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Ⅲ.写作任务
请根据以下表格信息，写一篇短文，阐述Sunshine Town的变化以及你对这些变化的看法。
| Sunshine Town | In the past | Now |
| --- | --- | --- |
| Environment | natural and beautiful | modern |
| Transport | bicycles |
a new railway,new highways,buses,taxis |
| People | lived in old houses | move into new flats in tall buildings |
| ... | ... | ... |
要求:1.短文应包括所有写作要点,可适当发挥；
2.词数:80-120词。
◆思路点拨
◆词句积累
1.引出主题
阳光镇发生了巨大的变化。
2.过去的城镇
过去,这里满目自然风光,景色优美。
人们出行都骑自行车,住在老旧的小房子里。
3.现在的城镇
如今,这座小镇变得现代化了许多。
这里新建了一条铁路和高速公路。
4.总结升华
这座小镇既保留了原本的美景,又变得更加生机勃勃。
◆自我创作
◆自我评价
请你简单描述自己作品的亮点和不足：
请根据以下表格信息，写一篇短文，阐述Sunshine Town的变化以及你对这些变化的看法。
| Sunshine Town | In the past | Now |
| --- | --- | --- |
| Environment | natural and beautiful | modern |
| Transport | bicycles |
a new railway,new highways,buses,taxis || People | lived in old houses | move into new flats in tall buildings |
| ... | ... | ... |
要求:1.短文应包括所有写作要点,可适当发挥；
2.词数:80-120词。
◆思路点拨
◆词句积累
1.引出主题
阳光镇发生了巨大的变化。
2.过去的城镇
过去,这里满目自然风光,景色优美。
人们出行都骑自行车,住在老旧的小房子里。
3.现在的城镇
如今,这座小镇变得现代化了许多。
这里新建了一条铁路和高速公路。
4.总结升华
这座小镇既保留了原本的美景,又变得更加生机勃勃。
◆自我创作
◆自我评价
请你简单描述自己作品的亮点和不足：
答案
【词句积累】
1. Great changes have taken place in Sunshine Town.
2. In the past,it was full of natural beauty.
People rode bicycles everywhere and lived in small old houses.
3. The town is much more modern now.
A new railway and new highways have been built.
4. The town not only keeps its beauty but also becomes more lively.
【自我创作】
One possible version:
Great changes have taken place in Sunshine Town.
In the past,it was full of natural beauty. People rode bicycles everywhere and lived in small old houses. Life was simple and quiet back then.
However, the town is much more modern now. A new railway and new highways have been built. Besides buses and taxis, people can travel around more easily. Also, most people have moved into bright new flats in tall buildings.
I love the new look of Sunshine Town. These wonderful changes bring people a better life. The town not only keeps its beauty but also becomes more lively.
1. Great changes have taken place in Sunshine Town.
2. In the past,it was full of natural beauty.
People rode bicycles everywhere and lived in small old houses.
3. The town is much more modern now.
A new railway and new highways have been built.
4. The town not only keeps its beauty but also becomes more lively.
【自我创作】
One possible version:
Great changes have taken place in Sunshine Town.
In the past,it was full of natural beauty. People rode bicycles everywhere and lived in small old houses. Life was simple and quiet back then.
However, the town is much more modern now. A new railway and new highways have been built. Besides buses and taxis, people can travel around more easily. Also, most people have moved into bright new flats in tall buildings.
I love the new look of Sunshine Town. These wonderful changes bring people a better life. The town not only keeps its beauty but also becomes more lively.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务是阐述Sunshine Town的变化及个人看法，需覆盖表格中环境、交通、居住的过去与现在要点。第一步：用引出主题的句子点明阳光镇发生巨大变化；第二步：描述过去的环境、交通、居住情况，可补充过去生活状态丰富内容；第三步：对应表格写现在的现代化变化，补充出行便利的细节；第四步：总结对变化的看法，呼应主题，控制词数在80-120之间。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：用指定引出句点明核心，即阳光镇发生巨大变化；
2. 过去部分：结合表格，描述过去环境自然美丽、交通靠自行车、居住在老房子，补充过去生活简单安静的细节；
3. 现在部分：对应表格，写现在小镇更现代化，新建铁路和高速，公交、出租车让出行更便利，人们住进高楼里的新公寓；
4. 结尾：表达对变化的喜爱，总结小镇既保留美景又更有生机，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Great changes have taken place in Sunshine Town.
In the past, it was full of natural beauty. People rode bicycles everywhere and lived in small old houses. Life was simple and quiet back then.
However, the town is much more modern now. A new railway and new highways have been built. Besides buses and taxis, people can travel around more easily. Also, most people have moved into bright new flats in tall buildings.
I love the new look of Sunshine Town. These wonderful changes bring people a better life. The town not only keeps its beauty but also becomes more lively.
【知识点】
英语短文写作；时态运用
【点评】
该作文涵盖所有写作要点，结构清晰，时态准确，适当补充细节丰富内容，符合词数要求，清晰阐述了阳光镇的变化及个人看法，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作任务是阐述Sunshine Town的变化及个人看法，需覆盖表格中环境、交通、居住的过去与现在要点。第一步：用引出主题的句子点明阳光镇发生巨大变化；第二步：描述过去的环境、交通、居住情况，可补充过去生活状态丰富内容；第三步：对应表格写现在的现代化变化，补充出行便利的细节；第四步：总结对变化的看法，呼应主题，控制词数在80-120之间。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：用指定引出句点明核心，即阳光镇发生巨大变化；
2. 过去部分：结合表格，描述过去环境自然美丽、交通靠自行车、居住在老房子，补充过去生活简单安静的细节；
3. 现在部分：对应表格，写现在小镇更现代化，新建铁路和高速，公交、出租车让出行更便利，人们住进高楼里的新公寓；
4. 结尾：表达对变化的喜爱，总结小镇既保留美景又更有生机，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Great changes have taken place in Sunshine Town.
In the past, it was full of natural beauty. People rode bicycles everywhere and lived in small old houses. Life was simple and quiet back then.
However, the town is much more modern now. A new railway and new highways have been built. Besides buses and taxis, people can travel around more easily. Also, most people have moved into bright new flats in tall buildings.
I love the new look of Sunshine Town. These wonderful changes bring people a better life. The town not only keeps its beauty but also becomes more lively.
【知识点】
英语短文写作；时态运用
【点评】
该作文涵盖所有写作要点，结构清晰，时态准确，适当补充细节丰富内容，符合词数要求，清晰阐述了阳光镇的变化及个人看法，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
