三、书面表达。
假设你叫李华,你们学校校报正在征稿,主题为“My Family”,请根据下面的思维导图用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。

写作要求:词数60个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Family
My name is Li Hua.
假设你叫李华,你们学校校报正在征稿,主题为“My Family”,请根据下面的思维导图用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。
写作要求:词数60个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Family
My name is Li Hua.
答案
My name is Li Hua. There are four people in my family—my parents, my sister and me. My father is an English teacher in my school. His students like him very much. My mother is a doctor in a big hospital. She likes sports very much. My sister is a nurse. She looks after the old in an old people's home. I'm a student in No. 1 Middle School.
I have a happy family and I love my family.
I have a happy family and I love my family.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“My Family”,需从思维导图中提取核心信息:家庭成员有父母、姐姐和自己,分别对应父亲是英语老师(在自己学校)、母亲是医生(喜欢运动)、姐姐是护士(在养老院)、自己是第一中学学生。开头已给出,需补充这些信息,最后可添加对家庭的情感表达,确保词数符合要求,语言通顺自然。
【解析】先介绍家庭的成员数量及构成,接着依次介绍每位家庭成员的职业、相关地点或爱好,最后说明自己的身份,再加上对家庭的喜爱之情,整合思维导图的所有要点,用正确的英语句式连贯表达,注意语法准确,词数控制在要求范围内。
【答案】My name is Li Hua. There are four people in my family—my parents, my sister and me. My father is an English teacher in my school. His students like him very much. My mother is a doctor in a big hospital. She likes sports very much. My sister is a nurse. She looks after the old in an old people's home. I'm a student in No. 1 Middle School.
I have a happy family and I love my family.
【知识点】英语书面表达、家庭成员介绍
【点评】本题根据思维导图信息完成短文写作,考查学生信息提取、整合及英语表达能力,贴近学生生活,难度适中,易于学生上手完成。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】先介绍家庭的成员数量及构成,接着依次介绍每位家庭成员的职业、相关地点或爱好,最后说明自己的身份,再加上对家庭的喜爱之情,整合思维导图的所有要点,用正确的英语句式连贯表达,注意语法准确,词数控制在要求范围内。
【答案】My name is Li Hua. There are four people in my family—my parents, my sister and me. My father is an English teacher in my school. His students like him very much. My mother is a doctor in a big hospital. She likes sports very much. My sister is a nurse. She looks after the old in an old people's home. I'm a student in No. 1 Middle School.
I have a happy family and I love my family.
【知识点】英语书面表达、家庭成员介绍
【点评】本题根据思维导图信息完成短文写作,考查学生信息提取、整合及英语表达能力,贴近学生生活,难度适中,易于学生上手完成。
【难度系数】0.6
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