一 方法指导 描述自己的假期或旅行可按“三步四要素法”写作。第一步,开头,总体概括,点明事件发生的时间;第二步,正文,可以描述假期或旅行去了哪里、相关的人物、乘坐的交通工具及做了什么事情四要素;第三步,结尾,描述自己对此次经历的感受。
二 素材积累

三 以读促写(阅读范文,完成任务,体悟写法)
Last winter holiday, I went to Harbin with my parents. It's in the north of China. We went there by plane. The weather was different from that in my hometown. It was very cold and snowy in Harbin. You must wear warm clothes. We made a snowman. We saw some shows there. We took many pictures and ate some delicious food. I was so happy.
任务一:阅读短文,完成思维导图。
任务二:阅读短文,回答下列问题。
1. How did they go to Harbin?
2. What was the weather like in Harbin in winter?
四 小试身手(参照以上范文,自己动手写一写吧)
暑假刚刚过去,John用日记记录了自己假期的旅行经历。请根据图片提示,完成日记。

18th July, Friday Sunny
二 素材积累
三 以读促写(阅读范文,完成任务,体悟写法)
Last winter holiday, I went to Harbin with my parents. It's in the north of China. We went there by plane. The weather was different from that in my hometown. It was very cold and snowy in Harbin. You must wear warm clothes. We made a snowman. We saw some shows there. We took many pictures and ate some delicious food. I was so happy.
任务一:阅读短文,完成思维导图。
任务二:阅读短文,回答下列问题。
1. How did they go to Harbin?
They went to Harbin by plane.
2. What was the weather like in Harbin in winter?
It was very cold and snowy.
四 小试身手(参照以上范文,自己动手写一写吧)
暑假刚刚过去,John用日记记录了自己假期的旅行经历。请根据图片提示,完成日记。
18th July, Friday Sunny
It was sunny today. I went to Beijing with my parents.
We went there by plane. We went to the Great Wall and the Bird's Nest.
And we ate Beijing Roast Duck. It was delicious.
We had a good time. We were very happy.
答案
任务一:
1. Harbin
2. made a snowman
3. took many pictures
4. some delicious food
5. happy
任务二:
1. They went to Harbin by plane.
2. It was very cold and snowy.
四 范文:
18th July, Friday Sunny
It was sunny today. I went to Beijing with my parents. We went there by plane. We went to the Great Wall and the Bird's Nest. And we ate Beijing Roast Duck. It was delicious. We had a good time. We were very happy.
1. Harbin
2. made a snowman
3. took many pictures
4. some delicious food
5. happy
任务二:
1. They went to Harbin by plane.
2. It was very cold and snowy.
四 范文:
18th July, Friday Sunny
It was sunny today. I went to Beijing with my parents. We went there by plane. We went to the Great Wall and the Bird's Nest. And we ate Beijing Roast Duck. It was delicious. We had a good time. We were very happy.
解析
【分析】本题是英语读写综合题,分为信息提取(任务一、任务二)和模仿写作(任务四)。解题思路:1. 任务一需从范文中提取对应思维导图的关键信息(地点、活动、感受等);2. 任务二需定位原文细节,回答关于交通和天气的问题;3. 任务四需遵循“三步四要素法”,参照范文的日记格式,结合假期旅行主题,用一般过去式完成日记,包含时间、人物、地点、交通、活动、感受等要素。
【解析】任务一:根据范文内容,思维导图对应信息为:1. 旅行地点Harbin;2. 活动made a snowman;3. 活动took many pictures;4. 美食some delicious food;5. 感受happy。任务二:1. 从范文“We went there by plane.”提取交通方式;2. 从范文“It was very cold and snowy in Harbin.”提取天气信息。任务四:日记需符合格式要求,采用一般过去式,包含开头点明时间天气、正文说明人物/地点/交通/活动、结尾表达感受,参照范文完成。
【答案】任务一:1. Harbin;2. made a snowman;3. took many pictures;4. some delicious food;5. happy。任务二:1. They went to Harbin by plane.;2. It was very cold and snowy.。范文:18th July, Friday Sunny It was sunny today. I went to Beijing with my parents. We went there by plane. We went to the Great Wall and the Bird's Nest. And we ate Beijing Roast Duck. It was delicious. We had a good time. We were very happy.
【知识点】英语阅读理解、英语日记写作、一般过去时
【点评】本题围绕假期旅行主题,将阅读信息提取与模仿写作结合,考察学生基础英语能力,贴近学生生活,易于上手。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】任务一:根据范文内容,思维导图对应信息为:1. 旅行地点Harbin;2. 活动made a snowman;3. 活动took many pictures;4. 美食some delicious food;5. 感受happy。任务二:1. 从范文“We went there by plane.”提取交通方式;2. 从范文“It was very cold and snowy in Harbin.”提取天气信息。任务四:日记需符合格式要求,采用一般过去式,包含开头点明时间天气、正文说明人物/地点/交通/活动、结尾表达感受,参照范文完成。
【答案】任务一:1. Harbin;2. made a snowman;3. took many pictures;4. some delicious food;5. happy。任务二:1. They went to Harbin by plane.;2. It was very cold and snowy.。范文:18th July, Friday Sunny It was sunny today. I went to Beijing with my parents. We went there by plane. We went to the Great Wall and the Bird's Nest. And we ate Beijing Roast Duck. It was delicious. We had a good time. We were very happy.
【知识点】英语阅读理解、英语日记写作、一般过去时
【点评】本题围绕假期旅行主题,将阅读信息提取与模仿写作结合,考察学生基础英语能力,贴近学生生活,易于上手。
【难度系数】0.3
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