五、书面表达
我是一名中学生，我很喜欢我的学校生活和我的家庭，但我有时也有许多烦恼。在学校里我没有很好的朋友，学习不好；在家里我不想与父母交流，感到孤独。老师给我提出了几点建议：多参加活动，多与同学交流，把父母当作最好的朋友(look on…as)……
要求：①根据所给话题的内容来写作，可适当发挥；②文章须意思连贯，符合逻辑；③词数不少于80，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I am a middle school student.

I am a middle school student. I enjoy my school life and my warm family very much, but sometimes I still have a lot of troubles. At school, I don't have any close friends, and I also don't do very well in my lessons, which makes me feel upset. When I get back home, I hardly want to talk with my parents, so I often feel very lonely.
My teacher talked with me patiently and gave me some useful advice. She said I should take an active part in all kinds of after-school activities, and try to communicate more with my classmates. Besides, I should look on my parents as my best friends, and share my happiness and sadness with them. I decide to follow her advice to live a more happy and colorful life later.

【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求围绕“中学生的生活烦恼及老师的建议”展开写作，开头已给出。解题时需先承接开头，描述自身在学校（无亲密朋友、学习不佳）和家庭（不愿与父母交流、感到孤独）的烦恼，再转述老师给出的具体建议（参加课外活动、与同学交流、把父母当作最好的朋友），最后表达听从建议的决心，确保文章意思连贯、符合逻辑，词数不少于80。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，点明自身喜好与烦恼：I enjoy my school life and my warm family very much, but sometimes I still have a lot of troubles.
2. 具体描述烦恼：At school, I don't have any close friends, and I also don't do very well in my lessons, which makes me feel upset. When I get back home, I hardly want to talk with my parents, so I often feel very lonely.
3. 转述老师的建议：My teacher talked with me patiently and gave me some useful advice. She said I should take an active part in all kinds of after-school activities, and try to communicate more with my classmates. Besides, I should look on my parents as my best friends, and share my happiness and sadness with them.
4. 表达听从建议的决心：I decide to follow her advice to live a more happy and colorful life later.
【答案】
I am a middle school student. I enjoy my school life and my warm family very much, but sometimes I still have a lot of troubles. At school, I don't have any close friends, and I also don't do very well in my lessons, which makes me feel upset. When I get back home, I hardly want to talk with my parents, so I often feel very lonely.My teacher talked with me patiently and gave me some useful advice. She said I should take an active part in all kinds of after-school activities, and try to communicate more with my classmates. Besides, I should look on my parents as my best friends, and share my happiness and sadness with them. I decide to follow her advice to live a more happy and colorful life later.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、固定搭配
【点评】
本题围绕中学生的生活烦恼展开，要求学生结合给定要点写作，既考查学生对话题的理解，又考查语言组织与表达能力，需准确运用相关短语，保证文章逻辑连贯、内容完整，符合初中英语书面表达的常见题型要求。
【难度系数】
0.6