写作演练 实战练笔,夯实写作功底
假设你是西蒙,刚来南京市第一中学学习,请根据下表所提示的要点,写一篇英语短文,向你的新同学介绍自己的个人情况。

要求:1. 表达中必须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2. 词数80左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
1. 文体:说明文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:第一人称。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
Hi, my name is Simon. I'm 12 years old.

I come from America.
There are four people in my family. I live with my parents and younger sister in Nanjing. Now I'm a new student at Nanjing No. 1 Middle School. I'm in Class 2, Grade 7.
I have short brown hair. I'm tall and thin. I have two big eyes. I always wear glasses. I like listening to music. And I'm good at singing.
I want to be a good singer in the future. I hope everyone will like my songs.

【分析】首先明确写作要求：文体为说明文，时态用一般现在时，人称第一人称；开头已给出，需补充的要点包括国籍、家庭情况、学校班级、外貌特征、爱好、未来愿望；要适当发挥，避免生硬翻译，词数控制在80左右。思考时按逻辑顺序梳理内容：从个人基本信息（国籍、家庭）到学校情况，再到外貌、爱好，最后是未来规划，使内容连贯自然。
【解析】按照梳理的顺序，用一般现在时、第一人称组织语言：先说明国籍，再介绍家庭成员及居住情况，接着点明学校班级，然后描述外貌，再写爱好，最后表达未来愿望，确保语言通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】I come from America. There are four people in my family. I live with my parents and younger sister in Nanjing. Now I'm a new student at Nanjing No. 1 Middle School. I'm in Class 2, Grade 7. I have short brown hair. I'm tall and thin. I have two big eyes. I always wear glasses. I like listening to music. And I'm good at singing. I want to be a good singer in the future. I hope everyone will like my songs.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语人物介绍
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有要点，语言表达自然流畅，时态和人称使用准确，结构清晰，适当补充细节使内容更丰富，符合初中英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】0.6