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学校英语报社就“学生的学习方式”开展讨论活动，下面表格里列出了两种学习方式。假如你是李华，请选择一种你喜欢的学习方式进行阐述并提出你认为的不足之处。80~100词。
Different students like different ways to study. Personally, I would rather
审题指导：
1. 体裁：议论文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：以第一人称为主
写作框架：
优秀范文：
Different students like different ways to study. Personally, I would rather study alone.
First, when I study alone, I can make a personal learning plan ① so that I know what to learn. Second, I will learn more quietly because there’s no one disturbing me. Third, it can help me improve my self-control ability ② because I have to depend on myself. What’s more, it can also help me form the habit of thinking ③.
However, it also has disadvantages. For example, when I don’t understand a question, I can’t discuss it with my classmates. ④
I hope everyone can find the best way to learn.
亮点词块
① make a personal learning plan
制订个人学习计划
② improve one’s self-control ability
提高自控力
③ form the habit of thinking
养成思考的习惯
高分句子
④ ...when I don’t understand a question, I can’t discuss it with my classmates.（when引导时间状语从句）……当我不懂一个问题时，我就不能和我的同学们讨论它。
学校英语报社就“学生的学习方式”开展讨论活动，下面表格里列出了两种学习方式。假如你是李华，请选择一种你喜欢的学习方式进行阐述并提出你认为的不足之处。80~100词。
Different students like different ways to study. Personally, I would rather
审题指导：
1. 体裁：议论文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：以第一人称为主
写作框架：
优秀范文：
Different students like different ways to study. Personally, I would rather study alone.
First, when I study alone, I can make a personal learning plan ① so that I know what to learn. Second, I will learn more quietly because there’s no one disturbing me. Third, it can help me improve my self-control ability ② because I have to depend on myself. What’s more, it can also help me form the habit of thinking ③.
However, it also has disadvantages. For example, when I don’t understand a question, I can’t discuss it with my classmates. ④
I hope everyone can find the best way to learn.
亮点词块
① make a personal learning plan
制订个人学习计划
② improve one’s self-control ability
提高自控力
③ form the habit of thinking
养成思考的习惯
高分句子
④ ...when I don’t understand a question, I can’t discuss it with my classmates.（when引导时间状语从句）……当我不懂一个问题时，我就不能和我的同学们讨论它。
答案
Different students like different ways to study. Personally, I would rather study alone.
First, when I study alone, I can make a personal learning plan so that I know what to learn. Second, I will learn more quietly because there's no one disturbing me. Third, it can help me improve my self-control ability and form the habit of thinking.
However, it also has disadvantages. When I don't understand a question, I can't discuss it with my classmates in time.
I hope everyone can find the best way to learn.
First, when I study alone, I can make a personal learning plan so that I know what to learn. Second, I will learn more quietly because there's no one disturbing me. Third, it can help me improve my self-control ability and form the habit of thinking.
However, it also has disadvantages. When I don't understand a question, I can't discuss it with my classmates in time.
I hope everyone can find the best way to learn.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务：以李华的身份选择一种学习方式（本题选择独自学习），阐述其优点并指出不足，词数80-100，体裁为议论文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称用第一人称。写作思路：1. 开篇点明选择独自学习；2. 分点阐述独自学习的优点（运用指定亮点词块）；3. 指出独自学习的不足；4. 收尾呼吁找到适合自己的学习方式。
【解析】按照写作框架，先开篇点题：Personally, I would rather study alone. 接着用First/Second/Third分述优点：First, when I study alone, I can make a personal learning plan so that I know what to learn. Second, I will learn more quietly because there's no one disturbing me. Third, it can help me improve my self-control ability and form the habit of thinking. 然后转折写不足：However, it also has disadvantages. When I don't understand a question, I can't discuss it with my classmates in time. 最后收尾：I hope everyone can find the best way to learn. 全程时态统一为一般现在时，人称用第一人称，运用指定亮点词块，结构清晰，符合要求。
【答案】Different students like different ways to study. Personally, I would rather study alone.
First, when I study alone, I can make a personal learning plan so that I know what to learn. Second, I will learn more quietly because there's no one disturbing me. Third, it can help me improve my self-control ability and form the habit of thinking.
However, it also has disadvantages. When I don't understand a question, I can't discuss it with my classmates in time.
I hope everyone can find the best way to learn.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般现在时运用、常用短语搭配
【点评】本文结构清晰，开篇点题，分点阐述优点逻辑明确，不足指出合理，运用指定亮点词块，符合议论文体裁要求，时态和人称正确，词数达标，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照写作框架，先开篇点题：Personally, I would rather study alone. 接着用First/Second/Third分述优点：First, when I study alone, I can make a personal learning plan so that I know what to learn. Second, I will learn more quietly because there's no one disturbing me. Third, it can help me improve my self-control ability and form the habit of thinking. 然后转折写不足：However, it also has disadvantages. When I don't understand a question, I can't discuss it with my classmates in time. 最后收尾：I hope everyone can find the best way to learn. 全程时态统一为一般现在时，人称用第一人称，运用指定亮点词块，结构清晰，符合要求。
【答案】Different students like different ways to study. Personally, I would rather study alone.
First, when I study alone, I can make a personal learning plan so that I know what to learn. Second, I will learn more quietly because there's no one disturbing me. Third, it can help me improve my self-control ability and form the habit of thinking.
However, it also has disadvantages. When I don't understand a question, I can't discuss it with my classmates in time.
I hope everyone can find the best way to learn.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般现在时运用、常用短语搭配
【点评】本文结构清晰，开篇点题，分点阐述优点逻辑明确，不足指出合理，运用指定亮点词块，符合议论文体裁要求，时态和人称正确，词数达标，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
