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请你根据下表内容，以 "How to Prevent the Spread of the Flu" 为题写一篇短文，谈谈我们应该怎样预防流感传播。
|How to Prevent the Spread of the Flu|
|----|
|• wash hands often|
|• wear masks|
|• do some sports, such as ...|
|• eat healthy food and drink more water|
|• ...|
【要求】（1）须包含上表所有内容，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名；（3）不少于 80 词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
分数：
书写：☆☆☆☆☆
结构：☆☆☆☆☆
内容：☆☆☆☆☆
Advice from your teacher：
How to Prevent the Spread of the Flu
Every year there is flu. What should we do to prevent it? Here is some advice.
请你根据下表内容，以 "How to Prevent the Spread of the Flu" 为题写一篇短文，谈谈我们应该怎样预防流感传播。
|How to Prevent the Spread of the Flu|
|----|
|• wash hands often|
|• wear masks|
|• do some sports, such as ...|
|• eat healthy food and drink more water|
|• ...|
【要求】（1）须包含上表所有内容，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名；（3）不少于 80 词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
分数：
书写：☆☆☆☆☆
结构：☆☆☆☆☆
内容：☆☆☆☆☆
Advice from your teacher：
How to Prevent the Spread of the Flu
Every year there is flu. What should we do to prevent it? Here is some advice.
First, we should wash our hands often during the flu season. When we go outside, we should wear masks. This helps to keep germs away and prevents ourselves from spreading the viruses to others. Second, it is necessary for us to do some sports, such as running and cycling. These are good ways to keep healthy. It's also important to eat healthy food and drink more water every day. We should avoid staying up late and get enough sleep. It helps us keep active so that we can study better. Finally, we'd better go to the doctor at once when we feel sick. We'll get well soon as long as we follow the doctor's advice.
By following these suggestions, we can effectively prevent viruses and stay healthy. (共 122 词)
答案
How to Prevent the Spread of the Flu
Every year there is flu. What should we do to prevent it? Here is some advice.
First, we should wash our hands often during the flu season. When we go outside, we should wear masks. This helps to keep germs away and prevents ourselves from spreading the viruses to others. Second, it is necessary for us to do some sports, such as running and cycling. These are good ways to keep healthy. It's also important to eat healthy food and drink more water every day. We should avoid staying up late and get enough sleep. It helps us keep active so that we can study better. Finally, we'd better go to the doctor at once when we feel sick. We'll get well soon as long as we follow the doctor's advice.
By following these suggestions, we can effectively prevent viruses and stay healthy. (共 122 词)
Every year there is flu. What should we do to prevent it? Here is some advice.
First, we should wash our hands often during the flu season. When we go outside, we should wear masks. This helps to keep germs away and prevents ourselves from spreading the viruses to others. Second, it is necessary for us to do some sports, such as running and cycling. These are good ways to keep healthy. It's also important to eat healthy food and drink more water every day. We should avoid staying up late and get enough sleep. It helps us keep active so that we can study better. Finally, we'd better go to the doctor at once when we feel sick. We'll get well soon as long as we follow the doctor's advice.
By following these suggestions, we can effectively prevent viruses and stay healthy. (共 122 词)
解析
【分析】
首先，这是一篇英语建议类应用文写作，需围绕“预防流感传播”展开，要涵盖表格所有要点并适当发挥，字数不少于80词，且不能出现真实信息。解题思路如下：
1. 审题：明确主题为预防流感，体裁是建议短文，已有开头，需续写内容。
2. 梳理要点：先锁定表格里的“常洗手、戴口罩、做运动（举例）、健康饮食多喝水”这些必含内容，再补充合理拓展点，比如保证睡眠、生病及时就医。
3. 搭建结构：采用总分总结构，开头已给出，中间用first、second、finally等连接词分点阐述建议，让逻辑清晰，结尾总结建议的作用。
4. 丰富内容：每个要点后补充细节，比如说明洗手的时机、戴口罩的作用、运动的具体例子，让内容更详实。
5. 检查：确认无真实信息、字数达标、语法正确。
【解析】
1. 衔接开篇：承接已给开头，用“First”引出第一条建议，说明流感季要常洗手，外出需戴口罩，并补充戴口罩能阻挡病菌、避免传播病毒的作用，让内容更具体。
2. 阐述核心要点：用“Second”引出运动建议，举例running和cycling，说明运动是保持健康的有效方式；再用“It's also important to...”引出健康饮食和多喝水的建议。
3. 合理拓展：增加避免熬夜、保证充足睡眠的建议，说明这能让我们保持活力、更好地学习；用“Finally”引出生病及时就医的建议，说明遵循医嘱能快速康复。
4. 总结收尾：用“By following these suggestions...”总结全文，强调这些建议可有效预防病毒、保持健康，呼应主题。
【答案】
How to Prevent the Spread of the Flu
Every year there is flu. What should we do to prevent it? Here is some advice.
First, we should wash our hands often during the flu season. When we go outside, we should wear masks. This helps to keep germs away and prevents ourselves from spreading the viruses to others. Second, it is necessary for us to do some sports, such as running and cycling. These are good ways to keep healthy. It's also important to eat healthy food and drink more water every day. We should avoid staying up late and get enough sleep. It helps us keep active so that we can study better. Finally, we'd better go to the doctor at once when we feel sick. We'll get well soon as long as we follow the doctor's advice.
By following these suggestions, we can effectively prevent viruses and stay healthy.
【知识点】
1. 英语应用文写作
2. 健康话题表达
3. 逻辑连接词运用
【点评】
这篇短文结构清晰，采用总分总结构，借助first、second、finally等连接词让逻辑连贯自然；涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，还合理补充了保证睡眠、及时就医等内容，内容充实饱满；语言表达流畅，语法准确，符合字数要求，出色完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，这是一篇英语建议类应用文写作，需围绕“预防流感传播”展开，要涵盖表格所有要点并适当发挥，字数不少于80词，且不能出现真实信息。解题思路如下：
1. 审题：明确主题为预防流感，体裁是建议短文，已有开头，需续写内容。
2. 梳理要点：先锁定表格里的“常洗手、戴口罩、做运动（举例）、健康饮食多喝水”这些必含内容，再补充合理拓展点，比如保证睡眠、生病及时就医。
3. 搭建结构：采用总分总结构，开头已给出，中间用first、second、finally等连接词分点阐述建议，让逻辑清晰，结尾总结建议的作用。
4. 丰富内容：每个要点后补充细节，比如说明洗手的时机、戴口罩的作用、运动的具体例子，让内容更详实。
5. 检查：确认无真实信息、字数达标、语法正确。
【解析】
1. 衔接开篇：承接已给开头，用“First”引出第一条建议，说明流感季要常洗手，外出需戴口罩，并补充戴口罩能阻挡病菌、避免传播病毒的作用，让内容更具体。
2. 阐述核心要点：用“Second”引出运动建议，举例running和cycling，说明运动是保持健康的有效方式；再用“It's also important to...”引出健康饮食和多喝水的建议。
3. 合理拓展：增加避免熬夜、保证充足睡眠的建议，说明这能让我们保持活力、更好地学习；用“Finally”引出生病及时就医的建议，说明遵循医嘱能快速康复。
4. 总结收尾：用“By following these suggestions...”总结全文，强调这些建议可有效预防病毒、保持健康，呼应主题。
【答案】
How to Prevent the Spread of the Flu
Every year there is flu. What should we do to prevent it? Here is some advice.
First, we should wash our hands often during the flu season. When we go outside, we should wear masks. This helps to keep germs away and prevents ourselves from spreading the viruses to others. Second, it is necessary for us to do some sports, such as running and cycling. These are good ways to keep healthy. It's also important to eat healthy food and drink more water every day. We should avoid staying up late and get enough sleep. It helps us keep active so that we can study better. Finally, we'd better go to the doctor at once when we feel sick. We'll get well soon as long as we follow the doctor's advice.
By following these suggestions, we can effectively prevent viruses and stay healthy.
【知识点】
1. 英语应用文写作
2. 健康话题表达
3. 逻辑连接词运用
【点评】
这篇短文结构清晰，采用总分总结构，借助first、second、finally等连接词让逻辑连贯自然；涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，还合理补充了保证睡眠、及时就医等内容，内容充实饱满；语言表达流畅，语法准确，符合字数要求，出色完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
