主题语境:人与社会——和谐家庭
写作题目:
假如你叫王涛,为构建和谐家庭,秉承家务我分担的理念,你在家经常帮父母做家务,比如扫地、洗碗、倒垃圾、铺床、洗衣服等。你觉得学生应该做一些家务,这样可以减轻父母的负担,让父母有时间休息,而且可以使自己放松。请根据以上提示,写一篇80词左右的短文,可以适当发挥。
Step 1.辨模式(Patterns)——辨识特征 列纲建模
1.辨人称: 第一人称
2.辨时态: 一般现在时
3.辨核心:个人家务劳动及看法

Step 2.明实例(Examples)——润色成篇 典例示范

续表
范文点评:
本文要点全面,叙事条理,具体优点有:
①开篇点题,介绍王涛经常做家务。
②运用and连接并列谓语,增加句式多样性。
③用If引导条件状语从句,升级句型。
Step 3.会实践(Practice)——迁移创新 实战演练
对于初中学生是否应该帮忙做家务这一话题,不同学生有不同的看法。请你根据下面表格中的提示写一篇短文,谈谈你的观点。
内容提示:

要求:
(1)语言准确,行文连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
(2)80词左右,短文开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
Should students help with the housework at home? Different students have different opinions about it.

Should students help with the housework at home? Different students have different opinions about it.
Some students think we should help with the housework. Firstly, doing some housework can make us independent. Secondly, doing some housework can keep us healthy and strong, because we can exercise and relax by doing housework. Finally, doing some housework can share our parents' work. So they will have more time to rest after work.
However, other students don't think so. They believe that we will have less time to study if we spend time doing housework. They think it's a waste of time. Besides, we will not be able to focus all our attention on schoolwork.
I think it's important for students to learn how to do chores and help their parents with housework. But they should do their homework first.

【分析】这是一道英语观点类写作题，要求围绕“学生是否应帮父母做家务”展开，开头已给出，需分三部分完成：①阐述支持学生做家务的理由；②阐述反对学生做家务的理由；③表达个人观点。解题思路：先承接给定开头，用“Some students...”引出支持方观点，用“However”转折引出反对方观点，最后用“I think”表达自己的看法；写作时需用一般现在时、第一人称，运用firstly、secondly等连接词使条理清晰，控制字数在80词左右，确保语言准确连贯。
【解析】1. 承接给定开头，引出不同学生的观点；2. 写支持做家务的学生的理由：Firstly，做家务能培养独立性；Secondly，做家务可锻炼身体、放松；Finally，能分担父母工作，让父母有时间休息；3. 写反对做家务的学生的理由：认为做家务会占用学习时间，浪费时间，影响学业；4. 表达个人观点：学生学做家务很重要，但应先完成作业；5. 检查时态（一般现在时）、人称（第一人称），确保句式多样，符合字数要求。
【答案】Should students help with the housework at home? Different students have different opinions about it.
Some students think we should help with the housework. Firstly, doing some housework can make us independent. Secondly, doing some housework can keep us healthy and strong, because we can exercise and relax by doing housework. Finally, doing some housework can share our parents' work. So they will have more time to rest after work.
However, other students don't think so. They believe that we will have less time to study if we spend time doing housework. They think it's a waste of time. Besides, we will not be able to focus all our attention on schoolwork.
I think it's important for students to learn how to do chores and help their parents with housework. But they should do their homework first.
【知识点】英语观点类写作、一般现在时、议论文结构
【点评】范文结构清晰，层次分明，通过正反对比论述观点，运用firstly、secondly等连接词和if引导的状语从句，句式丰富，要点全面，准确表达了对学生做家务的看法，符合初中英语写作要求。
【难度系数】0.5