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我国的航天任务取得成功离不开航天人的坚守与努力。你校英语社团公众号正在做“我最崇拜的航天英雄”系列推送，请你根据表格内容介绍航天员王亚平，用英语给公众号留言，对其作简要介绍并说明推荐理由。
| Name | Wang Yaping |
| Birthplace | Yantai, Shandong Province |
| Year of birth | 1980 |
| Achievements | joined
the Shenzhou X mission
gave wonderful and lively lessons in space |
续表
| Other aspects | the first female astronaut to
a space walk successfully in China |
要求:(1)要点齐全,可适当发挥;(2)条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范;(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;(4)词数 80 左右(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
【写作思路指导】
• ... in 1980, Wang Yaping loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school.
• After ten years' effort, she ... and ...
• Moreover, she is the first ...
• Why do you admire her? ...
【实战演练】
Among all the astronauts, I admire Wang Yaping most.
我国的航天任务取得成功离不开航天人的坚守与努力。你校英语社团公众号正在做“我最崇拜的航天英雄”系列推送，请你根据表格内容介绍航天员王亚平，用英语给公众号留言，对其作简要介绍并说明推荐理由。
| Name | Wang Yaping |
| Birthplace | Yantai, Shandong Province |
| Year of birth | 1980 |
| Achievements | joined
the Shenzhou X missiongave wonderful and lively lessons in space |
续表
| Other aspects | the first female astronaut to
a space walk successfully in China |要求:(1)要点齐全,可适当发挥;(2)条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范;(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;(4)词数 80 左右(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
【写作思路指导】
• ... in 1980, Wang Yaping loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school.
• After ten years' effort, she ... and ...
• Moreover, she is the first ...
• Why do you admire her? ...
【实战演练】
Among all the astronauts, I admire Wang Yaping most.
Wang Yaping is not only an astronaut but also a teacher in space.
Born in 1980, Wang Yaping loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school.
Her space dream started in 2003. She trained really hard and never gave up.
After ten years' effort, she joined the Shenzhou X mission and gave wonderful and lively lessons in space.
Moreover, she is the first female astronaut to conduct a space walk successfully in China.
As a student, I truly admire Wang Yaping for her great spirit of devoting herself to her space dream.
Whenever I meet difficulties, I should also learn from her to keep on trying and never lose heart.
答案
One possible version:
Among all the astronauts, I admire Wang Yaping most.
Wang Yaping is not only an astronaut but also a teacher in space. Born in 1980, Wang Yaping loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school. Her space dream started in 2003. She trained really hard and never gave up. After ten years' effort, she joined the Shenzhou X mission and gave wonderful and lively lessons in space. Moreover, she is the first female astronaut to conduct a space walk successfully in China.
As a student, I truly admire Wang Yaping for her great spirit of devoting herself to her space dream. Whenever I meet difficulties, I should also learn from her to keep on trying and never lose heart.
(114 words)
Among all the astronauts, I admire Wang Yaping most.
Wang Yaping is not only an astronaut but also a teacher in space. Born in 1980, Wang Yaping loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school. Her space dream started in 2003. She trained really hard and never gave up. After ten years' effort, she joined the Shenzhou X mission and gave wonderful and lively lessons in space. Moreover, she is the first female astronaut to conduct a space walk successfully in China.
As a student, I truly admire Wang Yaping for her great spirit of devoting herself to her space dream. Whenever I meet difficulties, I should also learn from her to keep on trying and never lose heart.
(114 words)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达中的介绍类应用文写作，要求结合给定表格信息与开头句，介绍航天员王亚平并说明推荐理由。解题思路：先承接开头，按“基本信息→核心成就→特殊身份→推荐理由”的逻辑梳理内容，确保覆盖所有表格要点（出生年、出生地、加入神舟十号、太空授课、中国首位完成太空行走的女航天员），适当补充细节使内容连贯，同时控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接开头，介绍王亚平的基本信息：Born in 1980 in Yantai, Shandong, she loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school.
2. 说明其核心成就：经过十年努力，她加入神舟十号任务，并进行了精彩生动的太空授课。
3. 补充特殊身份：她是中国首位成功完成太空行走的女航天员。
4. 阐述推荐理由：表达对她为航天梦想奉献精神的敬佩，结合自身感悟，说明要学习她坚持不放弃的品质。
【答案】
One possible version:
Among all the astronauts, I admire Wang Yaping most.
Wang Yaping is not only an astronaut but also a teacher in space. Born in 1980, Wang Yaping loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school. Her space dream started in 2003. She trained really hard and never gave up. After ten years' effort, she joined the Shenzhou X mission and gave wonderful and lively lessons in space. Moreover, she is the first female astronaut to conduct a space walk successfully in China.
As a student, I truly admire Wang Yaping for her great spirit of devoting herself to her space dream. Whenever I meet difficulties, I should also learn from her to keep on trying and never lose heart.
(114 words)
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、介绍类英语表达、航天主题英语词汇
【点评】
本题结合航天时事热点，既考查学生整合信息、组织语言的写作能力，又渗透了情感教育，引导学生学习航天人的坚持与奉献精神，兼顾语言运用与价值引领，符合英语学科核心素养要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达中的介绍类应用文写作，要求结合给定表格信息与开头句，介绍航天员王亚平并说明推荐理由。解题思路：先承接开头，按“基本信息→核心成就→特殊身份→推荐理由”的逻辑梳理内容，确保覆盖所有表格要点（出生年、出生地、加入神舟十号、太空授课、中国首位完成太空行走的女航天员），适当补充细节使内容连贯，同时控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接开头，介绍王亚平的基本信息：Born in 1980 in Yantai, Shandong, she loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school.
2. 说明其核心成就：经过十年努力，她加入神舟十号任务，并进行了精彩生动的太空授课。
3. 补充特殊身份：她是中国首位成功完成太空行走的女航天员。
4. 阐述推荐理由：表达对她为航天梦想奉献精神的敬佩，结合自身感悟，说明要学习她坚持不放弃的品质。
【答案】
One possible version:
Among all the astronauts, I admire Wang Yaping most.
Wang Yaping is not only an astronaut but also a teacher in space. Born in 1980, Wang Yaping loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school. Her space dream started in 2003. She trained really hard and never gave up. After ten years' effort, she joined the Shenzhou X mission and gave wonderful and lively lessons in space. Moreover, she is the first female astronaut to conduct a space walk successfully in China.
As a student, I truly admire Wang Yaping for her great spirit of devoting herself to her space dream. Whenever I meet difficulties, I should also learn from her to keep on trying and never lose heart.
(114 words)
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、介绍类英语表达、航天主题英语词汇
【点评】
本题结合航天时事热点，既考查学生整合信息、组织语言的写作能力，又渗透了情感教育，引导学生学习航天人的坚持与奉献精神，兼顾语言运用与价值引领，符合英语学科核心素养要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
