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四、书面表达
一年四季变化更替，在四季中你可以感受生命、感受不同的美。假如你叫李华，想要向校英语报投稿，请你根据所给思维导图，以“My favourite season”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
注意事项：1. 短文须包括所给要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 须展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 词数100左右，短文的题目和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My favourite season
, making me happy every day.
一年四季变化更替，在四季中你可以感受生命、感受不同的美。假如你叫李华，想要向校英语报投稿，请你根据所给思维导图，以“My favourite season”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
注意事项：1. 短文须包括所给要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 须展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 词数100左右，短文的题目和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My favourite season
, making me happy every day.
答案
One possible version:
My favourite season
Spring is my favourite season. The weather is warm and often sunny, with some windy days. It is a perfect time to fly kites. Light spring showers make the air fresh and we only need to wear light coats.
Trees turn green, and flowers bloom, making the city colourful. Bees and butterflies are flying among the flowers while birds are singing in the trees. My friends and I love having picnics by the stream, eating sandwiches under the shade.
This season brings hope. Everything is new again, like the green leaves and blooming flowers. It’s lively and full of beauty, making me happy every day.
(100 words)
My favourite season
Spring is my favourite season. The weather is warm and often sunny, with some windy days. It is a perfect time to fly kites. Light spring showers make the air fresh and we only need to wear light coats.
Trees turn green, and flowers bloom, making the city colourful. Bees and butterflies are flying among the flowers while birds are singing in the trees. My friends and I love having picnics by the stream, eating sandwiches under the shade.
This season brings hope. Everything is new again, like the green leaves and blooming flowers. It’s lively and full of beauty, making me happy every day.
(100 words)
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My favourite season”为题写英语短文，需结合思维导图的weather、activities、animals、feelings四个要点，词数100左右，身份为李华向校英语报投稿。解题思路：1. 选定易展开的季节（如春天）；2. 围绕天气描述季节气候特点；3. 补充对应季节的活动；4. 关联季节里的动植物；5. 最后表达个人感受，确保语句连贯、要点齐全，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作时按以下步骤进行：1. 开篇点明最喜欢的季节；2. 描述该季节的天气特征；3. 列举相关活动；4. 描写季节里的动植物；5. 表达对该季节的感受，注意衔接自然，控制词数。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite season
Spring is my favourite season. The weather is warm and often sunny, with some windy days. Light spring showers make the air fresh and we only need to wear light coats.
Trees turn green, and flowers bloom, making the city colourful. Bees and butterflies are flying among the flowers while birds are singing in the trees. My friends and I love having picnics by the stream, eating sandwiches under the shade.
This season brings hope. Everything is new again, like the green leaves and blooming flowers. It’s lively and full of beauty, making me happy every day.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；季节话题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣思维导图要点，内容完整连贯，用词准确生动，符合投稿要求，清晰表达了对春天的喜爱之情。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“My favourite season”为题写英语短文，需结合思维导图的weather、activities、animals、feelings四个要点，词数100左右，身份为李华向校英语报投稿。解题思路：1. 选定易展开的季节（如春天）；2. 围绕天气描述季节气候特点；3. 补充对应季节的活动；4. 关联季节里的动植物；5. 最后表达个人感受，确保语句连贯、要点齐全，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作时按以下步骤进行：1. 开篇点明最喜欢的季节；2. 描述该季节的天气特征；3. 列举相关活动；4. 描写季节里的动植物；5. 表达对该季节的感受，注意衔接自然，控制词数。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite season
Spring is my favourite season. The weather is warm and often sunny, with some windy days. Light spring showers make the air fresh and we only need to wear light coats.
Trees turn green, and flowers bloom, making the city colourful. Bees and butterflies are flying among the flowers while birds are singing in the trees. My friends and I love having picnics by the stream, eating sandwiches under the shade.
This season brings hope. Everything is new again, like the green leaves and blooming flowers. It’s lively and full of beauty, making me happy every day.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；季节话题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣思维导图要点，内容完整连贯，用词准确生动，符合投稿要求，清晰表达了对春天的喜爱之情。
【难度系数】
0.5
