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Ⅵ. 书面表达。Sunny 喜欢小动物，她养了三只宠物，它们很可爱。请你看看它们的照片并根据提示词完成下面的短文。
参考词汇：taller, older, than,
bigger, longer, smaller,
younger, shorter, heavier
Three pets
Sunny has three pets — a dog, a cat and a rabbit. They are very cute. Look! Sunny likes them very much.
参考词汇：taller, older, than,
bigger, longer, smaller,
younger, shorter, heavier
Three pets
Sunny has three pets — a dog, a cat and a rabbit. They are very cute. Look! Sunny likes them very much.
答案
Three pets
Sunny has three pets — a dog,
a cat and a rabbit. They are very
cute. Look! The dog is the tallest
of the three. The cat is taller than
the rabbit. The cat's tail is longer
than the rabbit's. But the rabbit is
one year older than the cat. The
dog is bigger and heavier than the
cat and the rabbit. And the dog's
ears are longer than the cat's.
Sunny likes them very much.
Sunny has three pets — a dog,
a cat and a rabbit. They are very
cute. Look! The dog is the tallest
of the three. The cat is taller than
the rabbit. The cat's tail is longer
than the rabbit's. But the rabbit is
one year older than the cat. The
dog is bigger and heavier than the
cat and the rabbit. And the dog's
ears are longer than the cat's.
Sunny likes them very much.
解析
【分析】
这道题是看图类英语书面表达题，解题思路如下：1. 先观察图片，明确三只宠物从左到右依次是狗、猫、兔子，体型大小排序为狗＞猫＞兔子；2. 结合题干给出的参考词汇（都是形容词比较级、最高级相关词汇），按照从整体体型到局部特征、从大宠物到小宠物的逻辑依次描述：先描述体型最大的狗的特征，用最高级说明它是三者里最高的，再用比较级说明它比另外两只更大、更重，耳朵也更长；接着对比猫和兔子的身高、尾巴长度，补充合理的年龄对比内容，把所有提示词汇自然融入句子，保证语句通顺逻辑连贯，最后自然衔接后文的“Sunny非常喜欢它们”即可。
【解析】
我们结合图片特征和给定参考词汇，按照合理逻辑完成短文补全：
1. 首先点明狗在三者中的身高地位：The dog is the tallest of the three，用到最高级tallest。
2. 接着对比猫和兔子的身高：The cat is taller than the rabbit，用到比较级taller和than。
3. 再对比二者的尾巴长度：The cat's tail is longer than the rabbit's，用到比较级longer和than。
4. 补充年龄维度的对比：But the rabbit is one year older than the cat，用到比较级older和than。
5. 描述狗的体型和重量特征：The dog is bigger and heavier than the cat and the rabbit，用到比较级bigger、heavier和than。
6. 最后补充狗和猫的耳朵对比：And the dog's ears are longer than the cat's，用到比较级longer和than。
所有提示词汇都自然融入内容，完全符合图片特征和表达逻辑。
【答案】
The dog is the tallest of the three. The cat is taller than the rabbit. The cat's tail is longer than the rabbit's. But the rabbit is one year older than the cat. The dog is bigger and heavier than the cat and the rabbit. And the dog's ears are longer than the cat's.
【知识点】
形容词比较级，形容词最高级，英语看图写话
【点评】
本题是小学英语比较级模块的基础写作题，既考察学生对形容词比较级、最高级的用法掌握程度，也锻炼学生的图片观察能力和语句组织能力，只要结合图片特征合理使用给定提示词，避免出现比较对象不一致的小错误，就可以顺利完成写作。
【难度系数】
0.7
这道题是看图类英语书面表达题，解题思路如下：1. 先观察图片，明确三只宠物从左到右依次是狗、猫、兔子，体型大小排序为狗＞猫＞兔子；2. 结合题干给出的参考词汇（都是形容词比较级、最高级相关词汇），按照从整体体型到局部特征、从大宠物到小宠物的逻辑依次描述：先描述体型最大的狗的特征，用最高级说明它是三者里最高的，再用比较级说明它比另外两只更大、更重，耳朵也更长；接着对比猫和兔子的身高、尾巴长度，补充合理的年龄对比内容，把所有提示词汇自然融入句子，保证语句通顺逻辑连贯，最后自然衔接后文的“Sunny非常喜欢它们”即可。
【解析】
我们结合图片特征和给定参考词汇，按照合理逻辑完成短文补全：
1. 首先点明狗在三者中的身高地位：The dog is the tallest of the three，用到最高级tallest。
2. 接着对比猫和兔子的身高：The cat is taller than the rabbit，用到比较级taller和than。
3. 再对比二者的尾巴长度：The cat's tail is longer than the rabbit's，用到比较级longer和than。
4. 补充年龄维度的对比：But the rabbit is one year older than the cat，用到比较级older和than。
5. 描述狗的体型和重量特征：The dog is bigger and heavier than the cat and the rabbit，用到比较级bigger、heavier和than。
6. 最后补充狗和猫的耳朵对比：And the dog's ears are longer than the cat's，用到比较级longer和than。
所有提示词汇都自然融入内容，完全符合图片特征和表达逻辑。
【答案】
The dog is the tallest of the three. The cat is taller than the rabbit. The cat's tail is longer than the rabbit's. But the rabbit is one year older than the cat. The dog is bigger and heavier than the cat and the rabbit. And the dog's ears are longer than the cat's.
【知识点】
形容词比较级，形容词最高级，英语看图写话
【点评】
本题是小学英语比较级模块的基础写作题，既考察学生对形容词比较级、最高级的用法掌握程度，也锻炼学生的图片观察能力和语句组织能力，只要结合图片特征合理使用给定提示词，避免出现比较对象不一致的小错误，就可以顺利完成写作。
【难度系数】
0.7
Ⅶ. 书面表达。李华是你最好的朋友，他暑假过得很开心。请你根据他给你寄来的明信片，以“Happy holiday”为题，写一篇小短文。
Happy holiday
Li Hua is my best friend. He had happy summer holidays. What did he do? Let me tell you. He had a great time at the beach.
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Happy holiday
Li Hua is my best friend. He had happy summer holidays. What did he do? Let me tell you. He had a great time at the beach.
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答案
Happy holiday
Li Hua is my best friend. He
had happy summer holidays. What
did he do? Let me tell you. He
went to the beach with his mother.
He went swimming and played
beach volleyball at the beach. He
became a good swimmer. And he
could swim faster and faster. He
ate lots of sea food there. He took
some pictures and bought many
nice gifts for his friends there. He
had a great time at the beach.
Li Hua is my best friend. He
had happy summer holidays. What
did he do? Let me tell you. He
went to the beach with his mother.
He went swimming and played
beach volleyball at the beach. He
became a good swimmer. And he
could swim faster and faster. He
ate lots of sea food there. He took
some pictures and bought many
nice gifts for his friends there. He
had a great time at the beach.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇补全式的英语叙事短文写作，首先我们要明确写作要求：开头和结尾已经给出，需要结合明信片上的提示信息完成内容。第一步先提取明信片给出的核心要点：李华暑假和妈妈去海滩、成为了优秀的游泳者、游泳游得越来越快；第二步要围绕海滩度假的场景，补充符合逻辑的合理活动，比如打沙滩排球、吃海鲜、拍照买礼物这类常见的海滩度假行为；第三步要注意全文描述过去的暑假经历，统一使用一般过去时，把内容自然衔接，让开头到结尾的叙事流畅通顺。
【解析】
1. 首先承接开头的设问，先写出明信片给出的第一个核心事件：He went to the beach with his mother.
2. 接着补充海滩上的常规合理活动，丰富内容：He went swimming and played beach volleyball at the beach.
3. 接下来衔接明信片给出的第二个要点：He became a good swimmer.
4. 再衔接明信片给出的第三个要点，补充衔接词让语句更通顺：And he could swim faster and faster.
5. 继续补充符合海滩场景的活动，让内容更饱满：He ate lots of sea food there. He took some pictures and bought many nice gifts for his friends there.
6. 最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾句，全文时态统一为一般过去时，叙事逻辑连贯。
【答案】
Happy holiday
Li Hua is my best friend. He had happy summer holidays. What did he do? Let me tell you. He went to the beach with his mother. He went swimming and played beach volleyball at the beach. He became a good swimmer. And he could swim faster and faster. He ate lots of sea food there. He took some pictures and bought many nice gifts for his friends there. He had a great time at the beach.
【知识点】
一般过去时应用；记叙文写作；情景话题表达
【点评】
本题难度较低，属于基础的英语写作练习，既要求学生把题干给出的所有提示信息都准确运用到短文中，也鼓励学生结合生活常识补充合理的场景细节，重点考察学生对一般过去时叙事的掌握能力，只要保证时态统一、语句通顺、逻辑连贯就可以完成合格的作品。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇补全式的英语叙事短文写作，首先我们要明确写作要求：开头和结尾已经给出，需要结合明信片上的提示信息完成内容。第一步先提取明信片给出的核心要点：李华暑假和妈妈去海滩、成为了优秀的游泳者、游泳游得越来越快；第二步要围绕海滩度假的场景，补充符合逻辑的合理活动，比如打沙滩排球、吃海鲜、拍照买礼物这类常见的海滩度假行为；第三步要注意全文描述过去的暑假经历，统一使用一般过去时，把内容自然衔接，让开头到结尾的叙事流畅通顺。
【解析】
1. 首先承接开头的设问，先写出明信片给出的第一个核心事件：He went to the beach with his mother.
2. 接着补充海滩上的常规合理活动，丰富内容：He went swimming and played beach volleyball at the beach.
3. 接下来衔接明信片给出的第二个要点：He became a good swimmer.
4. 再衔接明信片给出的第三个要点，补充衔接词让语句更通顺：And he could swim faster and faster.
5. 继续补充符合海滩场景的活动，让内容更饱满：He ate lots of sea food there. He took some pictures and bought many nice gifts for his friends there.
6. 最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾句，全文时态统一为一般过去时，叙事逻辑连贯。
【答案】
Happy holiday
Li Hua is my best friend. He had happy summer holidays. What did he do? Let me tell you. He went to the beach with his mother. He went swimming and played beach volleyball at the beach. He became a good swimmer. And he could swim faster and faster. He ate lots of sea food there. He took some pictures and bought many nice gifts for his friends there. He had a great time at the beach.
【知识点】
一般过去时应用；记叙文写作；情景话题表达
【点评】
本题难度较低，属于基础的英语写作练习，既要求学生把题干给出的所有提示信息都准确运用到短文中，也鼓励学生结合生活常识补充合理的场景细节，重点考察学生对一般过去时叙事的掌握能力，只要保证时态统一、语句通顺、逻辑连贯就可以完成合格的作品。
【难度系数】
0.7
