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假如你是李华，昨天你所处的城市发生了地震，你的英国好友Jack发来一封电子邮件向你表示关心，并询问当时的情况以及你和家人正在做什么。请你根据下表内容，给他回一封邮件。
【审题要领】
【写作框架】
【素材积累】
重点句子
开头句：1. Now let me tell you something about the serious natural disaster. 现在让我告诉你一些关于这场严重的自然灾害的事。
中间句：1. After a night full of hope and fear, we were too tired to think about anything. 经过了一个充满希望与恐惧的夜晚后，我们太累而无法思考任何事情。
结尾句：1. Keep calm when a natural disaster happens and then react as quickly as possible! 当自然灾害发生时，保持冷静，然后尽可能迅速地做出反应。
【美文欣赏】
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your email. Don't worry about me. I'm fine. Now let me tell you the situation at that time.
When the earthquake happened, I heard some loud noises. I could feel the ground shaking.
I was too scared to think about anything. At that time, my father was driving home.
My mother was washing clothes while I was surfing the internet in my bedroom.
After realising what was happening, my father stopped driving and found a safe place to stay. My mother and I ran out of the building as quickly as possible, but in order.
The earthquake made our city in a mess — lots of people were hurt and many homes were broken. But thankfully, it didn't last for too long. We were all safe. And I've learnt that it's important to face disasters with courage.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，昨天你所处的城市发生了地震，你的英国好友Jack发来一封电子邮件向你表示关心，并询问当时的情况以及你和家人正在做什么。请你根据下表内容，给他回一封邮件。
【审题要领】
【写作框架】
【素材积累】
重点句子
开头句：1. Now let me tell you something about the serious natural disaster. 现在让我告诉你一些关于这场严重的自然灾害的事。
中间句：1. After a night full of hope and fear, we were too tired to think about anything. 经过了一个充满希望与恐惧的夜晚后，我们太累而无法思考任何事情。
结尾句：1. Keep calm when a natural disaster happens and then react as quickly as possible! 当自然灾害发生时，保持冷静，然后尽可能迅速地做出反应。
【美文欣赏】
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your email. Don't worry about me. I'm fine. Now let me tell you the situation at that time.
When the earthquake happened, I heard some loud noises. I could feel the ground shaking.
I was too scared to think about anything. At that time, my father was driving home.
My mother was washing clothes while I was surfing the internet in my bedroom.
After realising what was happening, my father stopped driving and found a safe place to stay. My mother and I ran out of the building as quickly as possible, but in order.
The earthquake made our city in a mess — lots of people were hurt and many homes were broken. But thankfully, it didn't last for too long. We were all safe. And I've learnt that it's important to face disasters with courage.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
审题要领填写内容：
主题：给好友回邮，告知地震发生时的场景、我和家人当时的状态，向关心自己的好友报平安
人称：第一人称（I/we）
时态：一般过去时+过去进行时为主，少量现在完成时
参考范文：
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your email. Don't worry about me. I'm fine. Now let me tell you the situation at that time.
When the earthquake happened, I heard some loud noises. I could feel the ground shaking. I was too scared to think about anything. At that time, my father was driving home. My mother was washing clothes while I was surfing the internet in my bedroom.
After realising what was happening, my father stopped driving and found a safe place to stay. My mother and I ran out of the building as quickly as possible, but in order.
The earthquake made our city in a mess — lots of people were hurt and many homes were broken. But thankfully, it didn't last for too long. We were all safe. And I've learnt that it's important to face disasters with courage.
Yours,
Li Hua
主题：给好友回邮，告知地震发生时的场景、我和家人当时的状态，向关心自己的好友报平安
人称：第一人称（I/we）
时态：一般过去时+过去进行时为主，少量现在完成时
参考范文：
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your email. Don't worry about me. I'm fine. Now let me tell you the situation at that time.
When the earthquake happened, I heard some loud noises. I could feel the ground shaking. I was too scared to think about anything. At that time, my father was driving home. My mother was washing clothes while I was surfing the internet in my bedroom.
After realising what was happening, my father stopped driving and found a safe place to stay. My mother and I ran out of the building as quickly as possible, but in order.
The earthquake made our city in a mess — lots of people were hurt and many homes were broken. But thankfully, it didn't last for too long. We were all safe. And I've learnt that it's important to face disasters with courage.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求给好友Jack回邮，需明确写作思路：首先确定写作主题是告知地震发生时的场景、自身与家人的状态并报平安；人称用第一人称（I/we）；时态以一般过去时（描述地震发生的动作）和过去进行时（描述当时正在做的事）为主；再结合素材中的重点句子，按照“开头回应关心→中间讲地震场景与家人动作→结尾讲后续情况与感悟”的框架组织内容，确保符合书信语气和格式。
【解析】
1. 开头：感谢Jack的关心，告知自己平安，引出地震相关情况；
2. 中间：用一般过去时描述地震发生时的感官（声响、震感），用过去进行时写父亲（开车）、母亲（洗衣服）、自己（上网）的动作；
3. 应对：描述家人在地震中的应对措施（父亲找安全处，自己和母亲有序撤离）；
4. 结尾：说明地震后的状况，表达平安，传递面对灾难要勇敢的感悟；
5. 落款：按书信格式署名Li Hua。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your email. Don't worry about me. I'm fine. Now let me tell you the situation at that time.
When the earthquake happened, I heard some loud noises. I could feel the ground shaking. I was too scared to think about anything. At that time, my father was driving home. My mother was washing clothes while I was surfing the internet in my bedroom.
After realising what was happening, my father stopped driving and found a safe place to stay. My mother and I ran out of the building as quickly as possible, but in order.
The earthquake made our city in a mess — lots of people were hurt and many homes were broken. But thankfully, it didn't last for too long. We were all safe. And I've learnt that it's important to face disasters with courage.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、过去进行时、一般过去时
【点评】
该范文符合书信格式，人称时态运用准确，内容紧扣题目要求，既回应了好友的关心，又详细描述了地震发生时的场景、家人的状态及应对措施，还传递了积极的情感，是一篇优秀的应用文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求给好友Jack回邮，需明确写作思路：首先确定写作主题是告知地震发生时的场景、自身与家人的状态并报平安；人称用第一人称（I/we）；时态以一般过去时（描述地震发生的动作）和过去进行时（描述当时正在做的事）为主；再结合素材中的重点句子，按照“开头回应关心→中间讲地震场景与家人动作→结尾讲后续情况与感悟”的框架组织内容，确保符合书信语气和格式。
【解析】
1. 开头：感谢Jack的关心，告知自己平安，引出地震相关情况；
2. 中间：用一般过去时描述地震发生时的感官（声响、震感），用过去进行时写父亲（开车）、母亲（洗衣服）、自己（上网）的动作；
3. 应对：描述家人在地震中的应对措施（父亲找安全处，自己和母亲有序撤离）；
4. 结尾：说明地震后的状况，表达平安，传递面对灾难要勇敢的感悟；
5. 落款：按书信格式署名Li Hua。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your email. Don't worry about me. I'm fine. Now let me tell you the situation at that time.
When the earthquake happened, I heard some loud noises. I could feel the ground shaking. I was too scared to think about anything. At that time, my father was driving home. My mother was washing clothes while I was surfing the internet in my bedroom.
After realising what was happening, my father stopped driving and found a safe place to stay. My mother and I ran out of the building as quickly as possible, but in order.
The earthquake made our city in a mess — lots of people were hurt and many homes were broken. But thankfully, it didn't last for too long. We were all safe. And I've learnt that it's important to face disasters with courage.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、过去进行时、一般过去时
【点评】
该范文符合书信格式，人称时态运用准确，内容紧扣题目要求，既回应了好友的关心，又详细描述了地震发生时的场景、家人的状态及应对措施，还传递了积极的情感，是一篇优秀的应用文。
【难度系数】
0.3
