六、书面表达。
时光如梭,初中三年的生活已悄然走到终点。回望这段时光,你一定收获了成长、勇气、坚持、友谊等。请你以“成长与收获”为主题,写一篇英语短文,谈一谈三年来你最大的改变及对未来的期待。
内容提示:
1. What is your biggest change in junior high school?
2. How did it help you grow up? ( e.g., teachers, classmates, hard work, and so on )
3. What will you do in the future?
注意:
1. 短文须包括以上内容提示,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现学生真实的姓名和校名;
3. 词数80个左右。
时光如梭,初中三年的生活已悄然走到终点。回望这段时光,你一定收获了成长、勇气、坚持、友谊等。请你以“成长与收获”为主题,写一篇英语短文,谈一谈三年来你最大的改变及对未来的期待。
内容提示:
1. What is your biggest change in junior high school?
2. How did it help you grow up? ( e.g., teachers, classmates, hard work, and so on )
3. What will you do in the future?
注意:
1. 短文须包括以上内容提示,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现学生真实的姓名和校名;
3. 词数80个左右。
答案
范例:
How time flies! My junior high school life has come to an end. During the three years, I have grown a lot.
I used to be shy and afraid to speak in public. I'm afraid of difficulties. With the help of my teachers' encouragement and friends' help, I became braver and more confident. I learned not only knowledge from books, but also the importance of hard work and teamwork. I know that nothing is impossible as long as I keep trying.
In the future, I will continue to face challenges bravely and never give up easily. I will keep moving forward and work for a brighter future.
How time flies! My junior high school life has come to an end. During the three years, I have grown a lot.
I used to be shy and afraid to speak in public. I'm afraid of difficulties. With the help of my teachers' encouragement and friends' help, I became braver and more confident. I learned not only knowledge from books, but also the importance of hard work and teamwork. I know that nothing is impossible as long as I keep trying.
In the future, I will continue to face challenges bravely and never give up easily. I will keep moving forward and work for a brighter future.
解析
【分析】本题为初中英语书面表达题,主题为“成长与收获”,需围绕三个核心要点写作:1. 初中三年最大的改变;2. 该改变如何助力成长(可结合老师、同学、努力等因素);3. 未来的规划。解题时需先明确自身核心改变,再结合提示因素阐述成长过程,最后点明未来期待,同时注意词数控制(80左右)、不出现真实信息、语言通顺。
【解析】写作步骤:1. 开篇点题,说明初中生活结束,自身收获成长;2. 阐述过去状态与改变:说明过去的不足(如害羞不敢当众发言),结合老师鼓励、朋友帮助等因素,说明自身变得勇敢自信,收获知识与品质;3. 展望未来,表达未来将勇敢面对挑战、坚持努力的规划,确保涵盖所有提示要点,语言简洁符合词数要求。
【答案】How time flies! My junior high school life has come to an end. During the three years, I have grown a lot.
I used to be shy and afraid to speak in public. I'm afraid of difficulties. With the help of my teachers' encouragement and friends' help, I became braver and more confident. I learned not only knowledge from books, but also the importance of hard work and teamwork. I know that nothing is impossible as long as I keep trying.
In the future, I will continue to face challenges bravely and never give up easily. I will keep moving forward and work for a brighter future.
【知识点】初中英语书面表达、主题式英语写作、要点整合写作
【点评】该作文紧扣“成长与收获”主题,完整覆盖所有内容提示要点,逻辑连贯,语言流畅自然,符合初中英语写作的规范要求,是一篇优秀的范例作文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤:1. 开篇点题,说明初中生活结束,自身收获成长;2. 阐述过去状态与改变:说明过去的不足(如害羞不敢当众发言),结合老师鼓励、朋友帮助等因素,说明自身变得勇敢自信,收获知识与品质;3. 展望未来,表达未来将勇敢面对挑战、坚持努力的规划,确保涵盖所有提示要点,语言简洁符合词数要求。
【答案】How time flies! My junior high school life has come to an end. During the three years, I have grown a lot.
I used to be shy and afraid to speak in public. I'm afraid of difficulties. With the help of my teachers' encouragement and friends' help, I became braver and more confident. I learned not only knowledge from books, but also the importance of hard work and teamwork. I know that nothing is impossible as long as I keep trying.
In the future, I will continue to face challenges bravely and never give up easily. I will keep moving forward and work for a brighter future.
【知识点】初中英语书面表达、主题式英语写作、要点整合写作
【点评】该作文紧扣“成长与收获”主题,完整覆盖所有内容提示要点,逻辑连贯,语言流畅自然,符合初中英语写作的规范要求,是一篇优秀的范例作文。
【难度系数】0.5
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