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51. 我国有很多经典的神话故事、寓言故事和成语故事。假如你是李华，美国中学生将到你们学校交流学习，请你以“A Chinese Story I Want to Share”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，包括故事内容、你的感受等。
要求：
(1)书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；
(2)作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
A Chinese Story I Want to Share
Chinese stories are important in traditional Chinese culture. Today I want to share a Chinese story with you.
要求：
(1)书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；
(2)作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
A Chinese Story I Want to Share
Chinese stories are important in traditional Chinese culture. Today I want to share a Chinese story with you.
答案
参考范文：
A Chinese Story I Want to Share
Chinese stories are important in traditional Chinese culture. Today I want to share a Chinese story with you. It is Yu Gong Moves the Mountains.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Yu Gong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. At the same time, we should not give up. I hope you can read more Chinese stories and learn more about Chinese culture.
A Chinese Story I Want to Share
Chinese stories are important in traditional Chinese culture. Today I want to share a Chinese story with you. It is Yu Gong Moves the Mountains.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Yu Gong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. At the same time, we should not give up. I hope you can read more Chinese stories and learn more about Chinese culture.
解析
【分析】本题为英语写作题，要求以“A Chinese Story I Want to Share”为题，分享中国经典故事。解题思路：1. 选取家喻户晓的中国经典故事（如愚公移山）；2. 结构布局：开头已给出，中间简述故事的起因、经过、结果；3. 结尾点明故事寓意与个人感受，确保表达连贯、符合词数要求，同时传递中国文化内涵。
【解析】首先点明要分享的故事是《愚公移山》；接着用一般过去时简述故事：从前有位叫愚公的老人，家附近有两座高山，出行耗时久，他决定带领家人移山，日复一日坚持，最终感动神仙移走了山；最后表达感受，强调坚持与努力的重要性，适当补充呼吁了解中国文化的内容，保证表达流畅、符合要求。
【答案】A Chinese Story I Want to Share
Chinese stories are important in traditional Chinese culture. Today I want to share a Chinese story with you. It is Yu Gong Moves the Mountains.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Yu Gong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. At the same time, we should not give up. I hope you can read more Chinese stories and learn more about Chinese culture.
【知识点】英语写作、文化类短文写作
【点评】本题结合中国传统文化，综合考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求学生既能准确叙述故事，又能传递文化内涵，是语言运用与文化意识的结合考查。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先点明要分享的故事是《愚公移山》；接着用一般过去时简述故事：从前有位叫愚公的老人，家附近有两座高山，出行耗时久，他决定带领家人移山，日复一日坚持，最终感动神仙移走了山；最后表达感受，强调坚持与努力的重要性，适当补充呼吁了解中国文化的内容，保证表达流畅、符合要求。
【答案】A Chinese Story I Want to Share
Chinese stories are important in traditional Chinese culture. Today I want to share a Chinese story with you. It is Yu Gong Moves the Mountains.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Yu Gong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. At the same time, we should not give up. I hope you can read more Chinese stories and learn more about Chinese culture.
【知识点】英语写作、文化类短文写作
【点评】本题结合中国传统文化，综合考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求学生既能准确叙述故事，又能传递文化内涵，是语言运用与文化意识的结合考查。
【难度系数】0.6
