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剪纸是中国最流行的传统民间艺术形式之一。中国剪纸有一千五百多年的历史,在明朝和清朝时期the Ming and Qing dynasties尤其流行。人们常用剪纸美化居家环境,特别是在春节和婚庆期间,剪纸被用来装饰门窗和房间,以增加喜庆的气氛。剪纸最常用的颜色是红色,象征健康和兴旺。中国剪纸现在在世界各地都很受欢迎,经常被用作馈赠外国友人的礼物。
要求:根据以上信息写一篇80词左右的文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词语:folk art民间艺术;wedding celebrations婚庆;enhance增强;atmosphere氛围;symbolize象征;prosperity繁荣
Paper-cutting is one of the most popular forms of traditional Chinese folk art.
剪纸是中国最流行的传统民间艺术形式之一。中国剪纸有一千五百多年的历史,在明朝和清朝时期the Ming and Qing dynasties尤其流行。人们常用剪纸美化居家环境,特别是在春节和婚庆期间,剪纸被用来装饰门窗和房间,以增加喜庆的气氛。剪纸最常用的颜色是红色,象征健康和兴旺。中国剪纸现在在世界各地都很受欢迎,经常被用作馈赠外国友人的礼物。
要求:根据以上信息写一篇80词左右的文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词语:folk art民间艺术;wedding celebrations婚庆;enhance增强;atmosphere氛围;symbolize象征;prosperity繁荣
Paper-cutting is one of the most popular forms of traditional Chinese folk art.
Chinese paper-cutting has a history of more than 1,500 years. It was widely spread particularly during the Ming and Qing dynasties.
People often decorate their homes with paper-cutting.
During the Spring Festival and wedding celebrations, people use paper-cutting to decorate doors,windows and rooms to add the pleasant atmosphere.
The colour most commonly used in paper-cutting is red because it symbolizes health and prosperity.
Chinese paper-cutting is very popular around the world and it is often given as a present to foreign friends.
答案
One possible version:
Paper-cutting is one of the most popular forms of
traditional Chinese folk art. Chinese paper-cutting has a
history of more than 1,500 years. It was widely spread
particularly during the Ming and Qing dynasties.
People often decorate their homes with paper-cutting.
During the Spring Festival and wedding celebrations, people
use paper-cutting to decorate doors,windows and rooms to add
the pleasant atmosphere. The colour most commonly used in
paper-cutting is red because it symbolizes health and
prosperity. Chinese paper-cutting is very popular around the
world and it is often given as a present to foreign friends.
Paper-cutting is one of the most popular forms of
traditional Chinese folk art. Chinese paper-cutting has a
history of more than 1,500 years. It was widely spread
particularly during the Ming and Qing dynasties.
People often decorate their homes with paper-cutting.
During the Spring Festival and wedding celebrations, people
use paper-cutting to decorate doors,windows and rooms to add
the pleasant atmosphere. The colour most commonly used in
paper-cutting is red because it symbolizes health and
prosperity. Chinese paper-cutting is very popular around the
world and it is often given as a present to foreign friends.
解析
【分析】
首先承接已给出的开头句，按照题目提供的信息点依次展开写作：1. 介绍剪纸的历史；2. 说明其流行的特定时期；3. 阐述剪纸的用途（美化家居、节日婚庆装饰）；4. 说明常用颜色及象征意义；5. 提及剪纸在世界的流行情况及用途。写作时需使用提示词语，注意语句连贯，控制词数在80左右，覆盖所有要点。
【解析】
根据题目要求，结合提示词语，将各信息点用正确的英语句式串联：先写剪纸的历史（has a history of more than 1,500 years），再说明明清时期尤其流行（widely spread particularly during the Ming and Qing dynasties），接着讲用途（decorate homes, doors, windows and rooms），颜色红色象征健康和繁荣（symbolizes health and prosperity），最后说现在世界流行，作为礼物送外国友人（popular around the world, given as presents to foreign friends），确保语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Paper-cutting is one of the most popular forms of traditional Chinese folk art. Chinese paper-cutting has a history of more than 1,500 years. It was widely spread particularly during the Ming and Qing dynasties. People often decorate their homes with paper-cutting. During the Spring Festival and wedding celebrations, people use paper-cutting to decorate doors, windows and rooms to add the pleasant atmosphere. The colour most commonly used in paper-cutting is red because it symbolizes health and prosperity. Chinese paper-cutting is very popular around the world and it is often given as a present to foreign friends.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；中国传统文化英语应用
【点评】
该作文覆盖了题目所有要点，使用了提示词语，语句连贯自然，符合书面表达的要求，是一篇标准的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先承接已给出的开头句，按照题目提供的信息点依次展开写作：1. 介绍剪纸的历史；2. 说明其流行的特定时期；3. 阐述剪纸的用途（美化家居、节日婚庆装饰）；4. 说明常用颜色及象征意义；5. 提及剪纸在世界的流行情况及用途。写作时需使用提示词语，注意语句连贯，控制词数在80左右，覆盖所有要点。
【解析】
根据题目要求，结合提示词语，将各信息点用正确的英语句式串联：先写剪纸的历史（has a history of more than 1,500 years），再说明明清时期尤其流行（widely spread particularly during the Ming and Qing dynasties），接着讲用途（decorate homes, doors, windows and rooms），颜色红色象征健康和繁荣（symbolizes health and prosperity），最后说现在世界流行，作为礼物送外国友人（popular around the world, given as presents to foreign friends），确保语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Paper-cutting is one of the most popular forms of traditional Chinese folk art. Chinese paper-cutting has a history of more than 1,500 years. It was widely spread particularly during the Ming and Qing dynasties. People often decorate their homes with paper-cutting. During the Spring Festival and wedding celebrations, people use paper-cutting to decorate doors, windows and rooms to add the pleasant atmosphere. The colour most commonly used in paper-cutting is red because it symbolizes health and prosperity. Chinese paper-cutting is very popular around the world and it is often given as a present to foreign friends.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；中国传统文化英语应用
【点评】
该作文覆盖了题目所有要点，使用了提示词语，语句连贯自然，符合书面表达的要求，是一篇标准的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
