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第三节 书面表达（共15分）
你校英语节将举办以“我的收藏”为主题的英语展示活动。请根据以下内容提示，写一篇记叙文，介绍你的一件收藏，分享给全校同学。
1. 你的收藏是什么；
2. 它的特点和由来；
3. 讲述一个与它相关的故事。
要求：1. 可在内容要点的基础上适当发挥；
2. 词数60左右。
My Collection and Me
On my desk sits a small thing that always makes me smile. It is not expensive, but it means the world to me.
你校英语节将举办以“我的收藏”为主题的英语展示活动。请根据以下内容提示，写一篇记叙文，介绍你的一件收藏，分享给全校同学。
1. 你的收藏是什么；
2. 它的特点和由来；
3. 讲述一个与它相关的故事。
要求：1. 可在内容要点的基础上适当发挥；
2. 词数60左右。
My Collection and Me
On my desk sits a small thing that always makes me smile. It is not expensive, but it means the world to me.
答案
My Collection and Me
On my desk sits a small thing that always makes me smile. It is not expensive, but it means the world to me.
It is a blue bookmark from the Palace Museum. There is a gold dragon on it, and it looks very cool. The dragon has big eyes and a long body. I love it. I got it two years ago when I visited Beijing with my parents. My dad bought the bookmark for me in the gift shop. He said, “Books are your friends, and this dragon will guard them.”
Now I use it every day. When I read books, I see the dragon. It makes me think of that great trip and my dad’s words. This small gift brings me big joy.
On my desk sits a small thing that always makes me smile. It is not expensive, but it means the world to me.
It is a blue bookmark from the Palace Museum. There is a gold dragon on it, and it looks very cool. The dragon has big eyes and a long body. I love it. I got it two years ago when I visited Beijing with my parents. My dad bought the bookmark for me in the gift shop. He said, “Books are your friends, and this dragon will guard them.”
Now I use it every day. When I read books, I see the dragon. It makes me think of that great trip and my dad’s words. This small gift brings me big joy.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“我的收藏”，要求写记叙文，需涵盖三个要点：收藏是什么、特点和由来、相关故事，词数60左右。解题思路：先选择有个人纪念意义的小收藏（如故宫书签，贴近学生生活），再按要点组织内容：①点明收藏物品；②描述其特点与来历；③讲述相关故事，最后调整语言确保通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 确定核心收藏：选择有纪念意义的故宫蓝色书签，符合主题且易展开故事；
2. 按要点组织内容：①点明收藏：It is a blue bookmark from the Palace Museum；②特点与由来：描述书签上的金龙图案，说明是两年前和父母去北京时爸爸在礼品店购买，爸爸的寄语；③相关故事：日常使用书签时想起旅行和爸爸的话，带来快乐；
3. 调整语句，确保通顺，词数达标。
【答案】
My Collection and Me
On my desk sits a small thing that always makes me smile. It is not expensive, but it means the world to me.
It is a blue bookmark from the Palace Museum. There is a gold dragon on it, and it looks very cool. The dragon has big eyes and a long body. I love it. I got it two years ago when I visited Beijing with my parents. My dad bought the bookmark for me in the gift shop. He said, “Books are your friends, and this dragon will guard them.”
Now I use it every day. When I read books, I see the dragon. It makes me think of that great trip and my dad’s words. This small gift brings me big joy.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、要点式书面表达、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本题为英语书面表达题，围绕“我的收藏”主题，要求涵盖指定内容要点，考查学生的英语叙事能力和语言组织能力，贴近学生生活实际，便于学生结合自身经历完成写作。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“我的收藏”，要求写记叙文，需涵盖三个要点：收藏是什么、特点和由来、相关故事，词数60左右。解题思路：先选择有个人纪念意义的小收藏（如故宫书签，贴近学生生活），再按要点组织内容：①点明收藏物品；②描述其特点与来历；③讲述相关故事，最后调整语言确保通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 确定核心收藏：选择有纪念意义的故宫蓝色书签，符合主题且易展开故事；
2. 按要点组织内容：①点明收藏：It is a blue bookmark from the Palace Museum；②特点与由来：描述书签上的金龙图案，说明是两年前和父母去北京时爸爸在礼品店购买，爸爸的寄语；③相关故事：日常使用书签时想起旅行和爸爸的话，带来快乐；
3. 调整语句，确保通顺，词数达标。
【答案】
My Collection and Me
On my desk sits a small thing that always makes me smile. It is not expensive, but it means the world to me.
It is a blue bookmark from the Palace Museum. There is a gold dragon on it, and it looks very cool. The dragon has big eyes and a long body. I love it. I got it two years ago when I visited Beijing with my parents. My dad bought the bookmark for me in the gift shop. He said, “Books are your friends, and this dragon will guard them.”
Now I use it every day. When I read books, I see the dragon. It makes me think of that great trip and my dad’s words. This small gift brings me big joy.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、要点式书面表达、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本题为英语书面表达题，围绕“我的收藏”主题，要求涵盖指定内容要点，考查学生的英语叙事能力和语言组织能力，贴近学生生活实际，便于学生结合自身经历完成写作。
【难度系数】
0.7
