Ⅵ. 书面表达。
(A)假如你是Alice,你正在录制一段主题为“繁忙早上”的视频博客,向全国人民推荐你的家乡。不少于40词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。(5分)
要点:现在是早上七点,我的家乡长春已经是一片生机盎然的景象。许多年轻人奔向地铁站,班车接送学生,老年人在慢跑、闲逛。公交车站还有很多人在看书。
Hi, there. I'm Alice. Here is my vlog "Busy Morning".
(B)“友情公寓”(Friendship Apartment),助你收获友情,共同成长。假如你是李华,向阳社区记者,请根据下面要点,用英语写一封不少于80词的新闻报道。(15分)
要点:1. 现在是下午6点;
2. 腾飞住在友情公寓一楼,他正在弹吉他;他的领居和平正在做饭;
3. 住在二楼的双胞胎肖弦、肖柱正在做瑜伽;他们的妈妈华年正在看书。
(A)假如你是Alice,你正在录制一段主题为“繁忙早上”的视频博客,向全国人民推荐你的家乡。不少于40词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。(5分)
要点:现在是早上七点,我的家乡长春已经是一片生机盎然的景象。许多年轻人奔向地铁站,班车接送学生,老年人在慢跑、闲逛。公交车站还有很多人在看书。
Hi, there. I'm Alice. Here is my vlog "Busy Morning".
(B)“友情公寓”(Friendship Apartment),助你收获友情,共同成长。假如你是李华,向阳社区记者,请根据下面要点,用英语写一封不少于80词的新闻报道。(15分)
要点:1. 现在是下午6点;
2. 腾飞住在友情公寓一楼,他正在弹吉他;他的领居和平正在做饭;
3. 住在二楼的双胞胎肖弦、肖柱正在做瑜伽;他们的妈妈华年正在看书。
答案
VI. (A)One possible version:
Hi, there. I'm Alice. Here is my vlog"Busy Morning". It is seven o 'clock in the morning and my hometown Changchun is full of life. Look! Many young people are rushing to the subway station. The buses are picking up and dropping off students. Some old people are jogging and taking a city walk. There are also many people reading books at the bus stop. What are you doing? Whatever you're doing, I hope you enjoy life as much as we do.
(B)One possible version:
Hello, I am the reporter Li Hua. Now let's take a look at what the people of Friendship Apartment are doing.
It is 6 p.m. The evening time is always very relaxing. Tengfei is playing the piano on the first floor. His neighbor He Ping is cooking. The twins Xiao Xian and Xiao Zhu, who live on the second floor, are doing yoga. Their mother Huanian is reading a book.
Friendship apartment helps us harvest friendship and share growth. I hope you also have such wonderful neighbors.
Hi, there. I'm Alice. Here is my vlog"Busy Morning". It is seven o 'clock in the morning and my hometown Changchun is full of life. Look! Many young people are rushing to the subway station. The buses are picking up and dropping off students. Some old people are jogging and taking a city walk. There are also many people reading books at the bus stop. What are you doing? Whatever you're doing, I hope you enjoy life as much as we do.
(B)One possible version:
Hello, I am the reporter Li Hua. Now let's take a look at what the people of Friendship Apartment are doing.
It is 6 p.m. The evening time is always very relaxing. Tengfei is playing the piano on the first floor. His neighbor He Ping is cooking. The twins Xiao Xian and Xiao Zhu, who live on the second floor, are doing yoga. Their mother Huanian is reading a book.
Friendship apartment helps us harvest friendship and share growth. I hope you also have such wonderful neighbors.
解析
【分析】本题分为A、B两部分书面表达,均需运用现在进行时描述正在发生的场景。A部分为“繁忙早上”主题的视频博客,需紧扣给定要点(七点、长春生机盎然、年轻人奔地铁站、班车接送学生、老人慢跑闲逛、公交站有人看书),补充内容不少于40词,开头已给出;B部分为向阳社区记者李华撰写的“友情公寓”新闻报道,需涵盖要点(下午六点、一楼腾飞弹吉他、邻居和平做饭、二楼双胞胎肖弦肖柱做瑜伽、妈妈华年看书),不少于80词,符合新闻语气。解题时先确定时态为现在进行时,再将要点转化为通顺的英语句子,确保覆盖所有要求、满足字数。
【解析】(A)承接给定开头,先点明时间为早上七点、家乡长春生机盎然;接着用现在进行时依次描述年轻人奔向地铁站、班车接送学生、老人慢跑闲逛、公交站有人看书的场景;最后补充一句呼应主题的话,确保词数达标。(B)以记者李华身份开头引出友情公寓的观察,按一楼、二楼顺序用现在进行时描述各人物活动,最后点出友情公寓的意义,符合新闻报道结构,满足字数要求。
【答案】VI. (A)One possible version:
Hi, there. I'm Alice. Here is my vlog"Busy Morning". It is seven o 'clock in the morning and my hometown Changchun is full of life. Look! Many young people are rushing to the subway station. The buses are picking up and dropping off students. Some old people are jogging and taking a city walk. There are also many people reading books at the bus stop. What are you doing? Whatever you're doing, I hope you enjoy life as much as we do.
(B)One possible version:
Hello, I am the reporter Li Hua. Now let's take a look at what the people of Friendship Apartment are doing.
It is 6 p.m. The evening time is always very relaxing. Tengfei is playing the piano on the first floor. His neighbor He Ping is cooking. The twins Xiao Xian and Xiao Zhu, who live on the second floor, are doing yoga. Their mother Huanian is reading a book.
Friendship apartment helps us harvest friendship and share growth. I hope you also have such wonderful neighbors.
【知识点】英语书面表达,现在进行时,新闻报道写作
【点评】本题考查学生英语写作能力,分视频博客、新闻报道两类体裁,要求准确运用现在进行时覆盖所有要点,语言通顺且符合字数,是初中阶段常见基础写作题型,能检验学生语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】(A)承接给定开头,先点明时间为早上七点、家乡长春生机盎然;接着用现在进行时依次描述年轻人奔向地铁站、班车接送学生、老人慢跑闲逛、公交站有人看书的场景;最后补充一句呼应主题的话,确保词数达标。(B)以记者李华身份开头引出友情公寓的观察,按一楼、二楼顺序用现在进行时描述各人物活动,最后点出友情公寓的意义,符合新闻报道结构,满足字数要求。
【答案】VI. (A)One possible version:
Hi, there. I'm Alice. Here is my vlog"Busy Morning". It is seven o 'clock in the morning and my hometown Changchun is full of life. Look! Many young people are rushing to the subway station. The buses are picking up and dropping off students. Some old people are jogging and taking a city walk. There are also many people reading books at the bus stop. What are you doing? Whatever you're doing, I hope you enjoy life as much as we do.
(B)One possible version:
Hello, I am the reporter Li Hua. Now let's take a look at what the people of Friendship Apartment are doing.
It is 6 p.m. The evening time is always very relaxing. Tengfei is playing the piano on the first floor. His neighbor He Ping is cooking. The twins Xiao Xian and Xiao Zhu, who live on the second floor, are doing yoga. Their mother Huanian is reading a book.
Friendship apartment helps us harvest friendship and share growth. I hope you also have such wonderful neighbors.
【知识点】英语书面表达,现在进行时,新闻报道写作
【点评】本题考查学生英语写作能力,分视频博客、新闻报道两类体裁,要求准确运用现在进行时覆盖所有要点,语言通顺且符合字数,是初中阶段常见基础写作题型,能检验学生语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
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