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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D34
课桌里褪色的笔记本、书包上摇晃的钥匙扣、储物柜里的球鞋……那些看似普通的物品，总会在某个瞬间让记忆泛起温暖的涟漪。在你的成长过程中，一定也收到过这样的礼物吧！其中某件礼物或许承载着特别的故事。假如你是李华，请以“The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received”为题，根据以下提示和要求，介绍这份礼物的来历、背后的故事及其意义。
提示:1.What is it? Who gave it to you? How long have you kept it?
2.What’s the story behind it?
3.Why is it special to you? Give your reasons.
要求:1.围绕以上提示展开写作并适当发挥补充,使文章内容充实；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is
课桌里褪色的笔记本、书包上摇晃的钥匙扣、储物柜里的球鞋……那些看似普通的物品，总会在某个瞬间让记忆泛起温暖的涟漪。在你的成长过程中，一定也收到过这样的礼物吧！其中某件礼物或许承载着特别的故事。假如你是李华，请以“The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received”为题，根据以下提示和要求，介绍这份礼物的来历、背后的故事及其意义。
提示:1.What is it? Who gave it to you? How long have you kept it?
2.What’s the story behind it?
3.Why is it special to you? Give your reasons.
要求:1.围绕以上提示展开写作并适当发挥补充,使文章内容充实；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is
a lovely key ring. My best friend gave it to me three years ago and I have kept it hanging on my schoolbag all the time.
I got it when we were going to leave our primary school. On that day, she gave it to me as a goodbye gift.
She hoped we would always stay in touch and be good friends forever.
The key ring is simple but meaningful to me.
It always reminds me of our sweet days together.
Whenever I see it, I feel warm and truly treasure our precious friendship.
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is a lovely key ring. My best friend gave it to me three years ago and I have kept it hanging on my schoolbag all the time.
I got it when we were going to leave our primary school. On that day, she gave it to me as a goodbye gift. She hoped we would always stay in touch and be good friends forever.
The key ring is simple but meaningful to me. It always reminds me of our sweet days together. Whenever I see it, I feel warm and truly treasure our precious friendship.
进阶版范文
The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is a delicate key ring. It was given to me by my closest friend three years ago, and I have kept it hanging on my schoolbag ever since.
I received it at the end of our primary school days. As a parting gift, she shared her sincere wishes and hoped our friendship would never fade with time. We promised to keep in touch no matter how time flies.
Though it looks ordinary and not expensive at all, it means a great deal to me. It reminds me of those happy moments we spent together. Whenever I catch sight of it, a sense of warmth fills my heart and makes me value our friendship even more.
基础版范文
The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is a lovely key ring. My best friend gave it to me three years ago and I have kept it hanging on my schoolbag all the time.
I got it when we were going to leave our primary school. On that day, she gave it to me as a goodbye gift. She hoped we would always stay in touch and be good friends forever.
The key ring is simple but meaningful to me. It always reminds me of our sweet days together. Whenever I see it, I feel warm and truly treasure our precious friendship.
进阶版范文
The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is a delicate key ring. It was given to me by my closest friend three years ago, and I have kept it hanging on my schoolbag ever since.
I received it at the end of our primary school days. As a parting gift, she shared her sincere wishes and hoped our friendship would never fade with time. We promised to keep in touch no matter how time flies.
Though it looks ordinary and not expensive at all, it means a great deal to me. It reminds me of those happy moments we spent together. Whenever I catch sight of it, a sense of warmth fills my heart and makes me value our friendship even more.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语主题写作题，要求以指定题目介绍成长中收到的特别礼物，需覆盖三个核心提示要点：礼物的基本信息（物品、赠送者、保存时长）、背后的故事、特殊意义。解题思路：先选取贴近学生生活的小礼物（如钥匙扣），结合小学离别这类有情感共鸣的场景，按提示补充细节，突出礼物承载的情感（如友谊），确保内容充实、符合词数要求，不出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接已给开头，明确核心礼物为钥匙扣，说明赠送者是小学好友，已保存三年；2. 补充故事背景：小学毕业离别时，好友将钥匙扣作为告别礼物，传递保持友谊的祝福；3. 阐述特殊意义：钥匙扣虽普通，但承载了与好友的美好回忆，提醒珍惜友谊；4. 调整语言，控制词数在80左右，符合题目要求。
【答案】
The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is a lovely key ring. My best friend gave it to me three years ago and I have kept it hanging on my schoolbag all the time.
I got it when we were going to leave our primary school. On that day, she gave it to me as a goodbye gift. She hoped we would always stay in touch and be good friends forever.
The key ring is simple but meaningful to me. It always reminds me of our sweet days together. Whenever I see it, I feel warm and truly treasure our precious friendship.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语主题表达、情感类写作
【点评】
本题围绕学生熟悉的成长经历设计写作任务，要求清晰，既考查学生的英语语言组织能力，又引导学生表达真情实感，贴近学生生活，便于学生发挥。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语主题写作题，要求以指定题目介绍成长中收到的特别礼物，需覆盖三个核心提示要点：礼物的基本信息（物品、赠送者、保存时长）、背后的故事、特殊意义。解题思路：先选取贴近学生生活的小礼物（如钥匙扣），结合小学离别这类有情感共鸣的场景，按提示补充细节，突出礼物承载的情感（如友谊），确保内容充实、符合词数要求，不出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接已给开头，明确核心礼物为钥匙扣，说明赠送者是小学好友，已保存三年；2. 补充故事背景：小学毕业离别时，好友将钥匙扣作为告别礼物，传递保持友谊的祝福；3. 阐述特殊意义：钥匙扣虽普通，但承载了与好友的美好回忆，提醒珍惜友谊；4. 调整语言，控制词数在80左右，符合题目要求。
【答案】
The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is a lovely key ring. My best friend gave it to me three years ago and I have kept it hanging on my schoolbag all the time.
I got it when we were going to leave our primary school. On that day, she gave it to me as a goodbye gift. She hoped we would always stay in touch and be good friends forever.
The key ring is simple but meaningful to me. It always reminds me of our sweet days together. Whenever I see it, I feel warm and truly treasure our precious friendship.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语主题表达、情感类写作
【点评】
本题围绕学生熟悉的成长经历设计写作任务，要求清晰，既考查学生的英语语言组织能力，又引导学生表达真情实感，贴近学生生活，便于学生发挥。
【难度系数】
0.3
