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八、书面表达。(5 分)
你的好朋友 Linda 给你发了一封电子邮件,告诉你她发烧了,请你给她回复一封电子邮件,并给她提出一些合理的建议。
要求:语句通顺,书写规范,至少5句话。
收件人 linda@163.com
主题 I hope you'll be better soon.
正文 Dear Linda,
I've got your email. I'm sorry to hear that you are ill.
You should
I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
你的好朋友 Linda 给你发了一封电子邮件,告诉你她发烧了,请你给她回复一封电子邮件,并给她提出一些合理的建议。
要求:语句通顺,书写规范,至少5句话。
收件人 linda@163.com
主题 I hope you'll be better soon.
正文 Dear Linda,
I've got your email. I'm sorry to hear that you are ill.
You should
go to see the doctor first. You should drink warm water and have a good rest. You should take some medicine. You shouldn't read books in bed. At last, you shouldn't eat too much meat or fish.
I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
参考范文：
Dear Linda,
I've got your email. I'm sorry to hear that you are ill.
You should go to see the doctor first. You should drink warm water and have a good rest. You should take some medicine. You shouldn't read books in bed. At last, you shouldn't eat too much meat or fish.
I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Linda,
I've got your email. I'm sorry to hear that you are ill.
You should go to see the doctor first. You should drink warm water and have a good rest. You should take some medicine. You shouldn't read books in bed. At last, you shouldn't eat too much meat or fish.
I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确核心任务：补全一封慰问生病好友的回复邮件，核心要求是给发烧的Linda提出合理的养病建议，语句通顺且至少写5句话。解题思路如下：第一步先结合生活常识梳理生病休养的合理建议，避免写出不符合逻辑的内容；第二步用题干提示的You should/You shouldn't结构串联每一条建议，用已学的简单英语句式表达即可；第三步最后补上自己的署名，确保总句数达标、没有基础语法错误，完成整封邮件。
【解析】
解：
1. 第一条合理建议：生病首先要优先就诊，写为：You should go to see the doctor first.
2. 第二条合理建议：发烧期间要多喝温水、充分休息，写为：You should drink warm water and have a good rest.
3. 第三条合理建议：遵照要求按时服药，写为：You should take some medicine.
4. 第四条合理建议：生病不要过度劳累，不要卧床看书，写为：You shouldn't read books in bed.
5. 第五条合理建议：生病期间饮食要清淡，不要摄入过多油腻荤食，写为：At last, you shouldn't eat too much meat or fish.
最后在落款处填写自己的名字，整封邮件逻辑连贯，完全符合题目的各项要求。
【答案】
Dear Linda,
I've got your email. I'm sorry to hear that you are ill.
You should go to see the doctor first. You should drink warm water and have a good rest. You should take some medicine. You shouldn't read books in bed. At last, you shouldn't eat too much meat or fish.
I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件格式；情态动词should用法；建议类表达
【点评】
本题属于基础的小学英语应用文写作题，重点考察学生用已学简单句式输出实用内容的能力，只需要结合生活常识罗列合理的养病建议，保证语句通顺、句数达标即可得分，答题时注意不要写出不符合生病休养逻辑的不合理建议。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先明确核心任务：补全一封慰问生病好友的回复邮件，核心要求是给发烧的Linda提出合理的养病建议，语句通顺且至少写5句话。解题思路如下：第一步先结合生活常识梳理生病休养的合理建议，避免写出不符合逻辑的内容；第二步用题干提示的You should/You shouldn't结构串联每一条建议，用已学的简单英语句式表达即可；第三步最后补上自己的署名，确保总句数达标、没有基础语法错误，完成整封邮件。
【解析】
解：
1. 第一条合理建议：生病首先要优先就诊，写为：You should go to see the doctor first.
2. 第二条合理建议：发烧期间要多喝温水、充分休息，写为：You should drink warm water and have a good rest.
3. 第三条合理建议：遵照要求按时服药，写为：You should take some medicine.
4. 第四条合理建议：生病不要过度劳累，不要卧床看书，写为：You shouldn't read books in bed.
5. 第五条合理建议：生病期间饮食要清淡，不要摄入过多油腻荤食，写为：At last, you shouldn't eat too much meat or fish.
最后在落款处填写自己的名字，整封邮件逻辑连贯，完全符合题目的各项要求。
【答案】
Dear Linda,
I've got your email. I'm sorry to hear that you are ill.
You should go to see the doctor first. You should drink warm water and have a good rest. You should take some medicine. You shouldn't read books in bed. At last, you shouldn't eat too much meat or fish.
I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件格式；情态动词should用法；建议类表达
【点评】
本题属于基础的小学英语应用文写作题，重点考察学生用已学简单句式输出实用内容的能力，只需要结合生活常识罗列合理的养病建议，保证语句通顺、句数达标即可得分，答题时注意不要写出不符合生病休养逻辑的不合理建议。
【难度系数】
0.7
