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作为中学生，我们应该树立正确的金钱观和消费观。某英语报社的公众号最近围绕此内容推出一期活动，以“我的压岁钱我做主”为主题，向全市中学生征稿。
要点:1. Do you manage money? 2. What did you do with your lucky money? 3. Your advice on how to use the lucky money better.
要求:1. 短文应包括所有的要点,可适当发挥;2. 词数80~100。
[高分范文]
What do you do with your lucky money?
Nowadays, parents give children more and more lucky money. As a middle school student, it's important for us to learn about money and spending wisely. ①
I do manage my money. ② I usually divide ② my lucky money into several parts. I use some of it to buy books which can enrich my knowledge ②. Reading different kinds of ② books broadens my horizons. Also, I set aside a part to buy gifts for my parents on special days, because they have done so much for me ②.
To use lucky money better ③, I suggest we make a plan before spending. We can think about what we really need. Moreover, we can save some in the bank so that we can use it when we are in need. ③ By doing these, we can develop a good habit of managing money.
[名师点评]
范文介绍了自己如何使用压岁钱，并提出建议，文章逻辑性强、层次分明。
① 文章开篇点题，使用结构“it's + adj. + for sb. + to do sth.”引出下文，树立正确的金钱观和消费观。
② 使用强调句讲述自己管钱，divide into及different kinds of等短语的使用提升了文章的含金量；定语从句、动名词作主语及because引导的原因状语从句的使用丰富了句式结构。
③ 用动词不定式引出合理使用压岁钱的建议，so that引导的目的状语从句强调存钱的意义。
作为中学生，我们应该树立正确的金钱观和消费观。某英语报社的公众号最近围绕此内容推出一期活动，以“我的压岁钱我做主”为主题，向全市中学生征稿。
要点:1. Do you manage money? 2. What did you do with your lucky money? 3. Your advice on how to use the lucky money better.
要求:1. 短文应包括所有的要点,可适当发挥;2. 词数80~100。
[高分范文]
What do you do with your lucky money?
Nowadays, parents give children more and more lucky money. As a middle school student, it's important for us to learn about money and spending wisely. ①
I do manage my money. ② I usually divide ② my lucky money into several parts. I use some of it to buy books which can enrich my knowledge ②. Reading different kinds of ② books broadens my horizons. Also, I set aside a part to buy gifts for my parents on special days, because they have done so much for me ②.
To use lucky money better ③, I suggest we make a plan before spending. We can think about what we really need. Moreover, we can save some in the bank so that we can use it when we are in need. ③ By doing these, we can develop a good habit of managing money.
[名师点评]
范文介绍了自己如何使用压岁钱，并提出建议，文章逻辑性强、层次分明。
① 文章开篇点题，使用结构“it's + adj. + for sb. + to do sth.”引出下文，树立正确的金钱观和消费观。
② 使用强调句讲述自己管钱，divide into及different kinds of等短语的使用提升了文章的含金量；定语从句、动名词作主语及because引导的原因状语从句的使用丰富了句式结构。
③ 用动词不定式引出合理使用压岁钱的建议，so that引导的目的状语从句强调存钱的意义。
答案
What do you do with your lucky money?
Nowadays we can get quite a lot of lucky money every Spring Festival. As a middle school student, it's important for us to use money wisely.
I do manage my lucky money. I divide it into several parts: some is for buying useful books to enrich my knowledge, a small part is for buying gifts for my parents, and the rest I save for future use.
To use lucky money better, I advise us to make a spending plan first, and never waste money on unnecessary things. It helps us develop a good habit of managing money.
Nowadays we can get quite a lot of lucky money every Spring Festival. As a middle school student, it's important for us to use money wisely.
I do manage my lucky money. I divide it into several parts: some is for buying useful books to enrich my knowledge, a small part is for buying gifts for my parents, and the rest I save for future use.
To use lucky money better, I advise us to make a spending plan first, and never waste money on unnecessary things. It helps us develop a good habit of managing money.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，主题围绕“我的压岁钱我做主”，要求中学生结合正确的金钱观与消费观完成写作，需覆盖三个核心要点：是否管理压岁钱、压岁钱的具体用途、合理使用压岁钱的建议。解题时需先搭建写作框架，开篇点题引出合理用财的重要性，中间分述自身管理压岁钱的方式与具体用途，最后提出合理使用的建议，同时控制词数，运用学过的句式提升文章质量，确保逻辑连贯、要点齐全。
【解析】
本题需按照题目要求完成英语短文写作，步骤如下：1. 开篇点题，结合中学生身份引出合理使用金钱的重要性；2. 说明自己管理压岁钱的方式，具体列举用途（如购买书籍、为父母买礼物、储蓄）；3. 提出合理使用压岁钱的建议（如制定消费计划、不浪费不必要的物品）；4. 收尾总结，点明培养理财习惯的意义。写作时需注意词数在80-100之间，运用正确的语法和句式，确保所有要求的要点都被覆盖。
【答案】
What do you do with your lucky money?
Nowadays we can get quite a lot of lucky money every Spring Festival. As a middle school student, it's important for us to use money wisely.
I do manage my lucky money. I divide it into several parts: some is for buying useful books to enrich my knowledge, a small part is for buying gifts for my parents, and the rest I save for future use.
To use lucky money better, I advise us to make a spending plan first, and never waste money on unnecessary things. It helps us develop a good habit of managing money.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文写作、常用句式运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，逻辑清晰，层次分明，运用了强调句、冒号列举等多种句式，语言简洁流畅，传递了正确的金钱观与消费观，符合中学生的写作水平，是一篇优秀的应试范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，主题围绕“我的压岁钱我做主”，要求中学生结合正确的金钱观与消费观完成写作，需覆盖三个核心要点：是否管理压岁钱、压岁钱的具体用途、合理使用压岁钱的建议。解题时需先搭建写作框架，开篇点题引出合理用财的重要性，中间分述自身管理压岁钱的方式与具体用途，最后提出合理使用的建议，同时控制词数，运用学过的句式提升文章质量，确保逻辑连贯、要点齐全。
【解析】
本题需按照题目要求完成英语短文写作，步骤如下：1. 开篇点题，结合中学生身份引出合理使用金钱的重要性；2. 说明自己管理压岁钱的方式，具体列举用途（如购买书籍、为父母买礼物、储蓄）；3. 提出合理使用压岁钱的建议（如制定消费计划、不浪费不必要的物品）；4. 收尾总结，点明培养理财习惯的意义。写作时需注意词数在80-100之间，运用正确的语法和句式，确保所有要求的要点都被覆盖。
【答案】
What do you do with your lucky money?
Nowadays we can get quite a lot of lucky money every Spring Festival. As a middle school student, it's important for us to use money wisely.
I do manage my lucky money. I divide it into several parts: some is for buying useful books to enrich my knowledge, a small part is for buying gifts for my parents, and the rest I save for future use.
To use lucky money better, I advise us to make a spending plan first, and never waste money on unnecessary things. It helps us develop a good habit of managing money.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文写作、常用句式运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，逻辑清晰，层次分明，运用了强调句、冒号列举等多种句式，语言简洁流畅，传递了正确的金钱观与消费观，符合中学生的写作水平，是一篇优秀的应试范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
素材积累 ＞＞
[开头句]
1. Besides meeting our daily needs, money can also be given away to help others. （用途）
2. One of the best ways to get money is to use a dream tin. （方法）
[中间句]
1. I'd surely go where I can have ten times more pocket money. （方法）
2. As for me, I prefer to save money to donate it to the people who need it most. （用途）
[结尾句]
They have something much more important than money—they have love. （意义）
[名言警句]
A penny saved is a penny earned.
省下一分钱,就是赚到一分钱。
写作演练 ＞＞
阅读是生活中必不可少的一部分。你校英语社团开展“好书推荐”的英语征文活动,请你向同学们推荐一部关于金钱的作品。
要求:1. 词数 80~100;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[思路点拨]
1. 体裁:记叙文;2. 人称:第一人称;3. 时态:一般现在时。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
[开头句]
1. Besides meeting our daily needs, money can also be given away to help others. （用途）
2. One of the best ways to get money is to use a dream tin. （方法）
[中间句]
1. I'd surely go where I can have ten times more pocket money. （方法）
2. As for me, I prefer to save money to donate it to the people who need it most. （用途）
[结尾句]
They have something much more important than money—they have love. （意义）
[名言警句]
A penny saved is a penny earned.
省下一分钱,就是赚到一分钱。
写作演练 ＞＞
阅读是生活中必不可少的一部分。你校英语社团开展“好书推荐”的英语征文活动,请你向同学们推荐一部关于金钱的作品。
要求:1. 词数 80~100;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[思路点拨]
1. 体裁:记叙文;2. 人称:第一人称;3. 时态:一般现在时。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
答案
One possible version:
Money: A Beginner’s Guide
I recently read a book called Money: A Beginner’s Guide. It is short and easy-to-understand. I think it is perfect for middle school students.
The book explains what money is, why it is important, and how we can use it wisely. It talks about saving, spending and sharing money in a balanced way. What I like most is the chapter on "Money and Happiness". The book says money is useful, but it cannot buy everything—like friendship, health or love. It teaches us to be thankful for what we have and to use money to help others.
After reading this book, I started to save a part of my pocket money every week. Now I understand that money is a tool, not a goal in life.
Money: A Beginner’s Guide
I recently read a book called Money: A Beginner’s Guide. It is short and easy-to-understand. I think it is perfect for middle school students.
The book explains what money is, why it is important, and how we can use it wisely. It talks about saving, spending and sharing money in a balanced way. What I like most is the chapter on "Money and Happiness". The book says money is useful, but it cannot buy everything—like friendship, health or love. It teaches us to be thankful for what we have and to use money to help others.
After reading this book, I started to save a part of my pocket money every week. Now I understand that money is a tool, not a goal in life.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语应用文写作题，要求推荐一部关于金钱的书籍，需遵循给定的写作结构（开头、主体、启发），结合素材与提纲，采用第一人称、一般现在时，词数控制在80~100。解题思路：先确定推荐书籍《Money: A Beginner’s Guide》，开头点明书籍特点及适合人群；主体介绍书籍核心内容与亮点；启发部分阐述读后感悟，确保行文连贯、符合要求。
【解析】
写作分三步完成：1. 开头：引出推荐的书籍，说明其简短易懂的特点，用句型“I think it is perfect for...”点明适合中学生；2. 主体：介绍书籍内容，涵盖金钱的意义、合理使用方法，说明最喜欢的章节（金钱与幸福），传递正确金钱观；3. 启发：描述读后的实际改变，总结对金钱的理解（是工具而非目标），符合句型“After reading this book...”。注意时态用一般现在时，人称第一人称，适当增加细节让内容连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Money: A Beginner’s Guide
I recently read a book called Money: A Beginner’s Guide. It is short and easy-to-understand. I think it is perfect for middle school students.
The book explains what money is, why it is important, and how we can use it wisely. It talks about saving, spending and sharing money in a balanced way. What I like most is the chapter on "Money and Happiness". The book says money is useful, but it cannot buy everything—like friendship, health or love. It teaches us to be thankful for what we have and to use money to help others.
After reading this book, I started to save a part of my pocket money every week. Now I understand that money is a tool, not a goal in life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、书籍推荐表达
【点评】
本题结合好书推荐主题，既考查学生英语语言运用能力，又引导学生树立正确金钱观，有明确写作框架和素材支撑，能有效检验学生的写作综合能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语应用文写作题，要求推荐一部关于金钱的书籍，需遵循给定的写作结构（开头、主体、启发），结合素材与提纲，采用第一人称、一般现在时，词数控制在80~100。解题思路：先确定推荐书籍《Money: A Beginner’s Guide》，开头点明书籍特点及适合人群；主体介绍书籍核心内容与亮点；启发部分阐述读后感悟，确保行文连贯、符合要求。
【解析】
写作分三步完成：1. 开头：引出推荐的书籍，说明其简短易懂的特点，用句型“I think it is perfect for...”点明适合中学生；2. 主体：介绍书籍内容，涵盖金钱的意义、合理使用方法，说明最喜欢的章节（金钱与幸福），传递正确金钱观；3. 启发：描述读后的实际改变，总结对金钱的理解（是工具而非目标），符合句型“After reading this book...”。注意时态用一般现在时，人称第一人称，适当增加细节让内容连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Money: A Beginner’s Guide
I recently read a book called Money: A Beginner’s Guide. It is short and easy-to-understand. I think it is perfect for middle school students.
The book explains what money is, why it is important, and how we can use it wisely. It talks about saving, spending and sharing money in a balanced way. What I like most is the chapter on "Money and Happiness". The book says money is useful, but it cannot buy everything—like friendship, health or love. It teaches us to be thankful for what we have and to use money to help others.
After reading this book, I started to save a part of my pocket money every week. Now I understand that money is a tool, not a goal in life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、书籍推荐表达
【点评】
本题结合好书推荐主题，既考查学生英语语言运用能力，又引导学生树立正确金钱观，有明确写作框架和素材支撑，能有效检验学生的写作综合能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
