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七、书面表达(满分 25 分)
本学期快结束了,请你从学科学习、探索发现、户外活动等方面用英语进行自我评价,填写在《成长记录册》的自我评价栏目内。具体内容包括：
要求:1. 字迹工整,条理清晰,语意连贯,表述准确;2. 必须包括以上所给的所有评价项目,并作适当发挥;3. 词数 100 左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
How time flies! This term will come to an end soon. I learned a lot this term.
本学期快结束了,请你从学科学习、探索发现、户外活动等方面用英语进行自我评价,填写在《成长记录册》的自我评价栏目内。具体内容包括：
要求:1. 字迹工整,条理清晰,语意连贯,表述准确;2. 必须包括以上所给的所有评价项目,并作适当发挥;3. 词数 100 左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
How time flies! This term will come to an end soon. I learned a lot this term.
答案
七、One possible version:
How time flies! This term will come to an end soon. I learned a lot this term.
I always try my best to work hard on all the subjects and this term I did much better than before. I like reading so much and I do well in Chinese. However, I am still not good at maths. I will never give up and I plan to practise more and ask others for help if I have problems.
I also learned about some fun facts from my books. For example, a cow can produce nearly 200,000 glasses of milk in its lifetime. What's more, to my surprise, the famous Yangtze River is about 6,300 kilometres long and most of it runs through mountains. I went camping at weekends and enjoyed the views of my beautiful hometown.
Once I had time, I often went for walks in the woods near my house. I enjoyed taking a look at the beautiful mountains and the clear water around. I enjoy outdoor activities because I feel like a little explorer, discovering hidden treasures in nature.
My life was interesting and colourful this term. I will keep trying and be better in the future.
How time flies! This term will come to an end soon. I learned a lot this term.
I always try my best to work hard on all the subjects and this term I did much better than before. I like reading so much and I do well in Chinese. However, I am still not good at maths. I will never give up and I plan to practise more and ask others for help if I have problems.
I also learned about some fun facts from my books. For example, a cow can produce nearly 200,000 glasses of milk in its lifetime. What's more, to my surprise, the famous Yangtze River is about 6,300 kilometres long and most of it runs through mountains. I went camping at weekends and enjoyed the views of my beautiful hometown.
Once I had time, I often went for walks in the woods near my house. I enjoyed taking a look at the beautiful mountains and the clear water around. I enjoy outdoor activities because I feel like a little explorer, discovering hidden treasures in nature.
My life was interesting and colourful this term. I will keep trying and be better in the future.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：需从学科学习、探索发现、户外活动三个方面进行英语自我评价，必须包含各方面的子项目（学科学习的学习现状、努力方向；探索发现的风俗习惯、神秘世界；户外活动的了解家乡、亲近自然），语意连贯，词数100左右，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，先写学科学习部分，说明学习现状（如各学科的掌握情况），再提出努力方向；2. 接着写探索发现部分，结合“风俗习惯”“神秘世界”，可从书籍中了解的有趣知识展开；3. 最后写户外活动部分，对应“了解家乡”“亲近自然”，描述相关活动及感受；4. 结尾总结本学期的收获，表达未来的期望，确保语句通顺、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 承接开头后，先写学科学习：说明本学期各学科的学习现状（如擅长语文，数学有待提升），再阐述努力方向（多练习数学，遇到问题主动求助）；
2. 再写探索发现：结合“风俗习惯”“神秘世界”，举例从书中了解的有趣知识（如动物的特殊习性、自然地理常识等）；
3. 接着写户外活动：描述相关活动（如周末露营、林间散步），对应“了解家乡”（欣赏家乡美景）、“亲近自然”（感受自然的美好）；
4. 结尾总结本学期的生活状态，表达未来会继续努力的期望，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【答案】
How time flies! This term will come to an end soon. I learned a lot this term.
I always try my best to work hard on all the subjects and this term I did much better than before. I like reading so much and I do well in Chinese. However, I am still not good at maths. I will never give up and I plan to practise more and ask others for help if I have problems.
I also learned about some fun facts from my books. For example, a cow can produce nearly 200,000 glasses of milk in its lifetime. What's more, to my surprise, the famous Yangtze River is about 6,300 kilometres long and most of it runs through mountains. I went camping at weekends and enjoyed the views of my beautiful hometown.
Once I had time, I often went for walks in the woods near my house. I enjoyed taking a look at the beautiful mountains and the clear water around. I enjoy outdoor activities because I feel like a little explorer, discovering hidden treasures in nature.
My life was interesting and colourful this term. I will keep trying and be better in the future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；自我评价类英语作文
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖所有指定评价项目，内容充实具体，语句连贯自然，符合英语表达习惯，词数达标，清晰展现了本学期的学习与生活状态，是一篇优秀的自我评价类英语作文。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确题目要求：需从学科学习、探索发现、户外活动三个方面进行英语自我评价，必须包含各方面的子项目（学科学习的学习现状、努力方向；探索发现的风俗习惯、神秘世界；户外活动的了解家乡、亲近自然），语意连贯，词数100左右，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，先写学科学习部分，说明学习现状（如各学科的掌握情况），再提出努力方向；2. 接着写探索发现部分，结合“风俗习惯”“神秘世界”，可从书籍中了解的有趣知识展开；3. 最后写户外活动部分，对应“了解家乡”“亲近自然”，描述相关活动及感受；4. 结尾总结本学期的收获，表达未来的期望，确保语句通顺、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 承接开头后，先写学科学习：说明本学期各学科的学习现状（如擅长语文，数学有待提升），再阐述努力方向（多练习数学，遇到问题主动求助）；
2. 再写探索发现：结合“风俗习惯”“神秘世界”，举例从书中了解的有趣知识（如动物的特殊习性、自然地理常识等）；
3. 接着写户外活动：描述相关活动（如周末露营、林间散步），对应“了解家乡”（欣赏家乡美景）、“亲近自然”（感受自然的美好）；
4. 结尾总结本学期的生活状态，表达未来会继续努力的期望，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【答案】
How time flies! This term will come to an end soon. I learned a lot this term.
I always try my best to work hard on all the subjects and this term I did much better than before. I like reading so much and I do well in Chinese. However, I am still not good at maths. I will never give up and I plan to practise more and ask others for help if I have problems.
I also learned about some fun facts from my books. For example, a cow can produce nearly 200,000 glasses of milk in its lifetime. What's more, to my surprise, the famous Yangtze River is about 6,300 kilometres long and most of it runs through mountains. I went camping at weekends and enjoyed the views of my beautiful hometown.
Once I had time, I often went for walks in the woods near my house. I enjoyed taking a look at the beautiful mountains and the clear water around. I enjoy outdoor activities because I feel like a little explorer, discovering hidden treasures in nature.
My life was interesting and colourful this term. I will keep trying and be better in the future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；自我评价类英语作文
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖所有指定评价项目，内容充实具体，语句连贯自然，符合英语表达习惯，词数达标，清晰展现了本学期的学习与生活状态，是一篇优秀的自我评价类英语作文。
【难度系数】
0.5
