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十一、小智终于来到了最后一关:写作关。最后的一张能量卡马上到手了。加油!校报向读者征集稿件,请根据问题提示,写一篇介绍自己和家人的日常出行方式的文章投稿。(10分)
内容包括:
1. What's your name?
2. How many people are there in your family?
3. How do you come to school? Why?
4. How does your father go to work? Why?
5. How does your mother go to work? Why?
要求:
1. 包含所有问题的内容,可适当发挥想象,增加细节;
2. 条理清晰,语法正确,语句通顺,写作规范;
3. 不少于五句话,词数在60词左右。
内容包括:
1. What's your name?
2. How many people are there in your family?
3. How do you come to school? Why?
4. How does your father go to work? Why?
5. How does your mother go to work? Why?
要求:
1. 包含所有问题的内容,可适当发挥想象,增加细节;
2. 条理清晰,语法正确,语句通顺,写作规范;
3. 不少于五句话,词数在60词左右。
My name is Xiaozhi. There are three
people in my family.
I come to school on foot. My home is
near my school. I like walking. My father
goes to work by car. His office is far from
our home. The car is fast. My mother goes
to work by bus. Taking the bus is easy and
it helps keep the air clean.
We are happy every day!
people in my family.
I come to school on foot. My home is
near my school. I like walking. My father
goes to work by car. His office is far from
our home. The car is fast. My mother goes
to work by bus. Taking the bus is easy and
it helps keep the air clean.
We are happy every day!
答案
参考范文:
My name is Xiaozhi. There are three
people in my family.
I come to school on foot. My home is
near my school. I like walking. My father
goes to work by car. His office is far from
our home. The car is fast. My mother goes
to work by bus. Taking the bus is easy and
it helps keep the air clean.
We are happy every day!
My name is Xiaozhi. There are three
people in my family.
I come to school on foot. My home is
near my school. I like walking. My father
goes to work by car. His office is far from
our home. The car is fast. My mother goes
to work by bus. Taking the bus is easy and
it helps keep the air clean.
We are happy every day!
解析
【分析】
这道题是要点提示类的英语小作文，解题思路非常清晰：首先先把题干给出的5个必答问题逐一对应，先开篇直接回答自己的姓名、家庭总人数两个基础问题，接下来分别介绍自己上学的出行方式+对应原因、父亲上班的出行方式+对应原因、母亲上班的出行方式+对应原因，最后可以补充一句简短的收尾句让文章更连贯。选择出行方式的原因可以结合距离远近、速度快慢、环保便捷等常见的生活化理由，既符合逻辑也不容易出现语法错误，写完后检查所有要点是否都覆盖，词数是否符合60词左右的要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：直接回应前两个提示问题，介绍自己的名字和家庭人数，开门见山，符合投稿介绍的语境。
2. 主体部分依次展开：先说明自己步行上学，补充家离学校近、喜欢步行的原因；再说明父亲开车上班，补充办公室离家远、汽车速度快的理由；最后说明妈妈坐公交上班，补充公交便捷、利于环保的理由，完全覆盖所有要求的要点。
3. 收尾补充一句日常感受的短句，让文章结构更完整，通读检查语法，所有句子都用一般现在时符合日常出行描述的语境，没有语法错误，词数符合要求。
【答案】
My name is Xiaozhi. There are three people in my family.
I come to school on foot. My home is near my school. I like walking. My father goes to work by car. His office is far from our home. The car is fast. My mother goes to work by bus. Taking the bus is easy and it helps keep the air clean.
We are happy every day!
【知识点】
出行方式表达；提示类英语写作；一般现在时
【点评】
本题属于基础的生活化英语写作，所有写作要点都已经明确给出，不需要学生额外构思复杂内容，只需要逐一回应提示问题，补充合理的细节即可完成，写作时注意出行方式的固定搭配不要写错，不要遗漏题干给出的任何一个要点，就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
这道题是要点提示类的英语小作文，解题思路非常清晰：首先先把题干给出的5个必答问题逐一对应，先开篇直接回答自己的姓名、家庭总人数两个基础问题，接下来分别介绍自己上学的出行方式+对应原因、父亲上班的出行方式+对应原因、母亲上班的出行方式+对应原因，最后可以补充一句简短的收尾句让文章更连贯。选择出行方式的原因可以结合距离远近、速度快慢、环保便捷等常见的生活化理由，既符合逻辑也不容易出现语法错误，写完后检查所有要点是否都覆盖，词数是否符合60词左右的要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：直接回应前两个提示问题，介绍自己的名字和家庭人数，开门见山，符合投稿介绍的语境。
2. 主体部分依次展开：先说明自己步行上学，补充家离学校近、喜欢步行的原因；再说明父亲开车上班，补充办公室离家远、汽车速度快的理由；最后说明妈妈坐公交上班，补充公交便捷、利于环保的理由，完全覆盖所有要求的要点。
3. 收尾补充一句日常感受的短句，让文章结构更完整，通读检查语法，所有句子都用一般现在时符合日常出行描述的语境，没有语法错误，词数符合要求。
【答案】
My name is Xiaozhi. There are three people in my family.
I come to school on foot. My home is near my school. I like walking. My father goes to work by car. His office is far from our home. The car is fast. My mother goes to work by bus. Taking the bus is easy and it helps keep the air clean.
We are happy every day!
【知识点】
出行方式表达；提示类英语写作；一般现在时
【点评】
本题属于基础的生活化英语写作，所有写作要点都已经明确给出，不需要学生额外构思复杂内容，只需要逐一回应提示问题，补充合理的细节即可完成，写作时注意出行方式的固定搭配不要写错，不要遗漏题干给出的任何一个要点，就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
