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十二、书面表达。(8分)
Su Yang要邀请外国朋友Carl参加学校的"元宵节晚会"。请根据提示写一封邀请信,包含以下内容:
guess lantern riddles eat tangyuan watch lanterns
要求:1.内容要包含所给信息,可适当拓展;
2.不少于40词。
Dear Carl,
The Lantern Festival is one of the special Chinese festivals.
Would you like to enjoy the festival with me at my school's party?
Yours,
Su Yang
Su Yang要邀请外国朋友Carl参加学校的"元宵节晚会"。请根据提示写一封邀请信,包含以下内容:
guess lantern riddles eat tangyuan watch lanterns
要求:1.内容要包含所给信息,可适当拓展;
2.不少于40词。
Dear Carl,
The Lantern Festival is one of the special Chinese festivals.
It's on the fifteenth day of
the first lunar month. There are many activities
on that day. We can watch lanterns and guess
lantern riddles in the evening. We also eat
tangyuan. It is sweet and delicious. Everyone
is happy on that day.
the first lunar month. There are many activities
on that day. We can watch lanterns and guess
lantern riddles in the evening. We also eat
tangyuan. It is sweet and delicious. Everyone
is happy on that day.
Would you like to enjoy the festival with me at my school's party?
Yours,
Su Yang
答案
参考范文:
Dear Carl,
The Lantern Festival is one of the special
Chinese festivals. It's on the fifteenth day of
the first lunar month. There are many activities
on that day. We can watch lanterns and guess
lantern riddles in the evening. We also eat
tangyuan. It is sweet and delicious. Everyone
is happy on that day.
Would you like to enjoy the festival with me
at my school's party?
Yours,
Su Yang
Dear Carl,
The Lantern Festival is one of the special
Chinese festivals. It's on the fifteenth day of
the first lunar month. There are many activities
on that day. We can watch lanterns and guess
lantern riddles in the evening. We also eat
tangyuan. It is sweet and delicious. Everyone
is happy on that day.
Would you like to enjoy the festival with me
at my school's party?
Yours,
Su Yang
解析
【分析】
这道题是节日主题的邀请信写作，首先明确核心要求：必须覆盖给出的三个关键活动watch lanterns（赏灯）、guess lantern riddles（猜灯谜）、eat tangyuan（吃汤圆），同时字数不少于40词。解题思路为：第一步先补充元宵节的基础常识，比如它的时间是农历正月十五，给外国受邀者做基础科普；第二步顺理成章引出学校元宵节晚会的相关安排，把三个要求的活动自然融入内容，还可以适当补充小细节，比如汤圆的口感、节日的欢乐氛围，让内容更饱满，最后衔接题目已经给出的结尾邀请句，保证行文流畅连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头句，先补充元宵节的基础信息，说明它的时间是农历正月十五，让节日介绍的逻辑更完整。
2. 接下来引出节日相关活动，依次点明晚会上可以观赏花灯、猜灯谜，自然覆盖前两个要求的活动。
3. 之后介绍节日特色食物汤圆，补充描述它香甜美味的特点，覆盖第三个要求的活动。
4. 最后补充一句节日里大家都很愉悦的描述，让内容完整通顺，字数满足不少于40词的要求，整体语气友好符合邀请信的语境。
【答案】
Dear Carl,
The Lantern Festival is one of the special Chinese festivals. It's on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month. There are many activities on that day. We can watch lanterns and guess lantern riddles in the evening. We also eat tangyuan. It is sweet and delicious. Everyone is happy on that day.
Would you like to enjoy the festival with me at my school's party?
Yours,
Su Yang
【知识点】
邀请信写作，元宵节相关表达，情景作文
【点评】
本题属于基础应用文体写作，只需要完整覆盖题干给出的三个核心提示活动，补充少量符合常识的节日相关内容，保证语句通顺、语气友好符合邀请信的语境，就可以拿到满分，非常适合低年级学生练习节日主题的英文写作。
【难度系数】
0.8
这道题是节日主题的邀请信写作，首先明确核心要求：必须覆盖给出的三个关键活动watch lanterns（赏灯）、guess lantern riddles（猜灯谜）、eat tangyuan（吃汤圆），同时字数不少于40词。解题思路为：第一步先补充元宵节的基础常识，比如它的时间是农历正月十五，给外国受邀者做基础科普；第二步顺理成章引出学校元宵节晚会的相关安排，把三个要求的活动自然融入内容，还可以适当补充小细节，比如汤圆的口感、节日的欢乐氛围，让内容更饱满，最后衔接题目已经给出的结尾邀请句，保证行文流畅连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头句，先补充元宵节的基础信息，说明它的时间是农历正月十五，让节日介绍的逻辑更完整。
2. 接下来引出节日相关活动，依次点明晚会上可以观赏花灯、猜灯谜，自然覆盖前两个要求的活动。
3. 之后介绍节日特色食物汤圆，补充描述它香甜美味的特点，覆盖第三个要求的活动。
4. 最后补充一句节日里大家都很愉悦的描述，让内容完整通顺，字数满足不少于40词的要求，整体语气友好符合邀请信的语境。
【答案】
Dear Carl,
The Lantern Festival is one of the special Chinese festivals. It's on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month. There are many activities on that day. We can watch lanterns and guess lantern riddles in the evening. We also eat tangyuan. It is sweet and delicious. Everyone is happy on that day.
Would you like to enjoy the festival with me at my school's party?
Yours,
Su Yang
【知识点】
邀请信写作，元宵节相关表达，情景作文
【点评】
本题属于基础应用文体写作，只需要完整覆盖题干给出的三个核心提示活动，补充少量符合常识的节日相关内容，保证语句通顺、语气友好符合邀请信的语境，就可以拿到满分，非常适合低年级学生练习节日主题的英文写作。
【难度系数】
0.8
