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英语校刊 Our Voice 正在开展“引路青春”书信活动。请根据内容和要求，分享你克服困难、坚持不懈的历程和感悟，让花季雨季的青少年们坚守这份信念，直面成长中的坎坷与磨砺，遇见更好的自己。现以“Never give up”为题，联系自身，写一篇英语交流稿，从以下至少三方面论述:What difficulty did you meet and have you ever thought of giving up? How did you deal with it at last? What can you learn from such the experience?
要求:1. 词数 100 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；2. 不得使用真实校名和姓名。
Never give up
In the journey of growth, we will meet all kinds of difficulties and challenges. For me, the most impressing one is
英语校刊 Our Voice 正在开展“引路青春”书信活动。请根据内容和要求，分享你克服困难、坚持不懈的历程和感悟，让花季雨季的青少年们坚守这份信念，直面成长中的坎坷与磨砺，遇见更好的自己。现以“Never give up”为题，联系自身，写一篇英语交流稿，从以下至少三方面论述:What difficulty did you meet and have you ever thought of giving up? How did you deal with it at last? What can you learn from such the experience?
要求:1. 词数 100 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；2. 不得使用真实校名和姓名。
Never give up
In the journey of growth, we will meet all kinds of difficulties and challenges. For me, the most impressing one is
答案
思路点拨
1. 审体裁——本文为一篇英语演讲稿，以第一人称“我”讲述个人经历，传递“永不放弃”的主题。
2. 审内容——选择一个具体的困难，描述自己如何坚持，最终克服困难，从经历中提炼出至少两点收获。
3. 审时态——以一般过去时讲述经历，用一般现在时表达感悟和升华主题。
4. 审篇幅——控制在 100 词左右，开头点题，中间用高级句型“Not only... but also...”串联，结尾用“I learn that never giving up is the key to success...”升华主题。
范文欣赏
Never give up
In the journey of growth, we will meet all kinds of difficulties and challenges. For me, the most impressing one is learning English. I used to be poor at listening and often failed the listening test. I was so frustrated that I even thought of giving up.
I decided to change this situation. I listened to English songs and news every morning, and asked my teacher for advice after class. Not only did I keep practising every day, but also I made a study plan to improve step by step. Gradually, my listening skills got better.
From this experience, I learn that never giving up is the key to success. No matter how hard the difficulty is, as long as we persist, we will overcome it. I hope all teenagers can keep this spirit and become better themselves.
1. 审体裁——本文为一篇英语演讲稿，以第一人称“我”讲述个人经历，传递“永不放弃”的主题。
2. 审内容——选择一个具体的困难，描述自己如何坚持，最终克服困难，从经历中提炼出至少两点收获。
3. 审时态——以一般过去时讲述经历，用一般现在时表达感悟和升华主题。
4. 审篇幅——控制在 100 词左右，开头点题，中间用高级句型“Not only... but also...”串联，结尾用“I learn that never giving up is the key to success...”升华主题。
范文欣赏
Never give up
In the journey of growth, we will meet all kinds of difficulties and challenges. For me, the most impressing one is learning English. I used to be poor at listening and often failed the listening test. I was so frustrated that I even thought of giving up.
I decided to change this situation. I listened to English songs and news every morning, and asked my teacher for advice after class. Not only did I keep practising every day, but also I made a study plan to improve step by step. Gradually, my listening skills got better.
From this experience, I learn that never giving up is the key to success. No matter how hard the difficulty is, as long as we persist, we will overcome it. I hope all teenagers can keep this spirit and become better themselves.
解析
【解析】
1. 审题梳理：
- 体裁：主题为“永不放弃”的英语交流稿，使用第一人称叙述个人经历，传递正向成长信念。
- 内容覆盖：依次回应三个指定问题：①点明遇到的困难是英语听力薄弱，曾因多次测试失利萌生放弃的想法；②说明后续通过每日练习听力、制定学习计划、向老师请教的方式逐步克服困难；③提炼经历带来的感悟，升华主题。
- 时态安排：讲述过往经历使用一般过去时，表达当下感悟使用一般现在时。
- 篇幅控制：总词数约100词，符合题目要求，不出现真实校名和姓名。
2. 参考范文：
learning English. I used to be poor at English listening and often failed related tests. So frustrated was I that I once even thought of giving up.
Later I decided to pull myself together. I kept listening to English materials every day, made a proper study plan and turned to my teacher for useful advice. Little by little, my listening improved a lot.
From this experience, I learn that never giving up is the key to overcoming difficulties. Whatever trouble we meet, as long as we stick to it, we can finally make progress and become a better version of ourselves.
【答案】
learning English. I used to be poor at English listening and often failed related tests. So frustrated was I that I once even thought of giving up.
Later I decided to pull myself together. I kept listening to English materials every day, made a proper study plan and turned to my teacher for useful advice. Little by little, my listening improved a lot.
From this experience, I learn that never giving up is the key to overcoming difficulties. Whatever trouble we meet, as long as we stick to it, we can finally make progress and become a better version of ourselves.
【知识点】
记叙文写作、时态正确运用、主题内容扣题
【点评】
本题属于英语应用文写作类基础题，核心考查学生的叙事逻辑和语言表达能力，写作时需严格覆盖题干指定的三个论述要点，注意时态切换自然，适当运用部分高级句式提升文章质感，同时严格控制词数符合要求，避免出现个人真实信息。
【难度系数】
0.6
1. 审题梳理：
- 体裁：主题为“永不放弃”的英语交流稿，使用第一人称叙述个人经历，传递正向成长信念。
- 内容覆盖：依次回应三个指定问题：①点明遇到的困难是英语听力薄弱，曾因多次测试失利萌生放弃的想法；②说明后续通过每日练习听力、制定学习计划、向老师请教的方式逐步克服困难；③提炼经历带来的感悟，升华主题。
- 时态安排：讲述过往经历使用一般过去时，表达当下感悟使用一般现在时。
- 篇幅控制：总词数约100词，符合题目要求，不出现真实校名和姓名。
2. 参考范文：
learning English. I used to be poor at English listening and often failed related tests. So frustrated was I that I once even thought of giving up.
Later I decided to pull myself together. I kept listening to English materials every day, made a proper study plan and turned to my teacher for useful advice. Little by little, my listening improved a lot.
From this experience, I learn that never giving up is the key to overcoming difficulties. Whatever trouble we meet, as long as we stick to it, we can finally make progress and become a better version of ourselves.
【答案】
learning English. I used to be poor at English listening and often failed related tests. So frustrated was I that I once even thought of giving up.
Later I decided to pull myself together. I kept listening to English materials every day, made a proper study plan and turned to my teacher for useful advice. Little by little, my listening improved a lot.
From this experience, I learn that never giving up is the key to overcoming difficulties. Whatever trouble we meet, as long as we stick to it, we can finally make progress and become a better version of ourselves.
【知识点】
记叙文写作、时态正确运用、主题内容扣题
【点评】
本题属于英语应用文写作类基础题，核心考查学生的叙事逻辑和语言表达能力，写作时需严格覆盖题干指定的三个论述要点，注意时态切换自然，适当运用部分高级句式提升文章质感，同时严格控制词数符合要求，避免出现个人真实信息。
【难度系数】
0.6
巩固练习
假如你是李华,你的外国笔友 Kim 在学习汉语中遇到挫折,产生了放弃的念头,给你写了一封信倾诉烦恼。请你根据他的来信,写一封英语回信,结合自身学习中的挫折经历,回应他的疑问,鼓励他坚守信念、坚持不懈,克服汉语学习的困难。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you? I miss you so much.
Recently I have learned Chinese, but I still make little progress in it. I find it difficult to pronounce all the words correctly. I also have difficulty writing Chinese. I want to give up. What can I do to get rid of the idea of giving up? What advice could you give me to continue my Chinese learning? Can you offer me your experiences of solving problems instead of giving up?
I am looking forward to your reply letter!
Yours,
Kim
要求:1. 词数 100 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 语气亲切真诚,观点明确,逻辑清晰;3. 严格按照书信格式写作,规范使用称呼、结尾署名等;4. 不得使用真实校名、姓名;5. 紧扣 Kim 的3 个疑问,结合自身经历,传递正能量。
Dear Kim,
I haven't seen you for a long time. You said you would like to give up Chinese learning. I want to tell you that
Yours,
Li Hua
悲。
假如你是李华,你的外国笔友 Kim 在学习汉语中遇到挫折,产生了放弃的念头,给你写了一封信倾诉烦恼。请你根据他的来信,写一封英语回信,结合自身学习中的挫折经历,回应他的疑问,鼓励他坚守信念、坚持不懈,克服汉语学习的困难。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you? I miss you so much.
Recently I have learned Chinese, but I still make little progress in it. I find it difficult to pronounce all the words correctly. I also have difficulty writing Chinese. I want to give up. What can I do to get rid of the idea of giving up? What advice could you give me to continue my Chinese learning? Can you offer me your experiences of solving problems instead of giving up?
I am looking forward to your reply letter!
Yours,
Kim
要求:1. 词数 100 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 语气亲切真诚,观点明确,逻辑清晰;3. 严格按照书信格式写作,规范使用称呼、结尾署名等;4. 不得使用真实校名、姓名;5. 紧扣 Kim 的3 个疑问,结合自身经历,传递正能量。
Dear Kim,
I haven't seen you for a long time. You said you would like to give up Chinese learning. I want to tell you that
never give up—I've been there too!
When I first learned English, I couldn't pronounce words clearly and often mixed up spellings. I felt like quitting, but I kept practising daily—even just 15 minutes. Slowly, I improved.
For Chinese, try these: listen to simple songs to train your ears, write characters stroke by stroke, and celebrate small wins! Remember, every expert was once a beginner. Your effort will pay off.
Stay strong—I believe in you!
When I first learned English, I couldn't pronounce words clearly and often mixed up spellings. I felt like quitting, but I kept practising daily—even just 15 minutes. Slowly, I improved.
For Chinese, try these: listen to simple songs to train your ears, write characters stroke by stroke, and celebrate small wins! Remember, every expert was once a beginner. Your effort will pay off.
Stay strong—I believe in you!
Yours,
Li Hua
悲。
答案
写作能力突破
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文——劝说鼓励类回信。②时态:以一般现在时为主,辅以一般过去时(叙述自身经历)。③提示:需回应 Kim 的三个问题(如何摆脱放弃念头、学习建议、自身经历),语气亲切真诚,传递"永不放弃"的积极信念。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达关心并明确观点:肯定 Kim 的感受,直接表明"不要放弃"的立场。第二步,分享个人挫折与应对经历:用具体例子说明自己也曾想放弃,但通过坚持克服困难。第三步,给出实用建议并给予鼓励:结合汉语学习难点提供可操作方法,结尾传递信心与支持。
[词句积累]
① give up 放弃 ② mix up 混淆 ③celebrate small wins庆祝微小进步 ④pay off 取得回报,获得成功
⑤ When I first learned English, I couldn't pronounce words clearly and often mixed up spellings. (when 引导时间状语从句)
⑥Remember, every expert was once a beginner. (引用哲理句,增强说服力)
One possible version:
Dear Kim,
I haven't seen you for a long time. You said you would like to give up Chinese learning. I want to tell you that never give up—I've been there too!
When I first learned English, I couldn't pronounce words clearly and often mixed up spellings. I felt like quitting, but I kept practising daily—even just 15 minutes. Slowly, I improved.
For Chinese, try these: listen to simple songs to train your ears, write characters stroke by stroke, and celebrate small wins! Remember, every expert was once a beginner. Your effort will pay off.
Stay strong—I believe in you!
Yours,
Li Hua
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文——劝说鼓励类回信。②时态:以一般现在时为主,辅以一般过去时(叙述自身经历)。③提示:需回应 Kim 的三个问题(如何摆脱放弃念头、学习建议、自身经历),语气亲切真诚,传递"永不放弃"的积极信念。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达关心并明确观点:肯定 Kim 的感受,直接表明"不要放弃"的立场。第二步,分享个人挫折与应对经历:用具体例子说明自己也曾想放弃,但通过坚持克服困难。第三步,给出实用建议并给予鼓励:结合汉语学习难点提供可操作方法,结尾传递信心与支持。
[词句积累]
① give up 放弃 ② mix up 混淆 ③celebrate small wins庆祝微小进步 ④pay off 取得回报,获得成功
⑤ When I first learned English, I couldn't pronounce words clearly and often mixed up spellings. (when 引导时间状语从句)
⑥Remember, every expert was once a beginner. (引用哲理句,增强说服力)
One possible version:
Dear Kim,
I haven't seen you for a long time. You said you would like to give up Chinese learning. I want to tell you that never give up—I've been there too!
When I first learned English, I couldn't pronounce words clearly and often mixed up spellings. I felt like quitting, but I kept practising daily—even just 15 minutes. Slowly, I improved.
For Chinese, try these: listen to simple songs to train your ears, write characters stroke by stroke, and celebrate small wins! Remember, every expert was once a beginner. Your effort will pay off.
Stay strong—I believe in you!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确核心要求：一是必须完整回应Kim提出的三个疑问：如何打消放弃汉语的念头、汉语学习的实用建议、自身克服学习挫折的经历；二是要符合笔友间回信的亲切语气，词数控制在100左右。解题可以按三步顺理成章推进：第一步先共情对方，不要直接生硬说教，先表明自己也有过类似想放弃的学习经历，拉近距离，先帮他舒缓负面情绪；第二步自然引出自己真实的学习受挫后坚持下来的经历，回应他索要个人经验的要求；第三步针对他提到的发音难、写汉字难的具体痛点给出可落地的小建议，最后用积极的鼓励帮他彻底打消放弃的想法，全程紧扣要求不要添加无关内容，符合书信格式即可。
【解析】
写作按照三步规范完成：
1. 开篇衔接给定开头，直接亮明“不要放弃”的立场，用“I've been there too”表达共情，让语气更亲切自然，契合笔友的身份设定。
2. 分享自身经历：用一般过去时叙述自己初学英语时的困境——发音不清晰、经常混淆拼写，也曾想过放弃，但坚持每天练习15分钟后慢慢取得进步，完整回应Kim索要个人抗挫经历的要求。
3. 给出针对性建议+收尾鼓励：针对Kim提到的发音难，给出听简单中文歌训练听力发音的方案；针对汉字书写难，给出一笔一划练习汉字的方法，同时提醒他多庆祝小的进步，最后用“every expert was once a beginner”的金句强化鼓励，点明努力终有回报，帮他彻底打消放弃的念头，收尾用友好的表达传递支持，符合书信格式，整体词数符合100左右的要求。
【答案】
Dear Kim,
I haven't seen you for a long time. You said you would like to give up Chinese learning. I want to tell you that never give up—I've been there too!
When I first learned English, I couldn't pronounce words clearly and often mixed up spellings. I felt like quitting, but I kept practising daily—even just 15 minutes. Slowly, I improved.
For Chinese, try these: listen to simple songs to train your ears, write characters stroke by stroke, and celebrate small wins! Remember, every expert was once a beginner. Your effort will pay off.
Stay strong—I believe in you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文书信写作
劝说类应用文表达
时态灵活运用
【点评】
本题属于典型的朋友间鼓励类回信写作，核心得分点是不能遗漏题干指定的三个回应要点，不少考生容易漏写自身抗挫经历，或是给出的学习建议和Kim提到的汉语发音、书写难点不匹配，写作时注意用生活化的细节替代空泛的说教，既能让语气更真诚，也更容易拿到高分，同时要注意控制总词数符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先要明确核心要求：一是必须完整回应Kim提出的三个疑问：如何打消放弃汉语的念头、汉语学习的实用建议、自身克服学习挫折的经历；二是要符合笔友间回信的亲切语气，词数控制在100左右。解题可以按三步顺理成章推进：第一步先共情对方，不要直接生硬说教，先表明自己也有过类似想放弃的学习经历，拉近距离，先帮他舒缓负面情绪；第二步自然引出自己真实的学习受挫后坚持下来的经历，回应他索要个人经验的要求；第三步针对他提到的发音难、写汉字难的具体痛点给出可落地的小建议，最后用积极的鼓励帮他彻底打消放弃的想法，全程紧扣要求不要添加无关内容，符合书信格式即可。
【解析】
写作按照三步规范完成：
1. 开篇衔接给定开头，直接亮明“不要放弃”的立场，用“I've been there too”表达共情，让语气更亲切自然，契合笔友的身份设定。
2. 分享自身经历：用一般过去时叙述自己初学英语时的困境——发音不清晰、经常混淆拼写，也曾想过放弃，但坚持每天练习15分钟后慢慢取得进步，完整回应Kim索要个人抗挫经历的要求。
3. 给出针对性建议+收尾鼓励：针对Kim提到的发音难，给出听简单中文歌训练听力发音的方案；针对汉字书写难，给出一笔一划练习汉字的方法，同时提醒他多庆祝小的进步，最后用“every expert was once a beginner”的金句强化鼓励，点明努力终有回报，帮他彻底打消放弃的念头，收尾用友好的表达传递支持，符合书信格式，整体词数符合100左右的要求。
【答案】
Dear Kim,
I haven't seen you for a long time. You said you would like to give up Chinese learning. I want to tell you that never give up—I've been there too!
When I first learned English, I couldn't pronounce words clearly and often mixed up spellings. I felt like quitting, but I kept practising daily—even just 15 minutes. Slowly, I improved.
For Chinese, try these: listen to simple songs to train your ears, write characters stroke by stroke, and celebrate small wins! Remember, every expert was once a beginner. Your effort will pay off.
Stay strong—I believe in you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文书信写作
劝说类应用文表达
时态灵活运用
【点评】
本题属于典型的朋友间鼓励类回信写作，核心得分点是不能遗漏题干指定的三个回应要点，不少考生容易漏写自身抗挫经历，或是给出的学习建议和Kim提到的汉语发音、书写难点不匹配，写作时注意用生活化的细节替代空泛的说教，既能让语气更真诚，也更容易拿到高分，同时要注意控制总词数符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
