nice friend makes me feel great.
【答案】
Being a nice friend
It is important to be a nice friend at school. I am kind and friendly to my classmates. I always help my friends when they are in need. I often share my pens, books and snacks with them. When my friend feels sad, I listen to him carefully. I say nice words and make him feel better. We play and study happily together. Being a nice friend makes me feel great.
【知识点】
英语书面表达;校园人际交往话题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,全面覆盖所有写作提示要求,语句通顺自然,时态运用准确,结构清晰,既贴合校园生活实际,又传递了友善交友的积极意义,符合初中英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“Being a nice friend”为题写一篇不少于6句的英语短文,需覆盖四个写作提示。解题思路:1. 开篇点题,点明做友善朋友的重要性;2. 依次对应四个提示展开:说明自己对同学友好礼貌、主动帮助有困难的同学、分享学习用品和零食、倾听并安慰不开心的朋友;3. 结尾升华,表达做友善朋友的感受,确保语句通顺、使用一般现在时,符合校园生活语境。
【解析】
按照上述思路,结合写作提示完成写作,范文如下:
Being a nice friend
It is important to be a nice friend at school. I am kind and friendly to my classmates. I always help my friends when they are in need. I often share my pens, books and snacks with them. When my friend feels sad, I listen to him carefully. I say nice words and make him feel better. We play and study happily together. Being a nice friend makes me feel great.
【答案】
Being a nice friend
It is important to be a nice friend at school. I am kind and friendly to my classmates. I always help my friends when they are in need. I often share my pens, books and snacks with them. When my friend feels sad, I listen to him carefully. I say nice words and make him feel better. We play and study happily together. Being a nice friend makes me feel great.
【知识点】
英语书面表达;校园人际交往话题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,全面覆盖所有写作提示要求,语句通顺自然,时态运用准确,结构清晰,既贴合校园生活实际,又传递了友善交友的积极意义,符合初中英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
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