典例研析
根据收集的旅游景点信息,给朋友写一封邮件,70词左右。内容需包含:
1. 景点的名称和位置
2. 景点的特色景观(Things to see)
3. 游客可以参与的活动(Things to do)
4. 个人对景点的评价(感受/推荐理由)
根据收集的旅游景点信息,给朋友写一封邮件,70词左右。内容需包含:
1. 景点的名称和位置
2. 景点的特色景观(Things to see)
3. 游客可以参与的活动(Things to do)
4. 个人对景点的评价(感受/推荐理由)
答案
Dear Mike,
I want to tell you a fantastic place to visit — the West Lake. It is in Hangzhou. You can see clear blue lakes, green hills and different kinds of ancient bridges there. You can go boating on the lake or take a walk around the lake park. It is really beautiful and relaxing, and I strongly recommend you come here for a trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
I want to tell you a fantastic place to visit — the West Lake. It is in Hangzhou. You can see clear blue lakes, green hills and different kinds of ancient bridges there. You can go boating on the lake or take a walk around the lake park. It is really beautiful and relaxing, and I strongly recommend you come here for a trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求写一封70词左右的邮件推荐旅游景点,需覆盖四个核心要点:景点名称与位置、特色景观、游客可参与的活动、个人评价。解题思路:先选取熟悉的景点(如西湖),按“点明景点信息→描述特色景观→说明可参与活动→表达个人推荐理由”的逻辑组织内容,同时注意邮件格式(称呼、落款),控制词数,使用简单准确的英语表达。
【解析】
1. 开头用邮件称呼点明推荐的景点及位置;2. 介绍景点的特色景观;3. 说明游客可参与的活动;4. 表达个人对景点的评价并发出推荐;最后添加邮件落款,确保内容符合要求且词数达标。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I want to tell you a fantastic place to visit — the West Lake. It is in Hangzhou. You can see clear blue lakes, green hills and different kinds of ancient bridges there. You can go boating on the lake or take a walk around the lake park. It is really beautiful and relaxing, and I strongly recommend you come here for a trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、旅游话题英语表达、要点式写作
【点评】
本题是英语写作的常规题型,围绕旅游话题考查学生的应用文格式掌握和要点整合能力,要求学生将指定的四个内容连贯融入邮件,语言难度适中,贴近学生日常学习场景,适合中等水平学生完成。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求写一封70词左右的邮件推荐旅游景点,需覆盖四个核心要点:景点名称与位置、特色景观、游客可参与的活动、个人评价。解题思路:先选取熟悉的景点(如西湖),按“点明景点信息→描述特色景观→说明可参与活动→表达个人推荐理由”的逻辑组织内容,同时注意邮件格式(称呼、落款),控制词数,使用简单准确的英语表达。
【解析】
1. 开头用邮件称呼点明推荐的景点及位置;2. 介绍景点的特色景观;3. 说明游客可参与的活动;4. 表达个人对景点的评价并发出推荐;最后添加邮件落款,确保内容符合要求且词数达标。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I want to tell you a fantastic place to visit — the West Lake. It is in Hangzhou. You can see clear blue lakes, green hills and different kinds of ancient bridges there. You can go boating on the lake or take a walk around the lake park. It is really beautiful and relaxing, and I strongly recommend you come here for a trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、旅游话题英语表达、要点式写作
【点评】
本题是英语写作的常规题型,围绕旅游话题考查学生的应用文格式掌握和要点整合能力,要求学生将指定的四个内容连贯融入邮件,语言难度适中,贴近学生日常学习场景,适合中等水平学生完成。
【难度系数】
0.6
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