跟踪演练
假如你是李明,你的英国朋友迈克给你发了一封电子邮件,询问你在学校的情况。请你参考以下信息,给迈克回一封邮件,描述你在学校的生活和感受。词数80—100。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)

Dear Mike,
Thank you for your email. I’d like to tell you about my school life.




What’s your school life like? Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

I have many subjects like Chinese, Maths and English. My school life is busy but enjoyable. Every day, I have different classes from morning till afternoon. After class, I often take part in activities. I joined the basketball club, and sometimes we play basketball on the school playground. Last month, we had a sports meeting. It was so exciting! I also enjoyed our field trip to a farm—we planted vegetables and fed the animals.
I like my school life, but I hope we can have a longer lunchtime to relax and talk with friends.

【分析】
本题要求以李明的身份给英国朋友迈克回邮件介绍学校生活，需围绕给定的四个核心要点（学校科目、课后活动、生活感受、个人希望）展开。首先明确邮件格式，开头和结尾已给出，正文需按逻辑串联要点：先列举学校的科目，再描述课后参与的活动，接着表达对学校生活的感受，最后写出自己的希望，确保语句连贯、词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 先介绍学校的科目：点明有语文、数学、英语等科目；
2. 再描述课后活动：提及参加篮球俱乐部、运动会、农场实地考察等，体现活动的丰富性；
3. 接着表达生活感受：说明学校生活忙碌但愉快；
4. 最后写出个人希望：希望有更长的午餐时间，符合给定的要点。
将以上内容调整为通顺的语句，形成完整的邮件正文。
【答案】
I have many subjects like Chinese, Maths and English. My school life is busy but enjoyable. Every day, I have different classes from morning till afternoon. After class, I often take part in activities. I joined the basketball club, and sometimes we play basketball on the school playground. Last month, we had a sports meeting. It was so exciting! I also enjoyed our field trip to a farm—we planted vegetables and fed the animals.
I like my school life, but I hope we can have a longer lunchtime to relax and talk with friends.
【知识点】
英语书信写作；学校生活话题表达
【点评】
该作文准确覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，符合书信的语气和格式，词数达标，很好地完成了介绍学校生活的写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6