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2026年3月3日是第十三个“世界野生动植物日”,全球宣传主题为“药用与芳香植物:守护健康、遗产与生计”。保护动植物,就是守护我们的未来。现在我国大熊猫贤贤和她的幼崽一同参与野化放归培训,为重归山林做准备。请你用贤贤的口吻写封信。

参考词汇:symbol 象征;destroy 破坏
[思路点拨]
1. 文体:应用文。2. 时态:以一般现在时为主。3. 人称:以第一人称为主。4. 要点提示:按“大熊猫的基本信息——大熊猫的烦恼——大熊猫的愿望”的顺序来写作。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
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2026年3月3日是第十三个“世界野生动植物日”,全球宣传主题为“药用与芳香植物:守护健康、遗产与生计”。保护动植物,就是守护我们的未来。现在我国大熊猫贤贤和她的幼崽一同参与野化放归培训,为重归山林做准备。请你用贤贤的口吻写封信。
参考词汇:symbol 象征;destroy 破坏
[思路点拨]
1. 文体:应用文。2. 时态:以一般现在时为主。3. 人称:以第一人称为主。4. 要点提示:按“大熊猫的基本信息——大熊猫的烦恼——大熊猫的愿望”的顺序来写作。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear friends,
My name is Xianxian. I come from Sichuan. I'm the symbol of China. I usually feed on bamboo.
My name is Xianxian. I come from Sichuan. I'm the symbol of China. I usually feed on bamboo.
However, I have few friends. The number of us is falling quickly. And our homes are often destroyed. Our living places are becoming fewer and fewer. Also, we can't find enough food to eat.
We are humans' good friends. I hope humans will stop cutting down the bamboo forests. Please set up more nature parks for us at the same time. Then we will have enough bamboo to eat.
We'll be able to live in peace and enjoy our lives happily.
Yours,
Xianxian
Yours,
Xianxian
答案
One possible version:
Dear friends,
My name is Xianxian. I come from Sichuan. I'm the symbol of China. I usually feed on bamboo. However, I have few friends. The number of us is falling quickly. And our homes are often destroyed. Our living places are becoming fewer and fewer. Also, we can't find enough food to eat.
We are humans' good friends. I hope humans will stop cutting down the bamboo forests. Please set up more nature parks for us at the same time. Then we will have enough bamboo to eat. We'll be able to live in peace and enjoy our lives happily.
Yours,
Xianxian
Dear friends,
My name is Xianxian. I come from Sichuan. I'm the symbol of China. I usually feed on bamboo. However, I have few friends. The number of us is falling quickly. And our homes are often destroyed. Our living places are becoming fewer and fewer. Also, we can't find enough food to eat.
We are humans' good friends. I hope humans will stop cutting down the bamboo forests. Please set up more nature parks for us at the same time. Then we will have enough bamboo to eat. We'll be able to live in peace and enjoy our lives happily.
Yours,
Xianxian
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求以大熊猫贤贤的口吻写书信,需遵循:①文体为书信,采用第一人称;②时态以一般现在时为主;③按“大熊猫基本信息→烦恼→愿望”的思路展开,结合参考词汇(symbol、destroy),紧扣世界野生动植物日主题,体现保护动植物的意义。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 开头写称呼Dear friends,自我介绍(姓名、来自四川、是中国象征、食物为竹子);2. 阐述烦恼:种群数量减少、家园被破坏、食物不足;3. 表达愿望:希望人类停止砍伐竹林、建立更多自然公园,能和平生活;4. 结尾署名Xianxian,确保语言通顺,符合第一人称口吻,正确运用一般现在时。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear friends,
My name is Xianxian. I come from Sichuan. I'm the symbol of China. I usually feed on bamboo. However, I have few friends. The number of us is falling quickly. And our homes are often destroyed. Our living places are becoming fewer and fewer. Also, we can't find enough food to eat.
We are humans' good friends. I hope humans will stop cutting down the bamboo forests. Please set up more nature parks for us at the same time. Then we will have enough bamboo to eat. We'll be able to live in peace and enjoy our lives happily.
Yours,
Xianxian
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、要点式写作
【点评】
范文严格遵循写作要求,以贤贤的第一人称口吻展开,时态正确,涵盖所有要点,恰当运用参考词汇,语言通顺自然,体现了保护野生动植物的主题。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求以大熊猫贤贤的口吻写书信,需遵循:①文体为书信,采用第一人称;②时态以一般现在时为主;③按“大熊猫基本信息→烦恼→愿望”的思路展开,结合参考词汇(symbol、destroy),紧扣世界野生动植物日主题,体现保护动植物的意义。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 开头写称呼Dear friends,自我介绍(姓名、来自四川、是中国象征、食物为竹子);2. 阐述烦恼:种群数量减少、家园被破坏、食物不足;3. 表达愿望:希望人类停止砍伐竹林、建立更多自然公园,能和平生活;4. 结尾署名Xianxian,确保语言通顺,符合第一人称口吻,正确运用一般现在时。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear friends,
My name is Xianxian. I come from Sichuan. I'm the symbol of China. I usually feed on bamboo. However, I have few friends. The number of us is falling quickly. And our homes are often destroyed. Our living places are becoming fewer and fewer. Also, we can't find enough food to eat.
We are humans' good friends. I hope humans will stop cutting down the bamboo forests. Please set up more nature parks for us at the same time. Then we will have enough bamboo to eat. We'll be able to live in peace and enjoy our lives happily.
Yours,
Xianxian
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、要点式写作
【点评】
范文严格遵循写作要求,以贤贤的第一人称口吻展开,时态正确,涵盖所有要点,恰当运用参考词汇,语言通顺自然,体现了保护野生动植物的主题。
【难度系数】
0.6
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