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【写作导引】
本单元以“艺术”为话题，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“文学、艺术与体育”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①谈论不同形式的艺术；②介绍一位艺术家；③探索艺术激励人们的方式。
【写作任务】
艺术陶冶情操，艺术使生活丰富多彩。你校英文报正举办以“My Favourite Art Form”为题
的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式，内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢的艺术形式；2. 分享一个与之相关的自己的故事；3. 你的感受。
要求：1. 词数：80左右；2. 短文需包括所给要点，可适当发挥；3. 短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
【写作导引】
本单元以“艺术”为话题，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“文学、艺术与体育”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①谈论不同形式的艺术；②介绍一位艺术家；③探索艺术激励人们的方式。
【写作任务】
艺术陶冶情操，艺术使生活丰富多彩。你校英文报正举办以“My Favourite Art Form”为题
的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式，内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢的艺术形式；2. 分享一个与之相关的自己的故事；3. 你的感受。
要求：1. 词数：80左右；2. 短文需包括所给要点，可适当发挥；3. 短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
My Favourite Art Form
My favourite art form is painting. It brings me great joy and usually helps me express emotions through colours and shapes.
Last summer, I joined a painting camp. One day, I tried to draw the sunset but failed many times. My teacher encouraged me to combine colours with imagination. Finally, I finished it perfectly, and it was on show in the camp.
Painting teaches me patience. When I hold a brush, all worries disappear. It makes my life colourful and helps me see beauty in small things. I will love painting forever.
My favourite art form is painting. It brings me great joy and usually helps me express emotions through colours and shapes.
Last summer, I joined a painting camp. One day, I tried to draw the sunset but failed many times. My teacher encouraged me to combine colours with imagination. Finally, I finished it perfectly, and it was on show in the camp.
Painting teaches me patience. When I hold a brush, all worries disappear. It makes my life colourful and helps me see beauty in small things. I will love painting forever.
答案
My Favourite Art Form
My favourite art form is painting. It brings me great joy and usually helps me express emotions through colours and shapes.
Last summer, I joined a painting camp. One day, I tried to draw the sunset but failed many times. My teacher encouraged me to combine colours with imagination. Finally, I finished it perfectly, and it was on show in the camp.
Painting teaches me patience. When I hold a brush, all worries disappear. It makes my life colourful and helps me see beauty in small things. I will love painting forever.
亮点词块
① combine colours with imagination 把颜色和想象结合起来
② on show 展出
③ helps me see beauty in small things 帮助我在小的事物里看见美
高分句子
④ One day, I tried to draw the sunset but failed many times.（动词不定式短语 to draw the sunset 作宾语）
⑤ My teacher encouraged me to combine colours with imagination.（动词不定式短语 to combine... 作宾语补足语）
My favourite art form is painting. It brings me great joy and usually helps me express emotions through colours and shapes.
Last summer, I joined a painting camp. One day, I tried to draw the sunset but failed many times. My teacher encouraged me to combine colours with imagination. Finally, I finished it perfectly, and it was on show in the camp.
Painting teaches me patience. When I hold a brush, all worries disappear. It makes my life colourful and helps me see beauty in small things. I will love painting forever.
亮点词块
① combine colours with imagination 把颜色和想象结合起来
② on show 展出
③ helps me see beauty in small things 帮助我在小的事物里看见美
高分句子
④ One day, I tried to draw the sunset but failed many times.（动词不定式短语 to draw the sunset 作宾语）
⑤ My teacher encouraged me to combine colours with imagination.（动词不定式短语 to combine... 作宾语补足语）
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务：以“My Favourite Art Form”为题，需覆盖三个核心要点：最喜欢的艺术形式、相关个人故事、个人感受。解题思路：1. 开篇直接点明最喜欢的艺术形式（绘画），简述其作用；2. 选取具体个人经历（参加绘画营画日落遇挫，老师指导后成功展出）作为故事支撑；3. 结合经历表达绘画带来的感悟，控制词数在80左右，避免真实信息，适当运用亮点表达提升作文质量。
【解析】按照写作逻辑分步完成：1. 开篇点题：My favourite art form is painting. It brings me great joy and usually helps me express emotions through colours and shapes. 2. 叙述故事：Last summer, I joined a painting camp. One day, I tried to draw the sunset but failed many times. My teacher encouraged me to combine colours with imagination. Finally, I finished it perfectly, and it was on show in the camp. 3. 表达感受：Painting teaches me patience. When I hold a brush, all worries disappear. It makes my life colourful and helps me see beauty in small things. I will love painting forever. 全程覆盖所有要求要点，词数符合要求，运用了亮点词块与高分句式。
【答案】My Favourite Art Form
My favourite art form is painting. It brings me great joy and usually helps me express emotions through colours and shapes.
Last summer, I joined a painting camp. One day, I tried to draw the sunset but failed many times. My teacher encouraged me to combine colours with imagination. Finally, I finished it perfectly, and it was on show in the camp.
Painting teaches me patience. When I hold a brush, all worries disappear. It makes my life colourful and helps me see beauty in small things. I will love painting forever.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、话题类英语写作
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖“最喜欢的艺术形式、相关个人故事、个人感受”三个要点，选取的绘画营经历具体真实，语言流畅自然，运用了“combine...with...”“on show”等亮点表达，以及动词不定式作宾语、宾语补足语的高分句式，符合初中英语写作优秀范文要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照写作逻辑分步完成：1. 开篇点题：My favourite art form is painting. It brings me great joy and usually helps me express emotions through colours and shapes. 2. 叙述故事：Last summer, I joined a painting camp. One day, I tried to draw the sunset but failed many times. My teacher encouraged me to combine colours with imagination. Finally, I finished it perfectly, and it was on show in the camp. 3. 表达感受：Painting teaches me patience. When I hold a brush, all worries disappear. It makes my life colourful and helps me see beauty in small things. I will love painting forever. 全程覆盖所有要求要点，词数符合要求，运用了亮点词块与高分句式。
【答案】My Favourite Art Form
My favourite art form is painting. It brings me great joy and usually helps me express emotions through colours and shapes.
Last summer, I joined a painting camp. One day, I tried to draw the sunset but failed many times. My teacher encouraged me to combine colours with imagination. Finally, I finished it perfectly, and it was on show in the camp.
Painting teaches me patience. When I hold a brush, all worries disappear. It makes my life colourful and helps me see beauty in small things. I will love painting forever.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、话题类英语写作
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖“最喜欢的艺术形式、相关个人故事、个人感受”三个要点，选取的绘画营经历具体真实，语言流畅自然，运用了“combine...with...”“on show”等亮点表达，以及动词不定式作宾语、宾语补足语的高分句式，符合初中英语写作优秀范文要求。
【难度系数】0.6
跟踪演练
请你根据下面所给信息，写一篇介绍中国著名画家齐白石的英语短文。
出生 1864年出生于湖南省
年轻时代 很小的时候，展示出超凡的智慧和艺术能力；长大后学会做很多不同的事情，擅长画蔬菜、花、鸟和昆虫。
1902年至1909年期间 周游中国，画了很多风
画。
主要成就 代表作《墨虾》（Ink Shrimps）
晚年 1.1919年定居北京；2.1957年在北京去世，享年93岁。
要求：1. 字数：不少于80；2. 文章必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
请你根据下面所给信息，写一篇介绍中国著名画家齐白石的英语短文。
出生 1864年出生于湖南省
年轻时代 很小的时候，展示出超凡的智慧和艺术能力；长大后学会做很多不同的事情，擅长画蔬菜、花、鸟和昆虫。
1902年至1909年期间 周游中国，画了很多风
画。主要成就 代表作《墨虾》（Ink Shrimps）
晚年 1.1919年定居北京；2.1957年在北京去世，享年93岁。
要求：1. 字数：不少于80；2. 文章必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
Qi Baishi was a famous Chinese painter. He was born in Hunan Province in 1864. From an early age, he showed great intelligence and artistic ability. As he grew older, he learned to do many different things. He was good at painting vegetables, flowers, birds and insects. From 1902 to 1909, he travelled across China and painted many pictures of scenery. The painting Ink Shrimps is one of his most famous works. He settled in Beijing in 1919. He died in Beijing in 1957 at the age of 93.
Qi Baishi’s paintings not only express the beauty of Chinese culture, but also inspire artists and art lovers worldwide.
Qi Baishi’s paintings not only express the beauty of Chinese culture, but also inspire artists and art lovers worldwide.
答案
写作提优练
范文：
Qi Baishi was a famous Chinese painter. He was born in Hunan Province in 1864. From an early age, he showed great intelligence and artistic ability. As he grew older, he learned to do many different things. He was good at painting vegetables, flowers, birds and insects. From 1902 to 1909, he travelled across China and painted many pictures of scenery. The painting Ink Shrimps is one of his most famous works. He settled in Beijing in 1919. He died in Beijing in 1957 at the age of 93.
Qi Baishi’s paintings not only express the beauty of Chinese culture, but also inspire artists and art lovers worldwide.
范文：
Qi Baishi was a famous Chinese painter. He was born in Hunan Province in 1864. From an early age, he showed great intelligence and artistic ability. As he grew older, he learned to do many different things. He was good at painting vegetables, flowers, birds and insects. From 1902 to 1909, he travelled across China and painted many pictures of scenery. The painting Ink Shrimps is one of his most famous works. He settled in Beijing in 1919. He died in Beijing in 1957 at the age of 93.
Qi Baishi’s paintings not only express the beauty of Chinese culture, but also inspire artists and art lovers worldwide.
解析
【分析】
本题为人物介绍类英语短文写作，需按照时间顺序梳理给定的齐白石生平信息，涵盖出生、早年经历、中年游历、主要成就、晚年情况，适当补充衔接语句，确保信息完整、语句通顺、字数达标，符合英语写作的基本要求。
【解析】
写作时，先点明齐白石是中国著名画家，再依次介绍：1864年生于湖南省；幼年展现超凡智慧与艺术能力，长大后擅长画蔬菜、花、鸟和昆虫；1902-1909年周游中国创作大量风景画；代表作《墨虾》；1919年定居北京，1957年在北京去世享年93岁，最后可适当升华其作品的文化意义，使文章连贯自然。
【答案】
Qi Baishi was a famous Chinese painter. He was born in Hunan Province in 1864. From an early age, he showed great intelligence and artistic ability. As he grew older, he learned to do many different things. He was good at painting vegetables, flowers, birds and insects. From 1902 to 1909, he travelled across China and painted many pictures of scenery. The painting Ink Shrimps is one of his most famous works. He settled in Beijing in 1919. He died in Beijing in 1957 at the age of 93. Qi Baishi’s paintings not only express the beauty of Chinese culture, but also inspire artists and art lovers worldwide.
【知识点】
英语写作、人物介绍
【点评】
本题考查人物介绍类英语短文写作，要求涵盖所有给定信息，条理清晰，语句通顺，适当发挥提升文章质量，符合英语写作的基本规范。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为人物介绍类英语短文写作，需按照时间顺序梳理给定的齐白石生平信息，涵盖出生、早年经历、中年游历、主要成就、晚年情况，适当补充衔接语句，确保信息完整、语句通顺、字数达标，符合英语写作的基本要求。
【解析】
写作时，先点明齐白石是中国著名画家，再依次介绍：1864年生于湖南省；幼年展现超凡智慧与艺术能力，长大后擅长画蔬菜、花、鸟和昆虫；1902-1909年周游中国创作大量风景画；代表作《墨虾》；1919年定居北京，1957年在北京去世享年93岁，最后可适当升华其作品的文化意义，使文章连贯自然。
【答案】
Qi Baishi was a famous Chinese painter. He was born in Hunan Province in 1864. From an early age, he showed great intelligence and artistic ability. As he grew older, he learned to do many different things. He was good at painting vegetables, flowers, birds and insects. From 1902 to 1909, he travelled across China and painted many pictures of scenery. The painting Ink Shrimps is one of his most famous works. He settled in Beijing in 1919. He died in Beijing in 1957 at the age of 93. Qi Baishi’s paintings not only express the beauty of Chinese culture, but also inspire artists and art lovers worldwide.
【知识点】
英语写作、人物介绍
【点评】
本题考查人物介绍类英语短文写作，要求涵盖所有给定信息，条理清晰，语句通顺，适当发挥提升文章质量，符合英语写作的基本规范。
【难度系数】
0.5
