中国传统节日是我们中华民族悠久历史文化的组成部分，例如春节、元宵节、端午节、中秋节等。请以“An unforgettable festival”为题，分享你曾经度过的某个难忘的节日。
提示：
1. What is your unforgettable holiday?
2. Why is this holiday unforgettable to you?
3. What is your feeling?
要求:1. 包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯；
2. 不少于70个词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
【写作指导】
以“An unforgettable festival”为题,介绍你曾经度过的一个难忘的节日。根据提示可知:①人称:用第一、三人称;②时态:用一般现在时和一般过去时;③首先介绍最难忘的节日是什么,然后具体阐述在节日时的活动,最后表明自己的感受。
【写作提纲】

【小试身手】
An unforgettable festival
My favourite festival is

Period 7 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
An unforgettable festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. And I had an unforgettable one last year.
My parents prepared for the festival together. Mum bought new clothes for me and cooked much delicious food. My father cleaned and decorated the house. I tried my best to learn how to make jiaozi. At first, I didn't do it well. But my grandma taught me carefully. Then I kept practising and I made it!
I was happy because I could make jiaozi by myself!

【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题，主题是“An unforgettable festival”，属于记叙文写作。解题思路如下：首先确定要写的中国传统节日（如春节，贴合题目背景）；接着按照写作提纲结构，先点明难忘的节日，再具体描述节日中的活动（对应提纲里妈妈买新衣、爸爸装饰、自己学做某事），最后表达感受；写作时需注意时态（描述过去的节日用一般过去时）、人称（以第一人称为主），要包含所有提示要点，适当补充细节让内容充实，保证行文连贯且字数达标。
【解析】
1. 开头部分：点明最难忘的节日是春节，引出去年的难忘经历，对应提纲的Topic部分；
2. 主体部分：按照提纲Main body的要求，补充细节：妈妈为“我”买新衣、做美食，爸爸打扫装饰房子，“我”努力学做饺子，加入“一开始做不好、奶奶教导、最终成功”的细节，让内容更具体；
3. 结尾部分：对应Feeling部分，说明开心的原因是自己学会做饺子，呼应主题。
【答案】
An unforgettable festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. And I had an unforgettable one last year.
My parents prepared for the festival together. Mum bought new clothes for me and cooked much delicious food. My father cleaned and decorated the house. I tried my best to learn how to make jiaozi. At first, I didn't do it well. But my grandma taught me carefully. Then I kept practising and I made it!
I was happy because I could make jiaozi by myself!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、节日话题表达、一般过去时运用
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，完全覆盖题目要求的所有要点，补充了学做饺子的过程细节，行文连贯自然，准确运用一般过去时描述过去的经历，符合字数要求，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.5