B. 书面表达
51. 假如你是Danny,你的中国同学李丽即将结束她在你们学校为期一年的交换生生活。为此,你打算本周六晚上在你家给她举办一场送别聚会。请结合上文两位同学给Sally写的邀请信,根据以下要点提示,在你们班级群里留言,邀请你们班其他同学参加本次聚会。内容包括:
(1)对李丽的评价;
(2)举办此次聚会的原因;
(3)希望同学们来参加聚会并表演节目。
注意:
(1)可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)不能照抄原文,文中不得出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名;
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。
51. 假如你是Danny,你的中国同学李丽即将结束她在你们学校为期一年的交换生生活。为此,你打算本周六晚上在你家给她举办一场送别聚会。请结合上文两位同学给Sally写的邀请信,根据以下要点提示,在你们班级群里留言,邀请你们班其他同学参加本次聚会。内容包括:
(1)对李丽的评价;
(2)举办此次聚会的原因;
(3)希望同学们来参加聚会并表演节目。
注意:
(1)可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)不能照抄原文,文中不得出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名;
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。
答案
51. 参考范文:
Hi, everyone,
You must know our classmate Li Li. In my eyes, she's so nice. She studies very hard. And she's always glad to help others. I learnt more about Chinese culture from her. Sadly, she's going back to China. To show how much we'll miss her, I'll have a surprise party for her at my home this Saturday evening. Can you come? If you can, please help think of some games to play. And if you can put on some shows at the party, that will be great.
Let me know if you want to come. I'm looking forward to your coming.
Danny
Hi, everyone,
You must know our classmate Li Li. In my eyes, she's so nice. She studies very hard. And she's always glad to help others. I learnt more about Chinese culture from her. Sadly, she's going back to China. To show how much we'll miss her, I'll have a surprise party for her at my home this Saturday evening. Can you come? If you can, please help think of some games to play. And if you can put on some shows at the party, that will be great.
Let me know if you want to come. I'm looking forward to your coming.
Danny
解析
【分析】
本题是班级群留言类书面表达,需围绕三个核心要点写作:一是评价李丽(可从学习态度、乐于助人等角度);二是说明举办聚会的原因(李丽交换生期满回国,表达不舍);三是邀请同学参加并希望表演节目。写作时要贴合班级群的友好语境,适当拓展细节,控制词数,不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头打招呼,明确班级群语境;
2. 评价李丽:结合其学习努力、乐于助人、帮助了解中国文化等特点展开;
3. 说明聚会原因:李丽即将回国,为表达不舍举办家庭聚会;
4. 发出邀请:邀请同学参加,希望能准备节目;
5. 结尾询问意向,表达期待。
【答案】
Hi, everyone,
You must know our classmate Li Li. In my eyes, she's so nice. She studies very hard. And she's always glad to help others. I learnt more about Chinese culture from her. Sadly, she's going back to China. To show how much we'll miss her, I'll have a surprise party for her at my home this Saturday evening. Can you come? If you can, please help think of some games to play. And if you can put on some shows at the party, that will be great.
Let me know if you want to come. I'm looking forward to your coming.
Danny
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、邀请类书面表达
【点评】
本题结合学生真实生活场景,考察邀请类应用文写作能力,要求涵盖指定要点并适当拓展,贴近学生日常,易于构思与表达,能有效考察学生英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是班级群留言类书面表达,需围绕三个核心要点写作:一是评价李丽(可从学习态度、乐于助人等角度);二是说明举办聚会的原因(李丽交换生期满回国,表达不舍);三是邀请同学参加并希望表演节目。写作时要贴合班级群的友好语境,适当拓展细节,控制词数,不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头打招呼,明确班级群语境;
2. 评价李丽:结合其学习努力、乐于助人、帮助了解中国文化等特点展开;
3. 说明聚会原因:李丽即将回国,为表达不舍举办家庭聚会;
4. 发出邀请:邀请同学参加,希望能准备节目;
5. 结尾询问意向,表达期待。
【答案】
Hi, everyone,
You must know our classmate Li Li. In my eyes, she's so nice. She studies very hard. And she's always glad to help others. I learnt more about Chinese culture from her. Sadly, she's going back to China. To show how much we'll miss her, I'll have a surprise party for her at my home this Saturday evening. Can you come? If you can, please help think of some games to play. And if you can put on some shows at the party, that will be great.
Let me know if you want to come. I'm looking forward to your coming.
Danny
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、邀请类书面表达
【点评】
本题结合学生真实生活场景,考察邀请类应用文写作能力,要求涵盖指定要点并适当拓展,贴近学生日常,易于构思与表达,能有效考察学生英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
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