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随着中国的发展，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国，迷恋上中国文化，喜欢上中国的传统习俗，愿意与中国人一起庆祝传统佳节。请你用英语向外国友人介绍一个你喜欢的中国传统节日，以及丰富多彩的节日活动。
提示：
1. What is your favourite festival?
2. How do people celebrate it?
3. What do you think of the festival?
要求：
（1）短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）词数：不少于70（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Traditional Chinese festivals are an important part of Chinese culture.
提示：
1. What is your favourite festival?
2. How do people celebrate it?
3. What do you think of the festival?
要求：
（1）短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）词数：不少于70（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Traditional Chinese festivals are an important part of Chinese culture.
答案
Traditional Chinese festivals are an important part of Chinese culture. My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Spring Festival, also called Chinese New Year.
Before the festival, people usually clean their houses carefully and buy lots of nice food and new clothes for the coming celebration. On New Year's Eve, all family members get together to have a big warm dinner. We often eat dumplings, watch the Spring Gala on TV and talk happily after dinner. Little kids can also get red packets with lucky money from their parents and grandparents. In the following days, we visit our relatives and friends, and send our best wishes to each other.
I think the Spring Festival is really wonderful. It is a festival for family to get together, and we can feel the love and warmth from our family during the festival. It is the most interesting festival in my heart.
Before the festival, people usually clean their houses carefully and buy lots of nice food and new clothes for the coming celebration. On New Year's Eve, all family members get together to have a big warm dinner. We often eat dumplings, watch the Spring Gala on TV and talk happily after dinner. Little kids can also get red packets with lucky money from their parents and grandparents. In the following days, we visit our relatives and friends, and send our best wishes to each other.
I think the Spring Festival is really wonderful. It is a festival for family to get together, and we can feel the love and warmth from our family during the festival. It is the most interesting festival in my heart.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求介绍中国传统节日，需覆盖三个核心要点：最喜欢的节日、节日庆祝方式、个人对节日的看法。解题思路：1. 选择活动丰富、易展开的典型中国传统节日（如春节）；2. 按时间线梳理节日活动：节前准备、节日当天（除夕）活动、节后活动，确保内容具体；3. 结合自身感受表达对节日的评价，保证行文连贯、词数达标，符合英语写作规范。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接已给开头句，明确点明最喜欢的节日是春节；2. 分阶段描述庆祝活动：节前人们打扫房屋、购置年货和新衣；除夕全家团聚吃团圆饭、吃饺子、看春晚、收压岁钱；节后走亲访友互送祝福；3. 表达个人看法，强调春节是家庭团聚的节日，充满爱与温暖，最后检查是否覆盖所有要点、词数符合要求，确保语言流畅自然。
【答案】
Traditional Chinese festivals are an important part of Chinese culture. My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Spring Festival, also called Chinese New Year.
Before the festival, people usually clean their houses carefully and buy lots of nice food and new clothes for the coming celebration. On New Year's Eve, all family members get together to have a big warm dinner. We often eat dumplings, watch the Spring Gala on TV and talk happily after dinner. Little kids can also get red packets with lucky money from their parents and grandparents. In the following days, we visit our relatives and friends, and send our best wishes to each other.
I think the Spring Festival is really wonderful. It is a festival for family to get together, and we can feel the love and warmth from our family during the festival. It is the most interesting festival in my heart.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、节日话题表达
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖了提示的三个要点，内容具体充实，条理清晰，语言流畅自然，准确传达了对中国传统节日的喜爱，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求介绍中国传统节日，需覆盖三个核心要点：最喜欢的节日、节日庆祝方式、个人对节日的看法。解题思路：1. 选择活动丰富、易展开的典型中国传统节日（如春节）；2. 按时间线梳理节日活动：节前准备、节日当天（除夕）活动、节后活动，确保内容具体；3. 结合自身感受表达对节日的评价，保证行文连贯、词数达标，符合英语写作规范。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接已给开头句，明确点明最喜欢的节日是春节；2. 分阶段描述庆祝活动：节前人们打扫房屋、购置年货和新衣；除夕全家团聚吃团圆饭、吃饺子、看春晚、收压岁钱；节后走亲访友互送祝福；3. 表达个人看法，强调春节是家庭团聚的节日，充满爱与温暖，最后检查是否覆盖所有要点、词数符合要求，确保语言流畅自然。
【答案】
Traditional Chinese festivals are an important part of Chinese culture. My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Spring Festival, also called Chinese New Year.
Before the festival, people usually clean their houses carefully and buy lots of nice food and new clothes for the coming celebration. On New Year's Eve, all family members get together to have a big warm dinner. We often eat dumplings, watch the Spring Gala on TV and talk happily after dinner. Little kids can also get red packets with lucky money from their parents and grandparents. In the following days, we visit our relatives and friends, and send our best wishes to each other.
I think the Spring Festival is really wonderful. It is a festival for family to get together, and we can feel the love and warmth from our family during the festival. It is the most interesting festival in my heart.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、节日话题表达
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖了提示的三个要点，内容具体充实，条理清晰，语言流畅自然，准确传达了对中国传统节日的喜爱，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
