四、写作练习。
某英语报正在举办以 “Tell a traditional
Chinese story”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华,请根据下面的图片和提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。

注意:
(1)文中必须包含图片所示情节,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等相关信息;
(3)词数:80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
Long long ago, there was a fox in a forest.
某英语报正在举办以 “Tell a traditional
Chinese story”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华,请根据下面的图片和提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
注意:
(1)文中必须包含图片所示情节,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等相关信息;
(3)词数:80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
Long long ago, there was a fox in a forest.
答案
One day, a tiger in the forest was very hungry, and he tried to catch the fox. The fox was very clever, he said to the tiger "I'm the king of animals in the forest, no one dares to hurt me." Then he asked the tiger to follow him and walk around the forest. All other animals saw them, they felt very afraid and ran away at once. The tiger thought those animals were scared of the fox, so he left the fox there quietly.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇故事类英语写作题,要求结合图片情节和给定提示词完成“狐假虎威”的故事创作。需从首句“Long long ago, there was a fox in a forest.”切入,紧扣图片中狐狸借助老虎威风的核心情节,准确运用所有提示词汇,梳理故事逻辑:老虎饿了想抓狐狸→狐狸用计谋谎称自己是百兽之王→让老虎跟着自己在森林里走→其他动物害怕逃跑→老虎误以为动物怕狐狸,最终放过狐狸,同时保证语句连贯、词数符合要求,不出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作时,先承接首句交代背景:点明森林里的老虎很饿,试图抓狐狸;接着体现狐狸的聪明,让狐狸谎称自己是森林百兽之王,请求老虎跟随自己在森林里行走;然后描述其他动物看到它们后的反应:感到害怕并立刻逃跑;最后说明老虎的误解,误以为动物怕狐狸,从而放过狐狸。全程需准确运用所有提示词汇,语句通顺,控制词数在80左右。
【答案】
One day, a tiger in the forest was very hungry, and he tried to catch the fox. The fox was very clever, he said to the tiger "I'm the king of animals in the forest, no one dares to hurt me." Then he asked the tiger to follow him and walk around the forest. All other animals saw them, they felt very afraid and ran away at once. The tiger thought those animals were scared of the fox, so he left the fox there quietly.
【知识点】
英语故事写作、词汇运用、语句连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣“狐假虎威”的主题,完整运用了所有给定提示词汇,情节逻辑清晰,语句连贯自然,符合题目对词数和内容的要求,是一篇符合标准的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇故事类英语写作题,要求结合图片情节和给定提示词完成“狐假虎威”的故事创作。需从首句“Long long ago, there was a fox in a forest.”切入,紧扣图片中狐狸借助老虎威风的核心情节,准确运用所有提示词汇,梳理故事逻辑:老虎饿了想抓狐狸→狐狸用计谋谎称自己是百兽之王→让老虎跟着自己在森林里走→其他动物害怕逃跑→老虎误以为动物怕狐狸,最终放过狐狸,同时保证语句连贯、词数符合要求,不出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作时,先承接首句交代背景:点明森林里的老虎很饿,试图抓狐狸;接着体现狐狸的聪明,让狐狸谎称自己是森林百兽之王,请求老虎跟随自己在森林里行走;然后描述其他动物看到它们后的反应:感到害怕并立刻逃跑;最后说明老虎的误解,误以为动物怕狐狸,从而放过狐狸。全程需准确运用所有提示词汇,语句通顺,控制词数在80左右。
【答案】
One day, a tiger in the forest was very hungry, and he tried to catch the fox. The fox was very clever, he said to the tiger "I'm the king of animals in the forest, no one dares to hurt me." Then he asked the tiger to follow him and walk around the forest. All other animals saw them, they felt very afraid and ran away at once. The tiger thought those animals were scared of the fox, so he left the fox there quietly.
【知识点】
英语故事写作、词汇运用、语句连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣“狐假虎威”的主题,完整运用了所有给定提示词汇,情节逻辑清晰,语句连贯自然,符合题目对词数和内容的要求,是一篇符合标准的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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