A)一本好书就像一位好朋友,它能让你心情愉悦,带你去那些你从未到过的地方,帮助你发现未知的事物。请你根据下列提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下你最近读的一本书并谈谈你的收获。
写作要点:
1. Which book did you read?
2. What is the book about?
3. What have you learned from the book?
写作要求:
写作要点:
1. Which book did you read?
2. What is the book about?
3. What have you learned from the book?
写作要求:
答案
参考范文:
A good book is just like a great friend. Recently I have read a famous book called *The Old Man and the Sea*.
The book tells a story about an old fisherman. He fought with a huge fish and bad storm on the sea for nearly three days all by himself. He never gave up even when he was in great danger.
I have learned a lot from the book. I know we should never lose heart when we meet difficulties in daily life. If we keep trying, we can finally make our dream come true.
A good book is just like a great friend. Recently I have read a famous book called *The Old Man and the Sea*.
The book tells a story about an old fisherman. He fought with a huge fish and bad storm on the sea for nearly three days all by himself. He never gave up even when he was in great danger.
I have learned a lot from the book. I know we should never lose heart when we meet difficulties in daily life. If we keep trying, we can finally make our dream come true.
解析
这是符合八年级课标要求的读物介绍类话题书面表达,写作步骤如下:
① 审题:文体为说明文,以第一人称为主,时态结合一般过去时(描述阅读行为)、一般现在时(介绍书籍内容)、现在完成时(谈阅读收获),需要完整覆盖三个指定写作要点,词数控制在80-120词,适配八年级写作难度。
② 谋篇布局:开篇点出最近阅读的书籍名称,第二段简要介绍书籍核心内容,第三段说明阅读收获,收尾呼应题干“好书如好友”的主题。
③ 遣词造句优先选用八年级已学词汇和基础句型,避免超纲复杂结构,保证语句通顺逻辑连贯。
① 审题:文体为说明文,以第一人称为主,时态结合一般过去时(描述阅读行为)、一般现在时(介绍书籍内容)、现在完成时(谈阅读收获),需要完整覆盖三个指定写作要点,词数控制在80-120词,适配八年级写作难度。
② 谋篇布局:开篇点出最近阅读的书籍名称,第二段简要介绍书籍核心内容,第三段说明阅读收获,收尾呼应题干“好书如好友”的主题。
③ 遣词造句优先选用八年级已学词汇和基础句型,避免超纲复杂结构,保证语句通顺逻辑连贯。
1. 短文应包括所有写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3. 短文不少于80词。
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3. 短文不少于80词。
A few days ago, I read the Harry Potter books, which are very famous. In the books, the writer built a wonderful magical place loved by children all around the world.
Harry Potter is the main character in the books. He lost his parents at a very young age, but no matter what happens, he never loses hope.
He fights with bad guys with his friends and at last protects the whole magical world.
What I learned from the books is that I should be kind to others and never be afraid of difficulties. I should be brave.
That can help me go further.
I really recommend the books to you and I believe that if you have a chance to read them, you will fall in love with them.
答案
A few days ago, I read the Harry Potter books, which are very famous. In the books, the writer built a wonderful magical place loved by children all around the world. Harry Potter is the main character in the books. He lost his parents at a very young age, but no matter what happens, he never loses hope. He fights with bad guys with his friends and at last protects the whole magical world. What I learned from the books is that I should be kind to others and never be afraid of difficulties. I should be brave. That can help me go further. I really recommend the books to you and I believe that if you have a chance to read them, you will fall in love with them.
B) 我们每个人都应该投身公益志愿活动。假设你是李华,你校英语报正在举办以“Making a Difference”为主题的短文征集活动,请你根据下列提示写一篇短文投稿,分享你参与志愿活动的经历。
写作要点:
1. What volunteer activity did you take part in?
2. What did you do in the activity?
3. How did the activity influence you?
写作要求:
1. 短文应包括所有写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3. 短文不少于80词。
写作要点:
1. What volunteer activity did you take part in?
2. What did you do in the activity?
3. How did the activity influence you?
写作要求:
1. 短文应包括所有写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3. 短文不少于80词。
Last month, I took part in a volunteer activity at a local animal shelter.
When I arrived, I first helped the workers clean the animals' dirty cages and prepare fresh food for them.
Then I spent half an hour walking the shy dogs in the quiet yard and playing with the lonely cats.
Some of these animals were once homeless and scared, but they slowly wagged their tails and got close to me as we stayed together.
This experience taught me that small, kind efforts can truly warm others. I felt proud to see the animals become lively and happy because of me.
I'll keep joining in volunteer work in my free time to bring more warmth and make bigger differences!
答案
Last month, I took part in a volunteer activity at a local animal shelter. When I arrived, I first helped the workers clean the animals' dirty cages and prepare fresh food for them. Then I spent half an hour walking the shy dogs in the quiet yard and playing with the lonely cats. Some of these animals were once homeless and scared, but they slowly wagged their tails and got close to me as we stayed together. This experience taught me that small, kind efforts can truly warm others. I felt proud to see the animals become lively and happy because of me. I'll keep joining in volunteer work in my free time to bring more warmth and make bigger differences!
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