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五、书面表达
请你以“My fashion design”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍自己参加学校服装设计比赛的作品。
内容要点：1. T恤衫是棉质的、白色，…；
2. 牛仔裤…，所以我的设计包括一条蓝色牛仔裤；
3. 运动鞋是由皮革制成的，…；
4. 所有学生都认为…
注意事项：1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 须展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 词数70左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。
My fashion design
Here’s my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers.
请你以“My fashion design”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍自己参加学校服装设计比赛的作品。
内容要点：1. T恤衫是棉质的、白色，…；
2. 牛仔裤…，所以我的设计包括一条蓝色牛仔裤；
3. 运动鞋是由皮革制成的，…；
4. 所有学生都认为…
注意事项：1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 须展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 词数70左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。
My fashion design
Here’s my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers.
答案
One possible version:
Here's my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers. The T-shirt is made of cotton. It's white. Cotton T-shirts are comfortable to wear and white matches any other colour. Jeans are popular among young people, so I also design a pair of blue jeans. The trainers are made of leather. They're light and comfortable. They are fit for playing sports or a long walk.
All the students think my design is cool and is suitable for a young man.
(70 words)
Here's my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers. The T-shirt is made of cotton. It's white. Cotton T-shirts are comfortable to wear and white matches any other colour. Jeans are popular among young people, so I also design a pair of blue jeans. The trainers are made of leather. They're light and comfortable. They are fit for playing sports or a long walk.
All the students think my design is cool and is suitable for a young man.
(70 words)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，属于应用文写作类题目。解题思路如下：1. 明确题目要求：以“My fashion design”为题介绍服装设计比赛作品，需涵盖T恤、牛仔裤、运动鞋的相关内容，语句通顺、适当发挥，词数70左右，首句已给出；2. 梳理内容要点：依次介绍T恤的材质（棉质）、颜色（白色）及优点，牛仔裤的设计原因（受年轻人欢迎）、颜色，运动鞋的材质（皮革）及特点，最后说明学生对设计的评价；3. 组织语言时注意衔接自然，补充合理内容，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
Here's my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers. The T-shirt is made of cotton. It's white. Cotton T-shirts are comfortable to wear and white matches any other colour. Jeans are popular among young people, so I also design a pair of blue jeans. The trainers are made of leather. They're light and comfortable. They are fit for playing sports or a long walk. All the students think my design is cool and is suitable for a young man.
【答案】
Here's my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers. The T-shirt is made of cotton. It's white. Cotton T-shirts are comfortable to wear and white matches any other colour. Jeans are popular among young people, so I also design a pair of blue jeans. The trainers are made of leather. They're light and comfortable. They are fit for playing sports or a long walk. All the students think my design is cool and is suitable for a young man.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、词汇运用、语句连贯
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求紧扣内容要点，结合合理想象，考查词汇运用、语句衔接及内容组织能力，是初中英语常见写作题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，属于应用文写作类题目。解题思路如下：1. 明确题目要求：以“My fashion design”为题介绍服装设计比赛作品，需涵盖T恤、牛仔裤、运动鞋的相关内容，语句通顺、适当发挥，词数70左右，首句已给出；2. 梳理内容要点：依次介绍T恤的材质（棉质）、颜色（白色）及优点，牛仔裤的设计原因（受年轻人欢迎）、颜色，运动鞋的材质（皮革）及特点，最后说明学生对设计的评价；3. 组织语言时注意衔接自然，补充合理内容，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
Here's my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers. The T-shirt is made of cotton. It's white. Cotton T-shirts are comfortable to wear and white matches any other colour. Jeans are popular among young people, so I also design a pair of blue jeans. The trainers are made of leather. They're light and comfortable. They are fit for playing sports or a long walk. All the students think my design is cool and is suitable for a young man.
【答案】
Here's my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers. The T-shirt is made of cotton. It's white. Cotton T-shirts are comfortable to wear and white matches any other colour. Jeans are popular among young people, so I also design a pair of blue jeans. The trainers are made of leather. They're light and comfortable. They are fit for playing sports or a long walk. All the students think my design is cool and is suitable for a young man.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、词汇运用、语句连贯
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求紧扣内容要点，结合合理想象，考查词汇运用、语句衔接及内容组织能力，是初中英语常见写作题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
