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七、书面表达(满分 25 分)
近年来，越来越多的交流学生来到中国。为了让他们更好地了解中国，《21 世纪英文报》开辟了“Cities in China”专栏，鼓励广大中小学生用英文介绍中国城市。假如你是张华，请你选择中国的一个城市，根据下列流程图完成一篇征文。
注意事项：1. 短文需根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 括号中提供的信息仅供参考；
3. 词数 100 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them,
近年来，越来越多的交流学生来到中国。为了让他们更好地了解中国，《21 世纪英文报》开辟了“Cities in China”专栏，鼓励广大中小学生用英文介绍中国城市。假如你是张华，请你选择中国的一个城市，根据下列流程图完成一篇征文。
注意事项：1. 短文需根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 括号中提供的信息仅供参考；
3. 词数 100 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them,
答案
One possible version:
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, Beijing is one of the greatest. It is the capital city of China. It lies in the northeast of China. Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian'anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace. You can also try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don't miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit.
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, Beijing is one of the greatest. It is the capital city of China. It lies in the northeast of China. Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian'anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace. You can also try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don't miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要顺着题目给出的流程图梳理写作思路：第一步先选定一个自己熟悉的中国城市，提示里的北京、桂林都是很容易找到相关素材的选择，选大众熟知的北京最不容易出现内容卡壳的问题；第二步按照提示的维度整理城市信息，挑选位置、代表性名胜、特色美食几个核心点来介绍，不需要把所有提示要素全部堆砌，内容简洁清晰即可；第三步最后点明推荐这座城市的理由，收尾点题。写作时注意题目给出的开头不需要重复书写，控制总词数在100左右，保证语句通顺、语法正确即可。
【解析】
我们可以按照流程图的三步要求搭建完整的写作结构：
1. 承接给定开头，直接点明选定的城市北京，补充说明它是中国的首都，完成第一步选择城市的要求。
2. 展开城市描述：先介绍北京的地理位置，再依次列举长城、故宫、颐和园、天安门广场等标志性景点，接着介绍当地特色美食北京烤鸭，还可以补充京剧这类特色文化内容，把城市的特点清晰展现出来。
3. 最后收尾说明推荐理由，点明北京非常值得游览，完成说明选择原因的要求，整体内容连贯，完全符合题目的各项规则。
【答案】
One possible version:
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, Beijing is one of the greatest. It is the capital city of China. It lies in the northeast of China. Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian'anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace. You can also try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don't miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit.
【知识点】
地点介绍写作，英语书面表达，常用方位表达
【点评】
本题给出了非常明确的三段式写作框架，大幅降低了写作难度，学生只需要顺着选城市、描述城市、说明推荐理由的顺序填充对应素材，覆盖位置、景点、美食等核心要点，规避基础语法错误，就很容易写出符合要求的短文，是很典型的初中阶段介绍类写作训练题。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要顺着题目给出的流程图梳理写作思路：第一步先选定一个自己熟悉的中国城市，提示里的北京、桂林都是很容易找到相关素材的选择，选大众熟知的北京最不容易出现内容卡壳的问题；第二步按照提示的维度整理城市信息，挑选位置、代表性名胜、特色美食几个核心点来介绍，不需要把所有提示要素全部堆砌，内容简洁清晰即可；第三步最后点明推荐这座城市的理由，收尾点题。写作时注意题目给出的开头不需要重复书写，控制总词数在100左右，保证语句通顺、语法正确即可。
【解析】
我们可以按照流程图的三步要求搭建完整的写作结构：
1. 承接给定开头，直接点明选定的城市北京，补充说明它是中国的首都，完成第一步选择城市的要求。
2. 展开城市描述：先介绍北京的地理位置，再依次列举长城、故宫、颐和园、天安门广场等标志性景点，接着介绍当地特色美食北京烤鸭，还可以补充京剧这类特色文化内容，把城市的特点清晰展现出来。
3. 最后收尾说明推荐理由，点明北京非常值得游览，完成说明选择原因的要求，整体内容连贯，完全符合题目的各项规则。
【答案】
One possible version:
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, Beijing is one of the greatest. It is the capital city of China. It lies in the northeast of China. Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian'anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace. You can also try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don't miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit.
【知识点】
地点介绍写作，英语书面表达，常用方位表达
【点评】
本题给出了非常明确的三段式写作框架，大幅降低了写作难度，学生只需要顺着选城市、描述城市、说明推荐理由的顺序填充对应素材，覆盖位置、景点、美食等核心要点，规避基础语法错误，就很容易写出符合要求的短文，是很典型的初中阶段介绍类写作训练题。
【难度系数】
0.7
