教材写作应用
在科技迅速发展的今天，人们的生活发生了很多变化，未来也一定会有新的变化。假定你是李华，你将参加你校英文广播站举办的以“Life in the Future”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。

▶▶审作文题
1. 文体：
2. 人称：
3. 时态：
4. 写作要点：①；②；③；④

1. 说明文
2. 第一人称和第三人称
3. 一般将来时
4. ①交通方面 ②住房方面 ③机器人的使用方面 ④我的感受

【分析】
本题是英语写作的审题练习题，需结合征文主题“Life in the Future”和给出的插图提示，明确写作的文体、人称、时态及核心要点。解题时，先根据征文目的（介绍未来生活）确定文体；再根据写作内容（描述他人未来情况、表达自身感受）确定人称；根据描述未来的语境确定时态；最后对应插图的四个分类梳理写作要点。
【解析】
1. 文体：征文主题是介绍未来生活，属于说明性内容，故为说明文；
2. 人称：描述他人的未来生活用第三人称，表达自身感受用第一人称，因此是第一人称和第三人称；
3. 时态：描述未来的情况需用一般将来时；
4. 写作要点：对应插图的四个部分，分别是交通方面（飞行汽车）、住房方面（海底/其他星球）、机器人的使用方面（做简单工作）、自身感受。
【答案】
1. 说明文；2. 第一人称和第三人称；3. 一般将来时；4. ①交通方面 ②住房方面 ③机器人的使用方面 ④我的感受
【知识点】
英语写作审题、一般将来时、英语文体判断
【点评】
本题聚焦英语写作的前期审题环节，是写好作文的关键基础，通过明确文体、人称、时态和写作要点，帮助学生理清写作思路，难度较低，适合基础阶段练习。
【难度系数】
0.3

▶▶搭建框架
（温馨提示:请先完成下面的写作提纲）

▶▶小试身手
Life in the Future

▶▶搭建框架
Beginning: No one knows what the future will be like.
Everyone has a prediction for their future lives.
Body: Transportation—flying cars
Houses—under the sea on other planets
Robots—help do easy jobs
Ending: My feelings
▶▶小试身手
【基础版】
One possible version:
Life in the Future
No one knows what the future will be like. But everyone has a prediction for their future lives.
For me, the future life must be very different from now. First, people will live anywhere they want, like living under the sea or on other planets. Second, there will be fewer cars on the roads because they will fly in the sky. Third, robots will play a part in our lives and help us do some easy jobs over and over again. Last but not least, it's possible for people to have more free time to relax.
I think our world will become better.
【提升版】
One possible version:
Life in the Future
Although no one knows what the future will be like, everyone has a prediction for their future lives.
As far as I know, the future life must be very different from now. To begin with, we will find the footprints of humans anywhere, under the sea or on other planets. Also, there will be more cars flying in the sky, taking us anywhere interesting. More importantly, robots will play a part in our lives and help with some simple and boring jobs. Last but not least, it's possible for people to have more free time to relax.
I think the future will be better and better and people will live a happier life.

【分析】
本题是英语写作题，要求结合给定的思维导图（主题为Life in the Future，分为Beginning、Body、Ending三部分，Body包含Transportation、Houses、Robots三个子项）完成写作。解题思路：1. 先梳理思维导图结构，明确写作的三个核心模块（开头、主体、结尾）；2. 开头部分引出对未来生活的预测，点明主题；3. 主体部分分别围绕交通（如飞行汽车）、居住（如海底/其他星球）、机器人（做简单工作）展开具体描述；4. 结尾部分表达对未来生活的感受或展望，确保写作符合思维导图框架，内容连贯合理。
【解析】
搭建框架时，Beginning围绕“对未来生活的未知与预测”展开；Body对应思维导图的三个子项，分别设定具体内容；Ending表达个人感受。小试身手部分，基础版和提升版均以搭建的框架为基础，用合适的连接词串联内容，围绕未来生活的变化展开描述，确保语法正确、语句通顺，符合英语写作的表达规范。
【答案】
▶▶搭建框架
Beginning: No one knows what the future will be like.
Everyone has a prediction for their future lives.
Body: Transportation—flying cars
Houses—under the sea on other planets
Robots—help do easy jobs
Ending: My feelings
▶▶小试身手
【基础版】
One possible version:
Life in the Future
No one knows what the future will be like. But everyone has a prediction for their future lives.
For me, the future life must be very different from now. First, people will live anywhere they want, like living under the sea or on other planets. Second, there will be fewer cars on the roads because they will fly in the sky. Third, robots will play a part in our lives and help us do some easy jobs over and over again. Last but not least, it's possible for people to have more free time to relax.
I think our world will become better.
【提升版】
One possible version:
Life in the Future
Although no one knows what the future will be like, everyone has a prediction for their future lives.
As far as I know, the future life must be very different from now. To begin with, we will find the footprints of humans anywhere, under the sea or on other planets. Also, there will be more cars flying in the sky, taking us anywhere interesting. More importantly, robots will play a part in our lives and help with some simple and boring jobs. Last but not least, it's possible for people to have more free time to relax.
I think the future will be better and better and people will live a happier life.
【知识点】
英语写作、话题提纲搭建、未来生活表达
【点评】
本题围绕“未来生活”这一初中英语常见写作话题，通过思维导图明确写作框架，考查学生的结构搭建能力与话题想象表达能力，要求结合给定要点展开合理描述，语言需连贯准确，是典型的英语写作训练题。
【难度系数】
0.6